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waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira
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Dec 10 06 10:41 PM

nira ji ko mera namksaar
nira ji ek behtrin aur umda rachna aapne sab ke samne bayan ki hai bahot hi achha laga aapko padh ke

aapki is soch keliye dad hazir hain

khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

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Dec 10 06 10:59 PM

Nira ji....aapki kavita pedhte-2 bahut bahut jagah ghoom aayi main.......mere apne hi khayalon ki udaan thi.........aur jab saer karke lauti toh bhi yahi lafz thhey jo sach dikhe...

sadiyon se kehti aayi hai naari ki mujhe jeene do.....mujhe jeene do, aur har pal ek maut marti hai naari........naari mein sehne ki aseem kshmta hai.......naari ki khamoshi ko uski kamzori samjha jata hai.......lekin waqt badla hai......bahut badla hai......lekin abhi bahut baki hai...

ye nahin kehte ki naari ko uncha darza do.....lekin itna toh karo ki usse sath lekar chal sako...

Nira ji.......iss vishay par bahut kehna hai..par abhi itna hai........aapki kavita ne jaise dil ki baat keh di...

shukriya!

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Dec 11 06 12:00 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

NIRAJI

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Dec 11 06 11:45 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

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Dec 12 06 9:59 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

Nira Ji Namaskaar........!

aaj phele baar aapko baar, aur sach maniye aapki yeh rachna dil ko chu gaye, eski tareef karne ko mere paas shawad nahi hai, bas justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

yu hi sachai bayaaN karti rahiye, hum sab aapke saath hai.n


es dil chu lene wale kalaam ke liye meri dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.....!

aapki dost

"Sunita Virender Singh"

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"Sun charkhe di mithi mithi kook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda,
mahiya aayega taaN kushiya manavaNgi,
usde raaha.n vich palka vichavaNngi,
dukh daahde te zind.di malook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda"

"Eh aasmaa.n wale zameen par uttar ke dekh,
Hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......"

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Dec 12 06 10:20 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

namaste neera ji

maine aaj aapko pahli baar pada hai.
bakai main aapne apni kavita ke madhayam se jo aurat ke halat ka chitran pesh kiya hai wo bakai main kabile tarif hai.
neera ji waise to halat bahut had tak badal chuke hain or aaj yada kada hi nari uttpeedan ke mamle nazar aate hain. aur mera esa manna hai ki aaj samajh main badlab ho raha hai. : aaj ki nari ek dam saksham hai wo aaj abla nahi sabla hai."

aur kya kahoon bahut kuch kah gaya shayad.................................
aapki rachan bakai main kabile tarif hai daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye
shukriya

dilip

Jindgii jane ko thii
humen mout ko bula liya
kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya

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Dec 12 06 8:03 PM

bahut sundar likha hai nira parh ek bahut hee achha laga dil ko ander tak chhoo ke gaya hai kalam apna khayal rakahana aur us awaz ko uthatee rahana jise dabaya jata hai
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Dec 13 06 12:05 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

namaskaar moderatoe shaiba.....bahoot khoob...janaab bahoot khoob...kya baat hai........
This is wonderfully said...a message to the persons who thought them to be the way in this poematic ...and graphics you produced in this very context....

How fanatsticaly you are moving towards the nice work.....and binding the minds of the readers....may god help you in all your work.......

I hereby appreciate the views and emotions you sprayed on the atmosphere emerging in our society....anyways....God bless you always

Shayad hum rahe na rahe.....per umeed kerte hain aapki her rachna...is tarah sudrid rahe....



Harash

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Dec 13 06 10:27 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ December 13, 2006 12:05 am)
QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

namaskaar moderatoe shaiba.....bahoot khoob...janaab bahoot khoob...kya baat hai........
This is wonderfully said...a message to the persons who thought them to be the way in this poematic ...and graphics you produced in this very context....

How fanatsticaly you are moving towards the nice work.....and binding the minds of the readers....may god help you in all your work.......

I hereby appreciate the views and emotions you sprayed on the atmosphere emerging in our society....anyways....God bless you always

Shayad hum rahe na rahe.....per umeed kerte hain aapki her rachna...is tarah sudrid rahe....



