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Mehfil humare juda hone pe sajayi thi rasmo ne...
haste labo ko rula diya dekh babul teri kasmo ne...


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Title: Babul Aur Betiyan
By: Nitin Prakash Khetan

..............Doston Aaj wo likhne jaa raha hun jis rishte ki ehsaas hume abhi tak nahi hai... lekin ab talak jo dekh ke samajh paya hun use humare lafzon mein hum sajane ki koshish kar rahe hai.... Aage aap hi kahiye ki aapko kaisa laga...

Doston ise mein 4 stages mein likh raha hun... 1st.. betiyon ki bachpan ka hai... 2nd... unki jawani ka.... 3rd sagai ke baad aur ... 4th bidayi ka...
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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bachpan justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............


Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Jawani justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kuch Rishton ko nibhane aage bachpan se chale...............
...................shayad phir wo bachpan hume khwabo mein mile..............


wo bachpan ki teri bitto rani wo gudde aur gudiyon ki kahani...
aye khuda lautade ab wo jamane wo chutpan ki yadie suhani...

kuch banne ki chahat kuch karne ki hazaron khwahishe humari...
muskurate hue unhe hardam pura kar dene ki wo aadat tumhari...
doston ke sath ghumte hue tu aksar hume jub yaad aata tha....
wo aksar puchte rehte the magar juba khamosh ho jata tha...

jub bhi nikalte the kadam gahar se tera naam sath rehta tha..
sambhalna mein amanat hun teri har kadam hume kehta tha...
par is zamane ke nazar ko dekh kar aksar hume bura lagta tha...
par un logon ke nazar se jyada khyaal tere naam ka rehta tha...

yaad hai har raat hume sota dekh kar wo sone ki aadat teri...
aur tujhse dur hone ki palon ki nazdikiyon pe wo siskiya meri...
is jiwan ki hakikat hai ye tune hume bachpan mein sikhaya tha...
yehi sochkar to humne aksar bhige palko se muskuraya tha...

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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Sagayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kitne majboor aaj ye tumhare humare haalat hai.................
...................Hum to muskurade, magar gum bhare jazbaat hai................


tujhse dur hone ki khabar pe log jashn manate hai...
in duriyon ka jo dard hume hoga wo bhool jate hai...
aur aap bhi majburion se pare unhe gale lagate hai...
mehfil yuhi hasti rahe soch hum bhi muskurate hai...

jaanti hun mein SAGAYI naye rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai...
par yaad rakh babul wo humare rishte ke baad hoti hai...
tune sikhaya hai rishte banana ab paraya karne chale...
use bhi teri dua samajhke hum pehlu mein bharne lage...

phir wo log apne rishte nibhate hai hume ek naya naam dejate hai...
waqt unse mangkar aap hume har rishton ko nibhana sikhate hai...
ye kar, wo naa karna, unke har baat ko unka aashirwad samajhna....
khushi aur gam jivan ki rit hai, unhe aangan ki dehliz tak rakhna...

kash ke babul mein choti hi hoti...
bekhouf teri bahon mein soti...

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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bidayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................


............le jaa rahe hai log hume tere se daman churake.............
.............tu rokle hume aaj ek baar in rasmo ko bhulake.............


nibhane chali naye bandhan aur teri baatein yaad aati hai...
aur tu mujhe juda kar raha hai sochke aankhe dub jati hai...
phir bhi jo tune sikhaya use jindagi mein bhul nahi paungi...
par dur hokar bhi mein phool tere is aangan ki kehlaungi...

JUB JUB YAAD AAYEGI HUME TERI YE DIL DUB JAYEGA...
TERI BAHON MEIN BITA HUME BACHPAN YAAD AAYEGA...
KYA DARD HAI IS JUDAYI KA YE KAUN SAMAJH PAYEGA...
BAS JAMANA IS JUDAYEE PE EK NAYA JASHN MANAYEGA...


......................................................thanks doston itna waqt dene ke liye...............


aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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Dec 22 06 4:46 AM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ December 22, 2006 02:58 am)
Mehfil humare juda hone pe sajayi thi rasmo ne...
haste labo ko rula diya dekh babul teri kasmo ne...


