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Jan 13 07 4:37 PM

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hum aaj kya likhe aye mehfil tumhare liye...
ek tumhara naam hi subkuch hai humare liye...

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Doston aksar sochta hun kya likhu ...
kuch naya likhu ya purana likhu...
duniya likhu ya ye aashiyana likhu...
apni khabar ya apna thikana likhu...

ab to lafz bhi nahi milte dard ko humare...
ke jiye jaa rahe hai khamoshi ke sahaare..
aadat ho gayi hai maujho ki shayad hume...
jo aate nahi kareeb ab takdeer ke kinare...

jo wo kehte hai ki kuch badal sa gaya hun...
to kehde tumhe ab kuch samhal sa gaya hun...
gum hai dard hai aur aasoun ke shor hai...
isliye aate nahi ab hum mehfil mein tumhare...

samajta tha ki wo hume apna samjhte honge...
par samajh nahi paye hum kabhi unke ye ishare...
bade shouk se mehfil ko hum apna kehne lage ...
aur wo hi kehte chale hume mehfil mein bechare...

"nitin" tu is mehfil se tu ruth kar kaha jayega...
jahan jayega wahan khud mehfil banjayega...
phir jo rokar dil ka haal sunayega tu kabhi...
to mehfil phir tujhe aur unki yaad dilayega...

wo jinhe yaad kar hum aksar muskurate hai...
logon ko dekho unhe bewafa batate hai...
ye to takdeer hai doston jo hum ek naa hue...
warna pyaar karne wale kahan juda hona chahte hai... sad.gif-->justju/310.gif

.................shukriya ........

Nitin Prakash Khetan

aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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Jan 13 07 5:05 PM

waaaaah nitin aate hi kamaal...kya khoob nazm likhi hai..padh kar dil khush hogaya lekin dua hai ke gamon se duur-duur tak bhi tumhara rishta na ho...zindagi ki HAR KHUSHI MILLE..



lele jo zindagi se milta hai
itna na soch ke zindagi bojh lage
zindagi ka haasil ye gam hi to hai
warna lamha-lamha mushkil sa lage

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Jan 13 07 5:20 PM

NIJIN JI,

BAHUT KHUB LIKHA HAI

APP JI BHI LIKHENGE
HAMA ACHCHHA LAGEGA

SUKRIYA JI

PYAS

Guru kabira ne di hai shikxa
Lalat lagau aise dikxa

kavya jan chetana bane
Guru kabira do aise bhikxa



Meri kavitaye dohri dohri
Syam socho, nikli dupahari

Upar upar doodh, niche rabdi
Nasamajh ki samajh adoori

Grahan kiya jo satya tathya
Har Pyas se ho jaye doori


Arvind Vyas "Pyas"

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Jan 14 07 8:13 PM

ab to lafz bhi nahi milte dard ko humare...
ke jiye jaa rahe hai khamoshi ke sahaare..
aadat ho gayi hai maujho ki shayad hume...
jo aate nahi kareeb ab takdeer ke kinare...

sach kaha hai dost


jo wo kehte hai ki kuch badal sa gaya hun...
to kehde tumhe ab kuch samhal sa gaya hun...
gum hai dard hai aur aasoun ke shor hai...
isliye aate nahi ab hum mehfil mein tumhare...



haan sach kaha hai ki badale nahi hai hum samhal gaye hai


samajta tha ki wo hume apna samjhte honge...
par samajh nahi paye hum kabhi unke ye ishare...
bade shouk se mehfil ko hum apna kehne lage ...
aur wo hi kehte chale hume mehfil mein bechare...

"nitin" tu is mehfil se tu ruth kar kaha jayega...
jahan jayega wahan khud mehfil banjayega...
phir jo rokar dil ka haal sunayega tu kabhi...
to mehfil phir tujhe aur unki yaad dilayega...


wah wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhh jaise dil ke har saaz ko chedh sa diya ho

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Jan 14 07 8:17 PM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ January 13, 2007 04:37 pm)
hum aaj kya likhe aye mehfil tumhare liye...
ek tumhara naam hi subkuch hai humare liye...

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Doston aksar sochta hun kya likhu ...
kuch naya likhu ya purana likhu...
duniya likhu ya ye aashiyana likhu...
apni khabar ya apna thikana likhu...

ab to lafz bhi nahi milte dard ko humare...
ke jiye jaa rahe hai khamoshi ke sahaare..
aadat ho gayi hai maujho ki shayad hume...
jo aate nahi kareeb ab takdeer ke kinare...

jo wo kehte hai ki kuch badal sa gaya hun...
to kehde tumhe ab kuch samhal sa gaya hun...
gum hai dard hai aur aasoun ke shor hai...
isliye aate nahi ab hum mehfil mein tumhare...

samajta tha ki wo hume apna samjhte honge...
par samajh nahi paye hum kabhi unke ye ishare...
bade shouk se mehfil ko hum apna kehne lage ...
aur wo hi kehte chale hume mehfil mein bechare...