Harash

Harash ji

Aapke reviews meri rachna ko char chand laga dete hain. hamesha dil mein hasrat rahti hai ki aap inko padhe apni review dain. Dile se shukriya adaa karti hoon. aage bhi unhi saath dete rahiyega. Apna khayal rakhyega.

nira.

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Dec 13 06 9:48 PM

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.



Very Nice..............


Nira jee Namaskaar


Aapki ye jazbaato se bhari rachna ko padhna acha laga...Jo aurat ko kuch nahi samjhta aur sirf khilona samjhta hai wo insaan ho hi sakta...Maa,behan,dost aur jeevansangini sabhi roop ko mein mahan hai aur rahegi....uske jitna dil kisi ka ho hi nahi sakta....kaash sabhi log aesa samjhte


Shukriyah




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Dec 14 06 2:02 AM

QUOTE (Diggaj @ December 13, 2006 09:48 pm)
Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.



Very Nice..............


Nira jee Namaskaar


Aapki ye jazbaato se bhari rachna ko padhna acha laga...Jo aurat ko kuch nahi samjhta aur sirf khilona samjhta hai wo insaan ho hi sakta...Maa,behan,dost aur jeevansangini sabhi roop ko mein mahan hai aur rahegi....uske jitna dil kisi ka ho hi nahi sakta....kaash sabhi log aesa samjhte


Shukriyah

Diggaj

aapko aaj itne dino baad yahan dekha bahut acha laga. muje bahut acha lagta. aap jab yahan aakar review dete hain. dil rota jab beinsaafi hoti hai aurat ke saath. dilki awaaz kagaz par utar aayi. aapko pasand aayi, dilse se shukriya.

apna khayal rakhiyega.

nira.

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Dec 14 06 8:17 AM

nira
nar khilon nahi hai ek haadh maans ka pulta hai jisme ehsaas bhi hai dard bhi hota hai
balki ye kahungi ki jayada hota hai kahan unhe achha lagta hai kisi ka dil dukhana bhle hi unko chot lag jaaye
khud dard sahekar bhi wo dusron ko khushi de jaayengi

naari wo hai jo jisko bhagwaan ka darja milta hai autr milna chahiye

tumne jo likha hai wo kahi na kahi aaj bhi sach mai aazad desh mai ab tak gulaam to hai hi nari




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Dec 15 06 6:02 AM

QUOTE (DHAVAL @ December 10, 2006 10:41 pm)
nira ji ko mera namksaar
nira ji ek behtrin aur umda rachna aapne sab ke samne bayan ki hai bahot hi achha laga aapko padh ke

aapki is soch keliye dad hazir hain

khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

Dhaval ji.

thanks a lot for liking my kalaam and giving good review. it gives me encouragement in writing, when you all are with me.

nira

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Dec 15 06 7:13 AM

QUOTE (shrdh @ December 14, 2006 08:17 am)
nira
nar khilon nahi hai ek haadh maans ka pulta hai jisme ehsaas bhi hai dard bhi hota hai
balki ye kahungi ki jayada hota hai kahan unhe achha lagta hai kisi ka dil dukhana bhle hi unko chot lag jaaye
khud dard sahekar bhi wo dusron ko khushi de jaayengi

naari wo hai jo jisko bhagwaan ka darja milta hai autr milna chahiye

tumne jo likha hai wo kahi na kahi aaj bhi sach mai aazad desh mai ab tak gulaam to hai hi nari

Shrdh

aapka saath yahan paati hoon toh bahut acha lagta hai.

bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapko mera kalam pasand aaya. aor itne ache views diye.

aap sab ka pyaar meri himmat hai. aage bhi saath milta rahe iski iltizaa karti hoon. apna khayal rakhiyega.

nira

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Dec 16 06 3:57 AM

QUOTE (Anushka @ December 10, 2006 10:57 pm)
WAH NIRA,
BAHUT HI SAACH LIKHA HAI. NARI KAY BINA HI KYA HAI SANSAR MEH.