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Title: Babul Aur Betiyan
By: Nitin Prakash Khetan

..............Doston Aaj wo likhne jaa raha hun jis rishte ki ehsaas hume abhi tak nahi hai... lekin ab talak jo dekh ke samajh paya hun use humare lafzon mein hum sajane ki koshish kar rahe hai.... Aage aap hi kahiye ki aapko kaisa laga...

Doston ise mein 4 stages mein likh raha hun... 1st.. betiyon ki bachpan ka hai... 2nd... unki jawani ka.... 3rd sagai ke baad aur ... 4th bidayi ka...
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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bachpan justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............


Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Jawani justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kuch Rishton ko nibhane aage bachpan se chale...............
...................shayad phir wo bachpan hume khwabo mein mile..............


wo bachpan ki teri bitto rani wo gudde aur gudiyon ki kahani...
aye khuda lautade ab wo jamane wo chutpan ki yadie suhani...

kuch banne ki chahat kuch karne ki hazaron khwahishe humari...
muskurate hue unhe hardam pura kar dene ki wo aadat tumhari...
doston ke sath ghumte hue tu aksar hume jub yaad aata tha....
wo aksar puchte rehte the magar juba khamosh ho jata tha...

jub bhi nikalte the kadam gahar se tera naam sath rehta tha..
sambhalna mein amanat hun teri har kadam hume kehta tha...
par is zamane ke nazar ko dekh kar aksar hume bura lagta tha...
par un logon ke nazar se jyada khyaal tere naam ka rehta tha...

yaad hai har raat hume sota dekh kar wo sone ki aadat teri...
aur tujhse dur hone ki palon ki nazdikiyon pe wo siskiya meri...
is jiwan ki hakikat hai ye tune hume bachpan mein sikhaya tha...
yehi sochkar to humne aksar bhige palko se muskuraya tha...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Sagayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kitne majboor aaj ye tumhare humare haalat hai.................
...................Hum to muskurade, magar gum bhare jazbaat hai................


tujhse dur hone ki khabar pe log jashn manate hai...
in duriyon ka jo dard hume hoga wo bhool jate hai...
aur aap bhi majburion se pare unhe gale lagate hai...
mehfil yuhi hasti rahe soch hum bhi muskurate hai...

jaanti hun mein SAGAYI naye rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai...
par yaad rakh babul wo humare rishte ke baad hoti hai...
tune sikhaya hai rishte banana ab paraya karne chale...
use bhi teri dua samajhke hum pehlu mein bharne lage...

phir wo log apne rishte nibhate hai hume ek naya naam dejate hai...
waqt unse mangkar aap hume har rishton ko nibhana sikhate hai...
ye kar, wo naa karna, unke har baat ko unka aashirwad samajhna....
khushi aur gam jivan ki rit hai, unhe aangan ki dehliz tak rakhna...

kash ke babul mein choti hi hoti...
bekhouf teri bahon mein soti...

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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bidayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................


............le jaa rahe hai log hume tere se daman churake.............
.............tu rokle hume aaj ek baar in rasmo ko bhulake.............


nibhane chali naye bandhan aur teri baatein yaad aati hai...
aur tu mujhe juda kar raha hai sochke aankhe dub jati hai...
phir bhi jo tune sikhaya use jindagi mein bhul nahi paungi...
par dur hokar bhi mein phool tere is aangan ki kehlaungi...

JUB JUB YAAD AAYEGI HUME TERI YE DIL DUB JAYEGA...
TERI BAHON MEIN BITA HUME BACHPAN YAAD AAYEGA...
KYA DARD HAI IS JUDAYI KA YE KAUN SAMAJH PAYEGA...
BAS JAMANA IS JUDAYEE PE EK NAYA JASHN MANAYEGA...


......................................................thanks doston itna waqt dene ke liye...............

