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Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo" main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...
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Jan 13 07 8:01 AM

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

bahut achha hai arzoo wapis aa gayeen? kitna akela ho jata hai pariwar jab tum nahee hoteen sabhee ashar intzar karte hain tumhara aur ye gazal bahut achee banee hai bahut khoobsoorat
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Jan 13 07 8:20 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo" main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

Wowwwwwww Aarzoo pahle toh welcome back dosttttttttt miseed you so much.

Aate hi itni zabardast rachna pesh ki padh kar dil roya bhi ek dard ko mehsoos bhi kiya. kalaam daad ke kabil hai par dard mein daad nikalti nahi dear.

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

har sher khub likha hai. yunhi likhti rahna. Dua karti sari duniya ki khushiyan aapki ho jaain

nira

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Jan 13 07 8:26 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo" main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

aaarzoo....tumhare kalam ki kya tariff ki jaye aur kaise ki jaye ......din per din muskil hota ja raha hai...... bahut khoob likha hai........

tumhare bina to ye parivaar aisa ho jata hai ki kafile mein chalna aur bahut muskeraker hasate hasate chalne mein jo anter hota hai..........safer dono hi kat jate hai....lakin kaise kat-te hai vo rahi janta hai....

luv
archana

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Jan 13 07 10:43 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo"  main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

AARZOOJI


BAHUT KHUB

AHSAS KO BAHUT HI ACHE SABDO ME PIROA

DAAD HAJIR HE


DIL KO CHOOOOOOOOOO GAYA


AAP KE AAJANE SE BAHUT ACHA LAG RAHA HE

AAP AAYE BAHAR AAYI, AAP KE BINA KUMI LAGTI HE


SADA KHUSH RAHE MERI AARZOO BAHANA

HUME ISH PARIVAR KO AAGE HE BADHANA justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Jan 13 07 5:12 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ January 13, 2007 08:01 am)
Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

bahut achha hai arzoo wapis aa gayeen? kitna akela ho jata hai pariwar jab tum nahee hoteen sabhee ashar intzar karte hain tumhara aur ye gazal bahut achee banee hai bahut khoobsoorat
Anil

bohot bohot shukriya anil..ye aap sab ka pyaar hai jo mere dil ko bandhe rakha hai is parivar se....bas dua hai ke akhri lamhe tak is mehfil se mera sath rahe...yunhi sath nibhate rahiye...god bless.

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Jan 13 07 7:21 PM

AARZOO JI,

BAHUT KHUB LIKHA HAI

Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

SAMAY ME SAMA GAYA SAB KUCHH
MAJBOOR THA, BAS RAHA GUPCHUP


SUKRIYA ITANI ACHCHHE KALAM PADHANE KE LIYA

ARVIND "PYAS"

Guru kabira ne di hai shikxa
Lalat lagau aise dikxa

kavya jan chetana bane
Guru kabira do aise bhikxa



Meri kavitaye dohri dohri
Syam socho, nikli dupahari

Upar upar doodh, niche rabdi
Nasamajh ki samajh adoori

Grahan kiya jo satya tathya
Har Pyas se ho jaye doori


Arvind Vyas "Pyas"

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Jan 13 07 8:09 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ January 13, 2007 08:20 am)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo"  main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

Wowwwwwww Aarzoo pahle toh welcome back dosttttttttt miseed you so much.

Aate hi itni zabardast rachna pesh ki padh kar dil roya bhi ek dard ko mehsoos bhi kiya. kalaam daad ke kabil hai par dard mein daad nikalti nahi dear.

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

har sher khub likha hai. yunhi likhti rahna. Dua karti sari duniya ki khushiyan aapki ho jaain

nira

nira main ne bhi bohot miss kiya tumhe aur sabko...pata hai ye kalaam main ne kal raat train main likhi hai...raat ke andhere main jab khamoshi chaai aur mand mand hawa main dil bohot roya mera...bas ussi waqt main ne ye likha hai...kissi ki yaad bohot sata rahi thi...well this is life dear...beherhaal jab tak sansein hai jeena hai...khush raho.

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Jan 13 07 8:29 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo" main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

sweet one............a pleasure to read.

Afzal Chowdhry

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Jan 14 07 3:01 AM

QUOTE (archana @ January 13, 2007 08:26 am)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo"  main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

aaarzoo....tumhare kalam ki kya tariff ki jaye aur kaise ki jaye ......din per din muskil hota ja raha hai...... bahut khoob likha hai........

tumhare bina to ye parivaar aisa ho jata hai ki kafile mein chalna aur bahut muskeraker hasate hasate chalne mein jo anter hota hai..........safer dono hi kat jate hai....lakin kaise kat-te hai vo rahi janta hai....

luv
archana

archiiiiiiiiiiii itna pyaar kahaan se sanbhalun.......main bhi kahaan jeeti hun tum sab se dur rehkar...bohot khushi hoti hai jab tum sab ke beech rehti hun......dard kuch pal ke liye mujh se duur rehta hai...yunhi apna sath banaai rakhna...god bless.

