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Jun 9 06 9:00 PM

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wo panna meri kitaab ka baar baar khul jata hai
main nahin kholti hawa ka rukh wo samajh jata hai
kya hai uss panne mein aisa likha hua
jo har baar meri ankhein nam kar jata hai

uss panne mein ek kahani hai jo zindagi sunati hai
taqdeer ne likha hai usse baar baar yaad aati hai
usse bhoolne ka jab jab main sochti hoon
jane kyun aankh meri bhar jati hai

wo meri kitaab ka ikk anchaha hissa hai
wo meri zindagi ka ikk adhura kissa hai
uss panne ko main faad nahin sakti
juda ho kaise ke meri zindagi ka hissa hai

koshish bhi karoon gar usse faadne ki
apni zindagi se uss panne ko ukhadne ki
toh zindagi dagmagane lagti hai
himmat nahin hoti uss kitaab ko ujadne ki


phir hausla khud ko deti hoon
aur khidki band kar deti hoon
na hawa chale na wo panna khule "wafa"
bas kitaab band kar deti hoon


Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Jun 9 06 9:08 PM

wo meri kitaab ka ikk anchaha hissa hai
wo meri zindagi ka ikk adhura kissa hai
uss panne ko main faad nahin sakti
juda ho kaise ke meri zindagi ka hissa hai

koshish bhi karoon gar usse faadne ki
apni zindagi se uss panne ko ukhadne ki
toh zindagi dagmagane lagti hai
himmat nahin hoti uss kitaab ko ujadne ki


phir hausla khud ko deti hoon
aur khidki band kar deti hoon
na hawa chale na wo panna khule "wafa"
bas kitaab band kar deti hoon


bahut he ebaree baat baree ek kavita kah dee
tum krishn nahe epoar tum ne geeta kah dee

wah bahut achha laga parh kee wafa kahan tak jayogee nahee janata jahan tak jayo nazar atee rahana bahut door tak jana hai tumahre geeton ko
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Jun 10 06 10:05 AM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ June 09, 2006 09:08 pm)
wo meri kitaab ka ikk anchaha hissa hai
wo meri zindagi ka ikk adhura kissa hai
uss panne ko main faad nahin sakti
juda ho kaise ke meri zindagi ka hissa hai

koshish bhi karoon gar usse faadne ki
apni zindagi se uss panne ko ukhadne ki
toh zindagi dagmagane lagti hai
himmat nahin hoti uss kitaab ko ujadne ki


phir hausla khud ko deti hoon
aur khidki band kar deti hoon
na hawa chale na wo panna khule "wafa"
bas kitaab band kar deti hoon


bahut he ebaree baat baree ek kavita kah dee
tum krishn nahe epoar tum ne geeta kah dee

wah bahut achha laga parh kee wafa kahan tak jayogee nahee janata jahan tak jayo nazar atee rahana bahut door tak jana hai tumahre geeton ko
Anil

Anil ji....sach abb ye ankhon se behti dhara nahin rookegi....aapne jo apnapan jo pyar diya hai.....mujhe meri shayri ko.....

badi baat toh aapne keh di.....bahut badi.....itna maan na dijiye mujhe sach..mujhe bahut bahut darr lagta hai.....aur main kahin nahin jaoongi....mujhe yahin rehna.....agar kabhi kahin door hui bhi toh bhi aapki shayri ke aaspaas hi nazar aaongi.....