Nitin ji.

aaj aapki is rachna humse humari saanse chin li, betiyon ke dil ke jazbaat aapne is khubi he bandhe ki aise laga yeh muj par hi beet rahi hai.

aapne sach kaha tha ki beti par jo beet.ti hai koi nahi jaan sakta , jab uske umrka har daur gujarta jata hai, aor jo vo sikk apne babul se leti hai, usse nibhane mein apni jaan tak par khel jati hai.

aapki is rachna ko daad dene keliye mere pass shabd hi nahi, bahut hi dilse likha hai aapne. jo seeda humare dil ko choo gaya hai. shukriya apna khayal rakhna.

nira

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Dec 22 06 1:20 PM

nitin
i am speech less now you have touched my heart deeply.
expressive words and full of emotions
seems a girl is writing who has gone through all these

every line is too touchy but the starting shyer what you have written is marvellous


God bless you


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Dec 22 06 9:50 PM

....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............

Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

ek ek sabad bhaut sachha hai
bhaut khoob kaha hai nitin iski ek ek line jaise dil tak khud b khud jaa rahi hai

tumhe padhna bhaut achha laga abhi baki ka bhi padhungi step by step



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Dec 23 06 1:17 AM

aap logon ka shukra gujar hun jo aapne mere kalam ko itna pasand kiya

aage bhi mere sath u hi rahiyega...

aapka apna
NITIN PRAKASH KHETAN

aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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Dec 23 06 1:28 AM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ December 22, 2006 02:58 am)
Mehfil humare juda hone pe sajayi thi rasmo ne...
haste labo ko rula diya dekh babul teri kasmo ne...


-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Title: Babul Aur Betiyan
By: Nitin Prakash Khetan

..............Doston Aaj wo likhne jaa raha hun jis rishte ki ehsaas hume abhi tak nahi hai... lekin ab talak jo dekh ke samajh paya hun use humare lafzon mein hum sajane ki koshish kar rahe hai.... Aage aap hi kahiye ki aapko kaisa laga...

Doston ise mein 4 stages mein likh raha hun... 1st.. betiyon ki bachpan ka hai... 2nd... unki jawani ka.... 3rd sagai ke baad aur ... 4th bidayi ka...
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.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bachpan justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............


Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Jawani justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kuch Rishton ko nibhane aage bachpan se chale...............
...................shayad phir wo bachpan hume khwabo mein mile..............


wo bachpan ki teri bitto rani wo gudde aur gudiyon ki kahani...
aye khuda lautade ab wo jamane wo chutpan ki yadie suhani...

kuch banne ki chahat kuch karne ki hazaron khwahishe humari...
muskurate hue unhe hardam pura kar dene ki wo aadat tumhari...
doston ke sath ghumte hue tu aksar hume jub yaad aata tha....
wo aksar puchte rehte the magar juba khamosh ho jata tha...

jub bhi nikalte the kadam gahar se tera naam sath rehta tha..
sambhalna mein amanat hun teri har kadam hume kehta tha...
par is zamane ke nazar ko dekh kar aksar hume bura lagta tha...
par un logon ke nazar se jyada khyaal tere naam ka rehta tha...

yaad hai har raat hume sota dekh kar wo sone ki aadat teri...
aur tujhse dur hone ki palon ki nazdikiyon pe wo siskiya meri...
is jiwan ki hakikat hai ye tune hume bachpan mein sikhaya tha...
yehi sochkar to humne aksar bhige palko se muskuraya tha...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Sagayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kitne majboor aaj ye tumhare humare haalat hai.................
...................Hum to muskurade, magar gum bhare jazbaat hai................


tujhse dur hone ki khabar pe log jashn manate hai...
in duriyon ka jo dard hume hoga wo bhool jate hai...
aur aap bhi majburion se pare unhe gale lagate hai...
mehfil yuhi hasti rahe soch hum bhi muskurate hai...

jaanti hun mein SAGAYI naye rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai...
par yaad rakh babul wo humare rishte ke baad hoti hai...
tune sikhaya hai rishte banana ab paraya karne chale...
use bhi teri dua samajhke hum pehlu mein bharne lage...

phir wo log apne rishte nibhate hai hume ek naya naam dejate hai...
waqt unse mangkar aap hume har rishton ko nibhana sikhate hai...
ye kar, wo naa karna, unke har baat ko unka aashirwad samajhna....
khushi aur gam jivan ki rit hai, unhe aangan ki dehliz tak rakhna...

kash ke babul mein choti hi hoti...
bekhouf teri bahon mein soti...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bidayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................