GOD BLESS:)

Anu dear.

thanks aalkal aapke review muje bahut hausla dete hain, janti hoon aap busy hone ke bawzood in par waqt deti ho. itne ache review deti ho. dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.

yunhi saath rahna yahan safar acha kat jayega.

nira.

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Dec 16 06 4:03 AM

QUOTE (ek_wafa @ December 10, 2006 10:59 pm)
Nira ji....aapki kavita pedhte-2 bahut bahut jagah ghoom aayi main.......mere apne hi khayalon ki udaan thi.........aur jab saer karke lauti toh bhi yahi lafz thhey jo sach dikhe...

sadiyon se kehti aayi hai naari ki mujhe jeene do.....mujhe jeene do, aur har pal ek maut marti hai naari........naari mein sehne ki aseem kshmta hai.......naari ki khamoshi ko uski kamzori samjha jata hai.......lekin waqt badla hai......bahut badla hai......lekin abhi bahut baki hai...

ye nahin kehte ki naari ko uncha darza do.....lekin itna toh karo ki usse sath lekar chal sako...

Nira ji.......iss vishay par bahut kehna hai..par abhi itna hai........aapki kavita ne jaise dil ki baat keh di...

shukriya!

wafa ji,

Aapka har shabd sahi hai. nari har haal mein pistti rahi hai. chahe wob solhvin sadi thi ya ikisween.

aapko kalaam pasand aaya, itne ache review diye iski abhari hoon. aapka saath milta rahe iski iltizaa karti hoon. apna khayal rakhiyega.

nira

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Feb 6 07 9:07 AM

QUOTE (shakun @ December 11, 2006 12:00 am)
QUOTE (Misty @ December 10, 2006 07:47 pm)
waqt badla hai saal badle hain, par insaan wahin hain aaj bhi. aaj bhi stree ko khilona samjha jata. par aab stree ke saath shakti hai, waqt aane par apna roop legi. akhir kab tak julm sahegi.


Aisa kyun lagta hai
Aurat bas ek khilona hai.
Sirf ek jism hai.
Sirf ek jaan hai

Jiski ki naa koi icchha hai
Na hi koi armaan hai.
Jab jo chaye dil bahlata hai.
Jab chahye dil thod jata hai.

Yeh bhi bhul jata hai.
Ussko janam dene wali
Ek maa bhi aurtat hai
Jo haat par rakhi bandhti hai
Woh bhi ek aurat hai
Jo beti hai vo bhi vo bhi aurat hai

Yeh samaj ke thekedaro
Kab tak jismo ko nochoge.
Aab toh khud ko sambhalo.
Nari ko saamaan do usse jeene do.

Aaj ki nari ko pahchan lo
Usske har roop ko izzaat do.
Usse uska adhikar do.
Nari sehan shati ki partima hai.
Dhahraye ki misaal hai.

Waqt aane par vo chandi ka avtar hai
Ek aisi chingari jo rakh kar degi.
Naa jagao uske yeh roop.
Usse sheetal hi rahne do.

Nari khilona nahi hai
Woh pyaar ka sagar.
Woh aapke ghar ki izzaat hai
Aapke ghar ka saam.maan hai.

Nira

NIRAJI

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AHSAS KO BAHUT HI SAHJATA SE LIKHA

DILKO CHOOO GAYA

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USH GHAR ME SHANTI NAHI HOTI HE

YESE GHARO ME PRABHU KA NIVAS BHI SAMBHAV NAHI HE

YESE HI SAMAJ ME JUB YAH NARI KO SAMAN NAHI TO VANHA BHI ASHANTI HOGI

KAMAYANI ME KAHA HE

NARI KEVAL TUM SRADHA HO , VISVAS RAJAT NABH TAL ME

PIYUSH SROT SI BAHA KARO JIVAN KE AVIRAL ANCHAL ME


NIRA BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

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shakun ji

bahut bahut dhanyawaad mere kalaam ko padhne aor sharne keliye. yunhi aati rahiyega.

nira.

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Feb 6 07 9:09 AM

QUOTE (AngelAmit @ December 11, 2006 12:50 am)
Too good Nira

Aaj ki nari bahot khub likha hai aapne

Amit thanks bhai aapko pasand aaya mara kalaam.
nira

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