..mere ansu..muskurate huey ansu aapka dil se dil se shukriya karte hain

apna khayal rkahyiega

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Jun 10 06 11:37 AM

ye pyaree see bachee rotee kyon hai

ansoos are geeton ko de do bas aur kaheen koyee kagaz na bheege apana bahut sa khayal rakhana bahut se geet kahane hain sare bheege nahee kuch muskarte huye bhee hai na?
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Jun 10 06 1:15 PM

wafa ........

bahut hi achcha laga perker...

aur ek baat kaho ...ki jab mein isko per rahi thi to yahi soch rahi thi

isme anil ji ka andaz nazer aa raha hai.

wo panna meri kitaab ka baar baar khul jata hai
main nahin kholti hawa ka rukh wo samajh jata hai


uss panne mein ek kahani hai jo zindagi sunati hai
taqdeer ne likha hai usse baar baar yaad aati hai

sach mein jo kahani taqdeer likhti hai vo beri dheere dheere cahlti hai

aur hamari kahaniyo se kahi jayada more lati hai aur hum khare dekhte rahete hai..vismaay hoker

thanks for sharing

archana

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Jun 10 06 3:23 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ June 10, 2006 11:37 am)
ye pyaree see bachee rotee kyon hai

ansoos are geeton ko de do bas aur kaheen koyee kagaz na bheege apana bahut sa khayal rakhana bahut se geet kahane hain sare bheege nahee kuch muskarte huye bhee hai na?
Anil

ji…..bilkul…..koshish bahut karti hoon ki muskuarahat par likhoon par jane kaise kalam dard ka rookh kar leti hai….lekin koshish jari hai….

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Jun 11 06 4:25 PM

QUOTE (archana @ June 10, 2006 01:15 pm)
wafa ........

bahut hi achcha laga perker...

aur ek baat kaho ...ki jab mein isko per rahi thi to yahi soch rahi thi

isme anil ji ka andaz nazer aa raha hai.

wo panna meri kitaab ka baar baar khul jata hai
main nahin kholti hawa ka rukh wo samajh jata hai


uss panne mein ek kahani hai jo zindagi sunati hai
taqdeer ne likha hai usse baar baar yaad aati hai

sach mein jo kahani taqdeer likhti hai vo beri dheere dheere cahlti hai

aur hamari kahaniyo se kahi jayada more lati hai aur hum khare dekhte rahete hai..vismaay hoker

thanks for sharing

archana

Archana ji....bilkul theek pehchana aapne....maine Anil bhayia se hi sikha hai kavita likhna.....unki kavitayen padhne ka baad hi maine kavita likhna shuru kiya hai.....

bahut acha laga aapko yahna dekhkar.....sach hi toh hai..zindagi ek kitaab ki hi tarah toh hai...har panne par ek kahani hai....koi kahani hansa deti hai toh koi rula deti hai...aapka bahut bahut shukriya....meri kavita ko padhne aur samajhne ke liye...shukriya

apna khayal rakhyiega

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Jun 12 06 12:27 PM

QUOTE (ek_chota_sa_shayar @ June 11, 2006 06:41 pm)
bahut khhob likha hai

thanks Mehul..tx a lot!

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Jun 13 06 6:57 PM

wafa aapko ab tak gazal mai hi padha tha aapko yaha is roop mai dekh kar dang rahe gayi hoon

bhaut bhaut kushi hui hai ise padh kar

wo pyaar ka panna kaha band hota hai bus un panoon par likhe hurf hume jine ka ehsaas dila dete hai

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Jun 14 06 8:14 PM

QUOTE (shrdh @ June 13, 2006 06:57 pm)
wafa aapko ab tak gazal mai hi padha tha aapko yaha is roop mai dekh kar dang rahe gayi hoon

bhaut bhaut kushi hui hai ise padh kar

wo pyaar ka panna kaha band hota hai bus un panoon par likhe hurf hume jine ka ehsaas dila dete hai

Anil bhayia ko padhne ke baad se kavita ka silsila shuru hua hai.....bas ek koshish bhar hoti hai....aapko pasand aayi mujhe acha laga....bahut bahut shurkiya aapka

...zindagi ki kitaab mein bahut se panne hote hain......koi panna ehsas karata hai kabhi hum roye thhey toh koi panna ehsas karata hai ki kabhi hum hanse bhi thhey.....

...ek baar phir se aapka bahut shukriya...

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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