............le jaa rahe hai log hume tere se daman churake.............
.............tu rokle hume aaj ek baar in rasmo ko bhulake.............


nibhane chali naye bandhan aur teri baatein yaad aati hai...
aur tu mujhe juda kar raha hai sochke aankhe dub jati hai...
phir bhi jo tune sikhaya use jindagi mein bhul nahi paungi...
par dur hokar bhi mein phool tere is aangan ki kehlaungi...

JUB JUB YAAD AAYEGI HUME TERI YE DIL DUB JAYEGA...
TERI BAHON MEIN BITA HUME BACHPAN YAAD AAYEGA...
KYA DARD HAI IS JUDAYI KA YE KAUN SAMAJH PAYEGA...
BAS JAMANA IS JUDAYEE PE EK NAYA JASHN MANAYEGA...


......................................................thanks doston itna waqt dene ke liye...............

NITIN JI

BAHUT KHUB justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

AHSAS KO ITANI GAHRAI SE LKHA

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

LADKIYO KI JIDAGI KE HAR PAHLU KO BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

JINDAGI KE IN DOUR SE HUM GUJARE HE

BAHUT HI MUSKL HOTA HE MAA BAAP SE JUDA HONA

HUME AAJ TK VO LAMHA YAAD HE

SADA KHUSH RAHE justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Dec 23 06 4:44 PM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ December 22, 2006 02:58 am)
Mehfil humare juda hone pe sajayi thi rasmo ne...
haste labo ko rula diya dekh babul teri kasmo ne...


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Title:      Babul Aur Betiyan
By:        Nitin Prakash Khetan

..............Doston Aaj wo likhne jaa raha hun jis rishte ki ehsaas hume abhi tak nahi hai... lekin ab talak jo dekh ke samajh paya hun use humare lafzon mein hum sajane ki koshish kar rahe hai.... Aage aap hi kahiye ki aapko kaisa laga...

Doston ise mein 4 stages mein likh raha hun... 1st.. betiyon ki bachpan ka hai... 2nd... unki jawani ka.... 3rd sagai ke baad aur ... 4th bidayi ka...
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bachpan justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............


Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Jawani justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kuch Rishton ko nibhane aage bachpan se chale...............
...................shayad phir wo bachpan hume khwabo mein mile..............


wo bachpan ki teri bitto rani wo gudde aur gudiyon ki kahani...
aye khuda lautade ab wo jamane wo chutpan ki yadie suhani...

kuch banne ki chahat kuch karne ki hazaron khwahishe humari...
muskurate hue unhe hardam pura kar dene ki wo aadat tumhari...
doston ke sath ghumte hue tu aksar hume jub yaad aata tha....
wo aksar puchte rehte the magar juba khamosh ho jata tha...

jub bhi nikalte the kadam gahar se tera naam sath rehta tha..
sambhalna mein amanat hun teri har kadam hume kehta tha...
par is zamane ke nazar ko dekh kar aksar hume bura lagta tha...
par un logon ke nazar se jyada khyaal tere naam ka rehta tha...

yaad hai har raat hume sota dekh kar wo sone ki aadat teri...
aur tujhse dur hone ki palon ki nazdikiyon pe wo siskiya meri...
is jiwan ki hakikat hai ye tune hume bachpan mein sikhaya tha...
yehi sochkar to humne aksar bhige palko se muskuraya tha...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Sagayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................

