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Sep 25 06 8:49 PM

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mai kya hun
teri parchayi hun,
tere aas pass mandrati hun,
tu jidhar jata hai,
mai udhar jati hun.

mai kaha hun
mai to teri parchayi hun,
teri na me na
ha me ha milati hun.

tu muskara ke dekh le to
sham ki dhoop me jaise,
aur lambi ho jati hun.

tu najar tirchi kare to,
dopahar ki dhoop me jaise,
lupt ho jati hun,

mai kya hun mai to teri parchayi hun..................[SIZE=7]

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Sep 25 06 10:41 PM

QUOTE (Paheli @ September 25, 2006 08:49 pm)
mai kya hun
teri parchayi hun,
tere aas pass mandrati hun,
tu jidhar jata hai,
mai udhar jati hun.

mai kaha hun
mai to teri parchayi hun,
teri na me na
ha me ha milati hun.

tu muskara ke dekh le to
sham ki dhoop me jaise,
aur lambi ho jati hun.

tu najar tirchi kare to,
dopahar ki dhoop me jaise,
lupt ho jati hun,

mai kya hun mai to teri parchayi hun..................[SIZE=7]


Paheli ji,

sach kaha hai parchai kabhi juda nahi hoti, vo toh har kadam sath chalti hai.

keep writing. take care.

nira

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Sep 26 06 7:17 AM

amar panktiyaN hain ye is se sunder baat kahee hee nahee ja saktee thee. sar jhuka ke kahata hoon wah aur aisee aur bahut see kavitayon kee asha rakhata hoon
Anil

tu muskara ke dekh le to
sham ki dhoop me jaise,
aur lambi ho jati hun.

tu najar tirchi kare to,
dopahar ki dhoop me jaise,
lupt ho jati hun

bahut khoob

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Sep 27 06 11:49 AM

Misty,Anushka aur Anji,

poem padne aur accha lagne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad

mujhe aap sabke support ki bahut jaroorat hai.


paheli

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Oct 4 06 10:07 PM

thanks vipin

aapko poem achhi lagi mera likhna safal ho gaya yu hi padte rahiye

paheli

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