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Jan 14 07 3:45 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ January 13, 2007 10:43 am)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo"  main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

AARZOOJI


BAHUT KHUB

AHSAS KO BAHUT HI ACHE SABDO ME PIROA

DAAD HAJIR HE


DIL KO CHOOOOOOOOOO GAYA


AAP KE AAJANE SE BAHUT ACHA LAG RAHA HE

AAP AAYE BAHAR AAYI, AAP KE BINA KUMI LAGTI HE


SADA KHUSH RAHE MERI AARZOO BAHANA

HUME ISH PARIVAR KO AAGE HE BADHANA justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

bohot bohot shukriya shakun sis..ye aapka pyaar hai jo mujhe is parivar se bandhe hue rakha hai....yunhi sath dete rehna...

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Jan 14 07 4:15 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ January 13, 2007 05:51 am)
Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

Ishq ki raahon main hai dushwariyan
Issi soch main doobe khayalaat rahe

Tere waadon ki kadiyaan hai kitni kamzor
Kache dhaagon jaise teri har baat rahe

Raat ke ghane saaye main tanha main akeli
Sath mere teri yaadon ki saughaat rahe

Zindagi ke falsafe hai kitne pechide
Kaash zindagi main koi karamaat rahe

Manzilon ki "aarzoo" main nikal padi thi
Simat ke raahon main saari kaainaat rahe...

bahoot khuub Arzoo ji...... aapne to kamal hi likha hai....... tooooo gud.... justju/icon_clap.gif



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samet loon sari umr ki khushiyan ek pal main....
kaash aisi bas ek mulqaat rahe......


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Jan 15 07 1:00 PM

wowwwwwwww kia kaha hay aapnay after long time me reading you

ghayal gazal koh padhnay ka sakun alahad hay

keep Penning down

God bless you

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Jan 15 07 6:21 PM

QUOTE (AngelAmit @ January 13, 2007 07:12 pm)
Aarzoo di welcome back ...... acha laga aapko padna

Keep them coming

bohot bohot shukriya amitttttt...yunhi sath banaai rehna..god bless.

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Jan 16 07 2:53 PM

QUOTE (pyas @ January 13, 2007 07:21 pm)
AARZOO JI,

BAHUT KHUB LIKHA HAI

Na hi tujh main wo jazbaat rahe
Na hi tujh main wo ehsasaat rahe

Dil ajab kashmakash main mubtela raha
Zehan main kai unsuljhe sawalaat rahe

SAMAY ME SAMA GAYA SAB KUCHH
MAJBOOR THA, BAS RAHA GUPCHUP


SUKRIYA ITANI ACHCHHE KALAM PADHANE KE LIYA

ARVIND "PYAS"

Arvind jee aap ne mere kalam ke liye waqt nikala iska tahe dil se shukriyaa...aur itne khoobsurat sher se iska jawaab diya...bilkul sach likha hai...


SAMAY ME SAMA GAYA SAB KUCHH
MAJBOOR THA, BAS RAHA GUPCHUP


waqt ki sitamgari to dekhiye
zakhm bhi deta hai aur zubaan chup
see liya labon ko kuch kehne se
rooh zakhmi hai aur nigaah chup

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Jan 16 07 9:04 PM

Aadab Aarzu!

Aapke kalaam ki taareef me wahi ghise-pite alfaaz istemaal karte hue achchha to nahin lagta ,phir bhi kehna to padega ki waakai behtareen ghazal hai.Beautiful!!

Sirf ek maamooli si kami hai--Beher ki.Yaqeenan beher pe command haasil karna ek ghazal likhne me sabse dushwaar kaam hai.Mai khud isi se sabse zyada pareshan hota hun, jab koi ghazal likhta hun.

Still u have portrayed remarkable efficiency at handling this demon called "beher".
Keep writing.Ur poetry motivates novices like me!!

Take care.

Rashid...

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Jan 16 07 10:58 PM

QUOTE (chaman @ January 16, 2007 09:04 pm)
Aadab Aarzu!

Aapke kalaam ki taareef me wahi ghise-pite alfaaz istemaal karte hue achchha to nahin lagta ,phir bhi kehna to padega ki waakai behtareen ghazal hai.Beautiful!!

Sirf ek maamooli si kami hai--Beher ki.Yaqeenan beher pe command haasil karna ek ghazal likhne me sabse dushwaar kaam hai.Mai khud isi se sabse zyada pareshan hota hun, jab koi ghazal likhta hun.

Still u have portrayed remarkable efficiency at handling this demon called "beher".
Keep writing.Ur poetry motivates novices like me!!

Take care.

rashid dil ko behad massarat milli hai ke aapko meri ye adna si koshish pasand aai hai...ab likhne ka maza aaiga...yunhi sath dete rahiyega...chalte chalte shayad koi aisa kalaam likh dun..jo zindagi ka haasil ban jaai...khush rahen.

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