....................Kitne majboor aaj ye tumhare humare haalat hai.................
...................Hum to muskurade, magar gum bhare jazbaat hai................


tujhse dur hone ki khabar pe log jashn manate hai...
in duriyon ka jo dard hume hoga wo bhool jate hai...
aur aap bhi majburion se pare unhe gale lagate hai...
mehfil yuhi hasti rahe soch hum bhi muskurate hai...

jaanti hun mein SAGAYI naye rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai...
par yaad rakh babul wo humare rishte ke baad hoti hai...
tune sikhaya hai rishte banana ab paraya karne chale...
use bhi teri dua samajhke hum pehlu mein bharne lage...

phir wo log apne rishte nibhate hai hume ek naya naam dejate hai...
waqt unse mangkar aap hume har rishton ko nibhana sikhate hai...
ye kar, wo naa karna, unke har baat ko unka aashirwad samajhna....
khushi aur gam jivan ki rit hai, unhe aangan ki dehliz tak rakhna...

kash ke babul mein choti hi hoti...
bekhouf teri bahon mein soti...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.............................................. justju/rose.gif Bidayee justju/rose.gif ..............................................


............le jaa rahe hai log hume tere se daman churake.............
.............tu rokle hume aaj ek baar in rasmo ko bhulake.............


nibhane chali naye bandhan aur teri baatein yaad aati hai...
aur tu mujhe juda kar raha hai sochke aankhe dub jati hai...
phir bhi jo tune sikhaya use jindagi mein bhul nahi paungi...
par dur hokar bhi mein phool tere is aangan ki kehlaungi...

JUB JUB YAAD AAYEGI HUME TERI YE DIL DUB JAYEGA...
TERI BAHON MEIN BITA HUME BACHPAN YAAD AAYEGA...
KYA DARD HAI IS JUDAYI KA YE KAUN SAMAJH PAYEGA...
BAS JAMANA IS JUDAYEE PE EK NAYA JASHN MANAYEGA...


......................................................thanks doston itna waqt dene ke liye...............

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeeeee my lil friend aate hi apna rang jama diya nitin...ab kyakahun main...sab kuch to tum ne kehdiya..mere liye kehne ko kuch bachaya hi nahi...bohot khoobsurati se bayaan kiya hai har ek rang betiyon ka...Gdod bless u for writing on such a sensitive subject...u have done full justice to the fairies of this world...keep writing god bless.

ye jo betiyaan hai
ghar ki raaniyaan hai
ghar angan mehkati hai
pyaar se rang bikherti hai

koi na toko koi na roko
jeene do inhe apni zindagi
khula aasmaan dedo
aur armaanon ke pankh dedo

jeene ka haq dedo
inke faislon ko maan dedo
na jakdon farz ki bandishon main
khul ke muskuraane paigaam dedo...

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Dec 23 06 6:23 PM

QUOTE (nitin_khetan @ December 22, 2006 02:58 am)
Mehfil humare juda hone pe sajayi thi rasmo ne...
haste labo ko rula diya dekh babul teri kasmo ne...


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Title: Babul Aur Betiyan
By: Nitin Prakash Khetan

..............Doston Aaj wo likhne jaa raha hun jis rishte ki ehsaas hume abhi tak nahi hai... lekin ab talak jo dekh ke samajh paya hun use humare lafzon mein hum sajane ki koshish kar rahe hai.... Aage aap hi kahiye ki aapko kaisa laga...

Doston ise mein 4 stages mein likh raha hun... 1st.. betiyon ki bachpan ka hai... 2nd... unki jawani ka.... 3rd sagai ke baad aur ... 4th bidayi ka...
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....................wo bachpan ki yaadein wo bahon ke mele................
....................tujh bin rahe yon ki mano jindagi se akele...............


Muskurate the lub mere teri bahon ke panahon mein...
yaad hai abbhi wo sukun jo milta tha teri bahon mein...

har lafz teri har baat teri hume jindagi jina sikhati thi ...
aur phir har raat kisson mein teri mein pari ban jati thi...

tere diye naamon mein aksar khud ko pana chahti thi...
mein tera beta hun kehke aksar ye maa ko sunati thi...

par tujhse dur hone ki hakikat ka ehsas rula deta tha ...
mein bas beti hu tere aangan ki ye yaad dila deta tha...

tujhe khuda manti thi aur har dua mein tujhe mangti thi...
wo ek hi dua is dil se thi sachhi ye aankhe bhi jaanti thi...

par hakikat ko chupate hue ye bachpan guarne laga tha...
jamane ki rasmo ke aage humara rishta badalne laga tha...

