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Jan 20 07 9:14 PM

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Mehek fizaon main bikhar gai
Zindagi ki raah main bhatak gai
Aake thaam le ai humnasheen
Tamanna jeene ki kho gai

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

Bewafaai ka chalan chod de
Aa dil se dil mila bhi le
Kyon bhatak raha hai bewajha
Ab sans bhi teri thak gai

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...
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Jan 21 07 2:05 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 20, 2007 09:14 pm)
Mehek fizaon main bikhar gai
Zindagi ki raah main bhatak gai
Aake thaam le ai humnasheen
Tamanna jeene ki kho gai

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

Bewafaai ka chalan chod de
Aa dil se dil mila bhi le
Kyon bhatak raha hai bewajha
Ab sans bhi teri thak gai

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...

aarzoo bahut dard hai aapke kalaam mein, dil ko cheer kar rakh deta hai dard ka ehsaas. yunhi likhti rahyiga. God bless you.

ankhon ke ashk dil ki zubaan ban jate hain
dard hadh se badh jaye toh ghazal ban jate hain

nira

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Jan 21 07 6:28 PM

aarzoo didi salaam aur namskaar

aarzoo didi dard bhere alfaz aapke dil meiN utar gaye aapko paRhna bahot achha lagta hai aur kuch sikhne ko bhi milta hai mujhe k kis tarha se jazbaatoN ko achhe se bayaaN kareN

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

ye lines mujhe pasaNd aayi

dua karta huN khuda apako khuSh rakheN

apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijazat


aapka shaitaan
dhaval

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Jan 21 07 6:55 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 20, 2007 09:14 pm)
Mehek fizaon main bikhar gai
Zindagi ki raah main bhatak gai
Aake thaam le ai humnasheen
Tamanna jeene ki kho gai

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

Bewafaai ka chalan chod de
Aa dil se dil mila bhi le
Kyon bhatak raha hai bewajha
Ab sans bhi teri thak gai

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...

AARZOO JI


BAHUT KHUB

AHSAS KO BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA BAHUT GAHRAI HE

AANKHE NUM HO GAYI



SADA KHUSH RAHE

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Jan 22 07 2:42 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ January 21, 2007 02:05 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 20, 2007 09:14 pm)
Mehek fizaon main bikhar gai
Zindagi ki raah main bhatak gai
Aake thaam le ai humnasheen
Tamanna jeene ki kho gai

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza  dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

Bewafaai ka chalan chod de
Aa dil se dil mila bhi le
Kyon bhatak raha hai bewajha
Ab sans bhi teri thak gai

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...

aarzoo bahut dard hai aapke kalaam mein, dil ko cheer kar rakh deta hai dard ka ehsaas. yunhi likhti rahyiga. God bless you.

ankhon ke ashk dil ki zubaan ban jate hain
dard hadh se badh jaye toh ghazal ban jate hain

nira

bohot khoobsurat baat likhi hoo niraaaaaaaaaaa....dil khush hogaya hai...kitna khoobsurat sher likha hai...shukriyaa dost mera sath dene ke liye...god bless.


jab pyaar hojaai to ghazal likhte hai
jab deedar ho jaai to ghazal likhte hai
jab bichadne lage to ghazal likhte hai
akhri sans tak lamhon ka izhaar karte hai

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Jan 22 07 5:45 AM

salam ddjaan,

dard bhera ehsaas...
Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

very beautiful ddjaan.

God Bless

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Jan 22 07 5:05 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ January 21, 2007 06:55 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 20, 2007 09:14 pm)
Mehek fizaon main bikhar gai
Zindagi ki raah main bhatak gai
Aake thaam le ai humnasheen
Tamanna jeene ki kho gai

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza  dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

Bewafaai ka chalan chod de
Aa dil se dil mila bhi le
Kyon bhatak raha hai bewajha
Ab sans bhi teri thak gai

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...

AARZOO JI


BAHUT KHUB

AHSAS KO BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA BAHUT GAHRAI HE

AANKHE NUM HO GAYI



SADA KHUSH RAHE

bohot bohot shukriyaa shakun sis...god bless for reading it.

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Jan 23 07 10:28 AM

QUOTE (Anushka @ January 22, 2007 05:45 am)
salam ddjaan,

dard bhera ehsaas...
Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

very beautiful ddjaan.

