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Dec 3 06 12:54 PM

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WOMAN, A ROSE GARDEN



"Me"
is a rose Garden
Where
There`s a strict vigilance
And
A fat warden.
Visitor`s attracted with
The beauty and glow of my face
Which`s really
The Entrance and Reception Gate.
Black and Brown
With lashes of some Red silky hair
Spread over the Shoulders and back,
Falls over there and attracts the snare.
Small eye-brows with eye lash-s,
It works in Night
As Flash.
The beautiful open Lips
Make the person to Slip.
This found to be main Entry
For the
Darling , the marvelous Gentry.
Next
The gallery prevails the whole neck
There starts the way to sack.
Marvel domes stand like the Rocks
Thinking him to rest and Talk.
The place`s mix of
Velvet and Linen.
God Himself
Serves the wine and Lemon
To make him to think
In heaven.
The warm Blood starts
Moving Fast,
For the Next
To see the Last.
But
They`re surprised to see
The Notice Board,
Entry Prohibited on this Dangerous Road.
Ahead Falls
"A Beautiful Black Rose"
Hence
The road is closed.


~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~
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Dec 3 06 12:59 PM

My Dear Harash JI.....

Namasthe JI.....I do accept this fact and the only factor is we should not touch and prick our hands in the Thorns.....Yes ofcourse they are Rose Garden.....In that also there are so many varieties na.....Very good example and very wonderfully expressed.....Too good one Sir JI..... justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif My Hats off to U.....And here is the justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif for U JI.....Thank U very very much for sharing this with Us.....

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Dec 3 06 1:37 PM

awesome feelings and very well expressed

and i think woman is gift of god to care , love and to make life complete .

no doubt she is soft , sensitive and dedicated

keep sharing

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Dec 3 06 2:31 PM

Hi Harash,
Have read this poem of your many times and everytime I read it it gives me anew perspective. Indeed a grat read Thx for bring this amongst us.

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Dec 3 06 8:28 PM

QUOTE (losangelesdiwaliramesh @ December 03, 2006 12:59 pm)
My Dear Harash JI.....

Namasthe JI.....I do accept this fact and the only factor is we should not touch and prick our hands in the Thorns.....Yes ofcourse they are Rose Garden.....In that also there are so many varieties na.....Very good example and very wonderfully expressed.....Too good one Sir JI..... justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif My Hats off to U.....And here is the justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif for U JI.....Thank U very very much for sharing this with Us.....

Thanks alot ramesh ji...you like the post....actually people think otherwise....nobdoy realise the beauty of nature...or a woman.....God blessed Earth for the people to see through their hearts about the God's gift.....
Thax again for your kind words for this post


Harash

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Dec 3 06 8:30 PM

QUOTE (shrdh @ December 03, 2006 01:37 pm)
awesome feelings and very well expressed

and i think woman is gift of god to care , love and to make life complete .

no doubt she is soft , sensitive and dedicated

keep sharing

yes shradhha ji you are right in this context.....if one feels this delicate soul n issue..


God bless you dost


harash

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Dec 3 06 8:32 PM

QUOTE (Anushka @ December 03, 2006 02:31 pm)
Hi Harash,
Have read this poem of your many times and everytime I read it it gives me anew perspective. Indeed a grat read Thx for bring this amongst us.


Thax Anushka for your kind words...

Godf bless you


harash

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