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....................Kuch Rishton ko nibhane aage bachpan se chale...............
...................shayad phir wo bachpan hume khwabo mein mile..............


wo bachpan ki teri bitto rani wo gudde aur gudiyon ki kahani...
aye khuda lautade ab wo jamane wo chutpan ki yadie suhani...

kuch banne ki chahat kuch karne ki hazaron khwahishe humari...
muskurate hue unhe hardam pura kar dene ki wo aadat tumhari...
doston ke sath ghumte hue tu aksar hume jub yaad aata tha....
wo aksar puchte rehte the magar juba khamosh ho jata tha...

jub bhi nikalte the kadam gahar se tera naam sath rehta tha..
sambhalna mein amanat hun teri har kadam hume kehta tha...
par is zamane ke nazar ko dekh kar aksar hume bura lagta tha...
par un logon ke nazar se jyada khyaal tere naam ka rehta tha...

yaad hai har raat hume sota dekh kar wo sone ki aadat teri...
aur tujhse dur hone ki palon ki nazdikiyon pe wo siskiya meri...
is jiwan ki hakikat hai ye tune hume bachpan mein sikhaya tha...
yehi sochkar to humne aksar bhige palko se muskuraya tha...

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....................Kitne majboor aaj ye tumhare humare haalat hai.................
...................Hum to muskurade, magar gum bhare jazbaat hai................


tujhse dur hone ki khabar pe log jashn manate hai...
in duriyon ka jo dard hume hoga wo bhool jate hai...
aur aap bhi majburion se pare unhe gale lagate hai...
mehfil yuhi hasti rahe soch hum bhi muskurate hai...

jaanti hun mein SAGAYI naye rishte ki buniyaad hoti hai...
par yaad rakh babul wo humare rishte ke baad hoti hai...
tune sikhaya hai rishte banana ab paraya karne chale...
use bhi teri dua samajhke hum pehlu mein bharne lage...

phir wo log apne rishte nibhate hai hume ek naya naam dejate hai...
waqt unse mangkar aap hume har rishton ko nibhana sikhate hai...
ye kar, wo naa karna, unke har baat ko unka aashirwad samajhna....
khushi aur gam jivan ki rit hai, unhe aangan ki dehliz tak rakhna...

kash ke babul mein choti hi hoti...
bekhouf teri bahon mein soti...

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............le jaa rahe hai log hume tere se daman churake.............
.............tu rokle hume aaj ek baar in rasmo ko bhulake.............


nibhane chali naye bandhan aur teri baatein yaad aati hai...
aur tu mujhe juda kar raha hai sochke aankhe dub jati hai...
phir bhi jo tune sikhaya use jindagi mein bhul nahi paungi...
par dur hokar bhi mein phool tere is aangan ki kehlaungi...

JUB JUB YAAD AAYEGI HUME TERI YE DIL DUB JAYEGA...
TERI BAHON MEIN BITA HUME BACHPAN YAAD AAYEGA...
KYA DARD HAI IS JUDAYI KA YE KAUN SAMAJH PAYEGA...
BAS JAMANA IS JUDAYEE PE EK NAYA JASHN MANAYEGA...


......................................................thanks doston itna waqt dene ke liye...............

such tou ye hai ke aap nai jis khoobsoorty sai tamaam advaar ko paish kia ye aap hee ka khasa hai..........main paRhty gayii...........aor phir is shairy main gum see ho ker rah gayii..........bohut sunder...........bohut piayari.........

faqat
meena

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#11 [url]

Dec 23 06 8:54 PM

ji shukriya aap logo ka ki aapne ise itna saraha... apna waqt de kar ise padha...

magar ye mat sochiye ki ye kewal Nira urf MISTY ke liye hai... well yaha unka naam is liye hai kyonki unki ek writing se inspire hoke ye likha maine.. so it was all because of her ki maine ye likha tha...

keep on reading.. GOD BLESS YOU ALL

HOPE TO GIVE YOU GOOD ONES MORE ..

THANKS FOR LIKING

aapke is mehfil ko apne ashkon se sajaunga,
dil ke dard se ek din khuda ko rulaunga

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