God Bless

w.salaam beta..khush raho..yunhi sath banaai rakhna.

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Jan 25 07 10:06 AM

Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...



behad khoobsurat...............


Pyaar hai magar us mein bhi dard ek tanhai hai
Na jaane kyu ab tak mujh par ye ghum ki parchai hai
Dil rota hai ae mere humdum din raat tere liye
Fir bhi tere liye is dil se hamesha sada hi aayi hai


Aese hi kuch ehsaas aapki rachna mein padhne ko mile


Sada khush rahe

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Jan 25 07 7:06 PM

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

aarzoo ji ko raj ka salaam or aapke kalaam ko bhii sajda karte hain.....bhut hii pyara sa kalaam pesh kiya aapne.......aapki kalam aaj kal gazab dhaa rahi hai.....meri dil se daad hazir hai.....yun hii karam farmati rahiyega......raj.......

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Jan 26 07 4:42 AM

QUOTE (DHAVAL @ January 21, 2007 06:28 pm)
aarzoo didi salaam aur namskaar

aarzoo didi dard bhere alfaz aapke dil meiN utar gaye aapko paRhna bahot achha lagta hai aur kuch sikhne ko bhi milta hai mujhe k kis tarha se jazbaatoN ko achhe se bayaaN kareN

Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

ye lines mujhe pasaNd aayi

dua karta huN khuda apako khuSh rakheN

apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijazat


aapka shaitaan
dhaval

bohot bohot shukriyaa dhaval...acha lagta hai jab apne mera kalaam itne pyaar se padhte aur samajhte hai....god bless.

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Jan 26 07 5:02 AM

QUOTE

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza  dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai






wah Aarzoo ji pehli baar aapko padh rahi hoon aur saach maniye dil ko
chu gaya har ek shabd..

daad hazir hai ji..

god bless u

Manisha

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Jan 26 07 10:41 AM

QUOTE (Manisha @ January 26, 2007 05:02 am)
QUOTE

Qaid main hai aarzoo
Kis jurm ki saza  dii gai
Bandishon main hai hasratein
Kaisi sazawaar zindagi ho gai






wah Aarzoo ji pehli baar aapko padh rahi hoon aur saach maniye dil ko
chu gaya har ek shabd..

daad hazir hai ji..

god bless u

Manisha

bohot bohot shukriyaa manisha..mera kalaam padhne ke liye...aate rehna kyonke aap sab ke pyaar se hausla milta hai kuch likhne ka...

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Jan 27 07 1:34 PM

QUOTE (Diggaj @ January 25, 2007 10:06 am)
Aa panaah le tu baahon main
Mat duur jaa tu jaan-o-tan
Aa zindagi tujhe bula rahi
Tere ishq main sadaa de gai...



behad khoobsurat...............


Pyaar hai magar us mein bhi dard ek tanhai hai
Na jaane kyu ab tak mujh par ye ghum ki parchai hai
Dil rota hai ae mere humdum din raat tere liye
Fir bhi tere liye is dil se hamesha sada hi aayi hai


Aese hi kuch ehsaas aapki rachna mein padhne ko mile


Sada khush rahe

diggajjjjjjjj mere nazm ke ehsaason ko bilkul sahi parkha hai...khushihue ke main jo kehna chahtihun mere bhai ke dil tak pohonchi hai...god bless lil bro..yunhi sath banaai rakhna....

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Jan 29 07 3:09 AM

QUOTE (rajveer @ January 25, 2007 07:06 pm)
Khwahishon ka hai safar
Ranjishon main hun magar
Aake riha kara mujhe
Dil tere giraft main ho gai

aarzoo ji ko raj ka salaam or aapke kalaam ko bhii sajda karte hain.....bhut hii pyara sa kalaam pesh kiya aapne.......aapki kalam aaj kal gazab dhaa rahi hai.....meri dil se daad hazir hai.....yun hii karam farmati rahiyega......raj.......

bohot bohot shukriyaa rajveer...aapka sath yunhi bana rahe....aap sab ke dil tak mera kalaam pohonchta hai..yehi meri khushkismati hai ke mera likhna safal hua hai...god bless.

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