"nitin" tu is mehfil se tu ruth kar kaha jayega...
jahan jayega wahan khud mehfil banjayega...
phir jo rokar dil ka haal sunayega tu kabhi...
to mehfil phir tujhe aur unki yaad dilayega...

wo jinhe yaad kar hum aksar muskurate hai...
logon ko dekho unhe bewafa batate hai...
ye to takdeer hai doston jo hum ek naa hue...
warna pyaar karne wale kahan juda hona chahte hai... (<!--emo&:(-->user posted image<!--endemo-->

.................shukriya ........

Nitin Prakash Khetan

NITIN JI

NAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

DAAD HAJIR HE

SADA KHUSH RAHO

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Jan 14 07 8:17 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:05 pm)
waaaaah nitin aate hi kamaal...kya khoob nazm likhi hai..padh kar dil khush hogaya lekin dua hai ke gamon se duur-duur tak bhi tumhara rishta na ho...zindagi ki HAR KHUSHI MILLE..



lele jo zindagi se milta hai
itna na soch ke zindagi bojh lage
zindagi ka haasil ye gam hi to hai
warna lamha-lamha mushkil sa lage

shukriya aarzoo .... i really missed u these days .. many of my postings are waiting for your review.. and where were you these days

aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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Jan 14 07 8:27 PM

aap sabhi ka shukriya ... bohot bohot shukriya...

accha lagta hai jub aaplog yun pyaar bhara reply dete ho..

yedekhdarr bhilagta hai..shayad koi aysi baat naa likhu ki aapka dil tut jaye
....

to gar kabhi ye galti ho to maaf kariyega...

shukriya aapka phir ek baar...

aapka

NITIN PRAKASH KHETAN

aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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Jan 14 07 9:15 PM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ January 13, 2007 04:37 pm)
hum aaj kya likhe aye mehfil tumhare liye...
ek tumhara naam hi subkuch hai humare liye...

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Doston aksar sochta hun kya likhu ...
kuch naya likhu ya purana likhu...
duniya likhu ya ye aashiyana likhu...
apni khabar ya apna thikana likhu...

ab to lafz bhi nahi milte dard ko humare...
ke jiye jaa rahe hai khamoshi ke sahaare..
aadat ho gayi hai maujho ki shayad hume...
jo aate nahi kareeb ab takdeer ke kinare...

jo wo kehte hai ki kuch badal sa gaya hun...
to kehde tumhe ab kuch samhal sa gaya hun...
gum hai dard hai aur aasoun ke shor hai...
isliye aate nahi ab hum mehfil mein tumhare...

samajta tha ki wo hume apna samjhte honge...
par samajh nahi paye hum kabhi unke ye ishare...
bade shouk se mehfil ko hum apna kehne lage ...
aur wo hi kehte chale hume mehfil mein bechare...

"nitin" tu is mehfil se tu ruth kar kaha jayega...
jahan jayega wahan khud mehfil banjayega...
phir jo rokar dil ka haal sunayega tu kabhi...
to mehfil phir tujhe aur unki yaad dilayega...

wo jinhe yaad kar hum aksar muskurate hai...
logon ko dekho unhe bewafa batate hai...
ye to takdeer hai doston jo hum ek naa hue...
warna pyaar karne wale kahan juda hona chahte hai... (<!--emo&:(-->user posted image<!--endemo-->

.................shukriya ........

Nitin Prakash Khetan

wonderful to read...............keep up

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Jan 15 07 9:57 AM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ January 13, 2007 04:37 pm)
hum aaj kya likhe aye mehfil tumhare liye...
ek tumhara naam hi subkuch hai humare liye...

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Doston aksar sochta hun kya likhu ...
kuch naya likhu ya purana likhu...
duniya likhu ya ye aashiyana likhu...
apni khabar ya apna thikana likhu...

ab to lafz bhi nahi milte dard ko humare...
ke jiye jaa rahe hai khamoshi ke sahaare..
aadat ho gayi hai maujho ki shayad hume...
jo aate nahi kareeb ab takdeer ke kinare...

jo wo kehte hai ki kuch badal sa gaya hun...
to kehde tumhe ab kuch samhal sa gaya hun...
gum hai dard hai aur aasoun ke shor hai...
isliye aate nahi ab hum mehfil mein tumhare...

samajta tha ki wo hume apna samjhte honge...
par samajh nahi paye hum kabhi unke ye ishare...
bade shouk se mehfil ko hum apna kehne lage ...
aur wo hi kehte chale hume mehfil mein bechare...

"nitin" tu is mehfil se tu ruth kar kaha jayega...
jahan jayega wahan khud mehfil banjayega...
phir jo rokar dil ka haal sunayega tu kabhi...
to mehfil phir tujhe aur unki yaad dilayega...

wo jinhe yaad kar hum aksar muskurate hai...
logon ko dekho unhe bewafa batate hai...
ye to takdeer hai doston jo hum ek naa hue...
warna pyaar karne wale kahan juda hona chahte hai... (<!--emo&:(-->user posted image<!--endemo-->

.................shukriya ........

Nitin Prakash Khetan

hello nitin ......!

wah wah.......... justju/rose.gif

bahut aacha likha hai, har lafaz dil mai.n utter gaya....! yu hi likhtey rahiye aur humey aapney jazbaatoN se wakif karvatey rahiye.....


god bless u

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usde raaha.n vich palka vichavaNngi,
dukh daahde te zind.di malook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda"

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Hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......"

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