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Jan 19 07 8:45 PM

QUOTE (sunita varinder singh @ January 18, 2007 10:05 am)
wah wah.....bahut khoob...pyarey bhai aapke liye yeh phool... justju/rose.gif

dear dheer, sach kahu to aapko bher mai.n likhtey dekh bahut kushi hue, ek ek lafaz napa-tula hai...dil ko bhaa gaye aapki yeh gazal...bahut pasans aaya aapka bher mai.n likhna...yu hi aagey badtey raho...!

duao ke saath
aapki dii

Namaskaar didi!!!
khushnaseeb hai hum to ..ki humaari tarakki se khush hone wale azeezo mein aapkaa naam bhi shaamil ho gayaa !! bahut bahut shukriyaa.... aage bhii koshish jaari rahegi!!

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Jan 20 07 3:16 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ January 18, 2007 09:23 pm)
waah dheer saheb waah....ye tehreer...ki instantly abhi isi waqt main...Gun guna sakta hoon...bahoot khoob dost.....aapke shabdoN ko apni kalam se main yuiN likhna chahoonga.....Ek sher barbas hi nikalta sooz raha hai....


Kaisi mehfil kaisa ghar sab yuiN hi baithe idher udher
tum hote jab bhi paas mere saki bhi uljhe jaooN kidher






Harash

kyaa khoob sher kahaa hai Sahab!!!! Aise hi mujh par inaayat karte rahiyegaa ... kuchh aapse bhi gyaan milta rahe rahe to kyaa kahne!! yakinan aapki salaah aur suzaav mere fayde ke honge!!
Bahut Bahut shukriyaa!!!

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