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Dec 22 06 11:34 AM

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Main kab se yahan khadha hoon.
Kabhi dhoop mein toh kabhi
Barish se lada hoon.
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon

Ek beej ka roop tha mera
Aaj padh ban kar khadha hoon
Har mausam ko dekha hai maine.
Pathjhad ko bhi jhela hoon

Panchi ke gharonde banete
Unko ujadhte dekhta hoon
Musafiron ko chaaya deta hoon
Dilon ki baatain suntan hoon

Kabhi pyaar ki baat sunta hoon
Toh kabhi taqrar sunta hoon.
Kabhi choron maal chupate
Pate dekhta hoon.

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon

Nira
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Dec 22 06 12:07 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 22, 2006 11:34 am)
Main kab se yahan khadha hoon.
Kabhi dhoop mein toh kabhi
Barish se lada hoon.
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon

Ek beej ka roop tha mera
Aaj padh ban kar khadha hoon
Har mausam ko dekha hai maine.
Pathjhad ko bhi jhela hoon

Panchi ke gharonde banete
Unko ujadhte dekhta hoon
Musafiron ko chaaya deta hoon
Dilon ki baatain suntan hoon

Kabhi pyaar ki baat sunta hoon
Toh kabhi taqrar sunta hoon.
Kabhi choron maal chupate
Pate dekhta hoon.

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon

Nira

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Dec 22 06 12:10 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 22, 2006 11:34 am)
Main kab se yahan khadha hoon.
Kabhi dhoop mein toh kabhi
Barish se lada hoon.
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon

Ek beej ka roop tha mera
Aaj padh ban kar khadha hoon
Har mausam ko dekha hai maine.
Pathjhad ko bhi jhela hoon

Panchi ke gharonde banete
Unko ujadhte dekhta hoon
Musafiron ko chaaya deta hoon
Dilon ki baatain suntan hoon

Kabhi pyaar ki baat sunta hoon
Toh kabhi taqrar sunta hoon.
Kabhi choron maal chupate
Pate dekhta hoon.

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon

Nira

Nice one!!! Aapke is kalaam se mujhe ek serial yaad aagaya!! jismein ped bolta tha... u might have seen tht "Neem Ka Ped"

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Dec 22 06 12:17 PM

nira ji ko dhaval ka namskaar

wah nira ji kya baat kahi hai aapne apaki soch wakhei main umda hai apane aaj ek ped ki soch ko bayan karke dil ko khus ho gaya jee bahot hi sachhahi hai isme ek ped kya scohta hai har pal ue aapki peshkasko padh ke mehsus kar sakte hai hum sab log aur apaki is peshkas mese kuch lines mere dil ko chhu gaui jo main yaha niche darsha raha hun

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon


bahot hi khub aur bahot hi sahi

ek sher arz karta hun jo zehen me aa gaya mere

naam likhte haiN aur naam mitte haiN
ped to bas yuhiN beZubaaN khade rehte haiN


daad hazir hai kubul kijiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

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Dec 22 06 12:30 PM

ek drakh kee kahane bahut achee tarah se bayan kee hai nira tumahree har kavita andar dil tak jatee hai aur ye baat bahut badee hai

Anil

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Dec 22 06 9:32 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ December 22, 2006 12:07 pm)
QUOTE (Misty @ December 22, 2006 11:34 am)
Main kab se yahan khadha hoon.
Kabhi dhoop mein toh kabhi
Barish se lada hoon.
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon

Ek beej ka roop tha mera
Aaj padh ban kar khadha hoon
Har mausam ko dekha hai maine.
Pathjhad ko bhi jhela hoon

Panchi ke gharonde banete
Unko ujadhte dekhta hoon
Musafiron ko chaaya deta hoon
Dilon ki baatain suntan hoon

Kabhi pyaar ki baat sunta hoon
Toh kabhi taqrar sunta hoon.
Kabhi choron maal chupate
Pate dekhta hoon.

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon

Nira

NIRA


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BAHUT HI GAHRAI HE KALAM ME

AHSAS KO ITANE ACHE SABDO ME PIROYA

DAAD HAJIR HE

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Shakun ji,

Aapko yeh rang acha laga shukriya sis, janti hoon aapka saath mila rahega. ek baar fir se thanks.

nira

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Dec 22 06 9:37 PM

QUOTE (dheer @ December 22, 2006 12:10 pm)
QUOTE (Misty @ December 22, 2006 11:34 am)
Main kab se yahan khadha hoon.
Kabhi dhoop mein toh kabhi
Barish se lada hoon.
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon

Ek beej ka roop tha mera
Aaj padh ban kar khadha hoon
Har mausam ko dekha hai maine.
Pathjhad ko bhi jhela hoon

Panchi ke gharonde banete
Unko ujadhte dekhta hoon
Musafiron ko chaaya deta hoon
Dilon ki baatain suntan hoon

Kabhi pyaar ki baat sunta hoon
Toh kabhi taqrar sunta hoon.
Kabhi choron maal chupate
Pate dekhta hoon.

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon

Nira

Nice one!!! Aapke is kalaam se mujhe ek serial yaad aagaya!! jismein ped bolta tha... u might have seen tht "Neem Ka Ped"

Dheer ji.

naam zaroor yaad hai, par batain bhul gayin hoon. aapko achi lagi racha , shukriya, yunhi yahan saath dete rahiyega.

nira

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Dec 23 06 12:00 AM

wah! wah!

ek ped ki kahani
ussi ki zubani....wah!

Nira ji.....bahut khoob!.....
magar akhir mein ussi ped ko kaat dete hain jo itne saalon se unhe sirf de hi raha hai bina kuch mange badle mein

jo itne salon se khada hai..har mausam se lad hai...ek din ussi ko kaat denge kehkar ki ye raah mei khada hai..hamare liye musibat bana hai..

maaf kijiyega....mai jara aage nikal gayi...

khoobsurat rachna par daad qabool kijiyega!

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Dec 23 06 5:09 AM

QUOTE (DHAVAL @ December 22, 2006 12:17 pm)
nira ji ko dhaval ka namskaar

wah nira ji kya baat kahi hai aapne apaki soch wakhei main umda hai apane aaj ek ped ki soch ko bayan karke dil ko khus ho gaya jee bahot hi sachhahi hai isme ek ped kya scohta hai har pal ue aapki peshkasko padh ke mehsus kar sakte hai hum sab log aur apaki is peshkas mese kuch lines mere dil ko chhu gaui jo main yaha niche darsha raha hun

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon


bahot hi khub aur bahot hi sahi

ek sher arz karta hun jo zehen me aa gaya mere

naam likhte haiN aur naam mitte haiN
ped to bas yuhiN beZubaaN khade rehte haiN


daad hazir hai kubul kijiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

Dhaval ji aapko yeh nazm pasand aahi mera likhna safal huya. aap sab ka saath bahut himmat deta hai. aapki daad ka shukriya.

nira

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Dec 23 06 5:13 AM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ December 22, 2006 12:30 pm)
ek drakh kee kahane bahut achee tarah se bayan kee hai nira tumahree har kavita andar dil tak jatee hai aur ye baat bahut badee hai

Anil

anil ji aapko yeh rachna pasand aayi thanks ji iske liye. waise bhi aapne sab kavitayon ka saath diya hai.

nira

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