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Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Dec 22 06 1:26 PM

my dear frnd medha

pehle to tahe dil se shukriya k aap yaha aayi welcome !!

mainkya kahu ab iske baremein iski tarif to main pehle hi kar chuka hun bas itan hi kahunga k apki soch bahot hi gehri hai jo ehsas kalaam ko umda bannepar majbur kar deti hai aur ye sach hai bahot achha laga apki ye rachna dkeh kar aad hazir hain

khus raho budhau

aapka dost
dhaval

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Dec 22 06 1:33 PM

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what to say

romantic feelings and style is amezing wording are too good

i am shocked by your first stunning poem.

ik line yiaad aa gai

chhand merah dil chandnee hay tu
tujhsay dur ab jaaonnga kaha


chand kah kia khoob lafzoh may piroya hay


God bless you
Mah




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Dec 22 06 1:45 PM

QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

BAHUT KHUB


AHSAS KO ITANE SABDO ME LIKHA HE justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

AAPKO PAHLI BAR PADHA HE

BAHUT ACHA LIKHA

LIKHTE RAHANA

SADA KHUSH RAHE justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Dec 23 06 12:03 AM

Medha ji...aapka tah-e-dil se swagat hai parivar mein

aapki pehli rachna...bahut hi khoobsurat..Chand aur chandni..wah! bahut acha laga aapko padhkar....ek pyara sa ehsas...komal shabd..bahut khoob!

umeed hai aap humein mauka dengi aage bhi aapko padhne ka

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Dec 23 06 4:32 AM

QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 07:48 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

Pyari Madhaji,

Aapkay alfaz pedhker asa laga kay apnay chand ka noor zamin per phelah diya
hai.
Looking forward to reading you more.
God Belss:)

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Dec 23 06 4:17 PM

QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

bohot khoob medhaaa aate hi apne pehle kalaam se sab ka dil moh liya hai...first let me welcome u to this lovely family..hope to read more of ur kalaam...

hmmmmm ab aapke kalaam ki kya tarif karun..bas itna hi kahungi chand aur chandi ke sath poora insaaf kiya hai..aise kuch nai dastaan sunne ko muntazir ye dil...take care n God bless.

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Jun 24 07 5:59 PM

QUOTE (DHAVAL @ December 22, 2006 01:26 pm)
my dear frnd medha

pehle to tahe dil se shukriya k aap yaha aayi welcome !!

mainkya kahu ab iske baremein iski tarif to main pehle hi kar chuka hun bas itan hi kahunga k apki soch bahot hi gehri hai jo ehsas kalaam ko umda bannepar majbur kar deti hai aur ye sach hai bahot achha laga apki ye rachna dkeh kar aad hazir hain

khus raho budhau

aapka dost
dhaval

sorry dhaval bahut late reply kar rhi hun shukriya padhane ke liye

budhau

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:02 PM

QUOTE (mah @ December 22, 2006 01:33 pm)
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what to say

romantic feelings and style is amezing wording are too good

i am shocked by your first stunning poem.

ik line yiaad aa gai

chhand merah dil chandnee hay tu
tujhsay dur ab jaaonnga kaha


chand kah kia khoob lafzoh may piroya hay


God bless you
Mah

shukriya mah ji or sorry bhi itana late reply de rhi hun aapke reply ka

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:04 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ December 22, 2006 01:45 pm)
QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

BAHUT KHUB


AHSAS KO ITANE SABDO ME LIKHA HE justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

AAPKO PAHLI BAR PADHA HE

BAHUT ACHA LIKHA

LIKHTE RAHANA

SADA KHUSH RAHE justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

shukriya shakun ji padhane ke liye or sorry itana late reply de rhi hun

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:06 PM

QUOTE (ek_wafa @ December 23, 2006 12:03 am)
Medha ji...aapka tah-e-dil se swagat hai parivar mein

aapki pehli rachna...bahut hi khoobsurat..Chand aur chandni..wah! bahut acha laga aapko padhkar....ek pyara sa ehsas...komal shabd..bahut khoob!

umeed hai aap humein mauka dengi aage bhi aapko padhne ka

shukriya ek wafa ji or sorry aapko itna late reply kar rhi hun

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:08 PM

QUOTE (Anushka @ December 23, 2006 04:32 am)
QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 07:48 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

Pyari Madhaji,

Aapkay alfaz pedhker asa laga kay apnay chand ka noor zamin per phelah diya
hai.
Looking forward to reading you more.
God Belss:)

shukriya anushka ji yu hi padhte rhiye

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:09 PM

QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

namaskar medha ji

kya baat hai bhut khub likha hai
aap ko padna bhut aachaa raha medha ji likhte rahe

subhi sher ek se bad ke ek hai

wonder full dear


keep writing and keep smiling


sirftum

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किया जिसने मुझ पर ख़ुद से ज़्यादा भरोसा
बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Jun 24 07 6:10 PM

QUOTE (AngelAmit @ December 23, 2006 08:53 am)
Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai


Too good ...... dil ko chu gaya

shukriya amit ji aapko meri koshish pasand aayi yu hi padhate rhiye

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:12 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ December 23, 2006 04:17 pm)
QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

bohot khoob medhaaa aate hi apne pehle kalaam se sab ka dil moh liya hai...first let me welcome u to this lovely family..hope to read more of ur kalaam...

hmmmmm ab aapke kalaam ki kya tarif karun..bas itna hi kahungi chand aur chandi ke sath poora insaaf kiya hai..aise kuch nai dastaan sunne ko muntazir ye dil...take care n God bless.

shukriya aarzoo ji aapko meri pahli koshish pasand aayi tu hi padhate rhiye

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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Jun 24 07 6:14 PM

QUOTE (sirftum @ June 24, 2007 06:09 pm)
QUOTE (medha_jain3 @ December 22, 2006 01:18 pm)
Is family me ye meri pahli post hai ummid karti hun aap sabhi ko pasand aayegi,
aapke response ka intzar rahega


Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko

Is deewane ka ishq samjhna mushkil hai
Khud jalta hai chandani ke intzar me
Ya jalata hai chandani ko intzar me

Koi purana aahiq sa lagta hai kabhi
To kabhi diljala sa lagta hai
Na jane kis hisab se chandani se pyar kiya karta hai

Kabhi badlo ke piche se chhup chhup
Chandni ka deedar kiya karta hai
To kabhi na aakar chandani ko saja e ishq bhi diya karta hai

Ajab si kahani hai is deewane ki
Rota nahi magar fir bhi dekhiye
Shabnam se iske ashqo ka hisab mila karta hai

Khabar na lage chandani ko usake jaane ki
Isliye hi shayad wo apana dard chhipa
Dhire dhire muskura kar ojhal hua karta hai

Chand ka deewanapan to dekhiye
Aafatab to abhi talak gaya bhi nahi
Ki wo aa gaye bewaqt chandani ke deedar ko



MEDHA JAIN

namaskar medha ji

kya baat hai bhut khub likha hai
aap ko padna bhut aachaa raha medha ji likhte rahe

subhi sher ek se bad ke ek hai

wonder full dear


keep writing and keep smiling


sirftum

shukriya sirf tum ji ab aap apna nam bata dete to jyada better tha baki sirf "aap hi aap" ho jaoge

yu hi padhate rhiye

medha

[SIZE=7]"chalo bant lete hai "tum" or"mai" ko,
dekhate hai kab talak sath rhate hai fir"

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