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Sep 25 06 8:21 PM

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______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~
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Sep 25 06 8:41 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

waaaaaaaaah kya khoob bayaan kiya hai apne muqadar apne naseeb ka...kabhi apna bana liya to kabhi pal main ajnabi...kitni khoobsurati se bayaan kiya hai is confused state of mind...sach hi to hai saari zindagi do ajnabiyon ko zindagi bhar sath nibha na hai...us pal ko behad haseen lafzon se sajaya hai...good writing...god bless...

Ab taqdeer hai wo
aap ka naseeb hai wo
Nibhana hai jeevan bhar
Ye kachi pakki zindagi ki dor...

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Sep 25 06 9:36 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 25, 2006 08:41 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

waaaaaaaaah kya khoob bayaan kiya hai apne muqadar apne naseeb ka...kabhi apna bana liya to kabhi pal main ajnabi...kitni khoobsurati se bayaan kiya hai is confused state of mind...sach hi to hai saari zindagi do ajnabiyon ko zindagi bhar sath nibha na hai...us pal ko behad haseen lafzon se sajaya hai...good writing...god bless...

Ab taqdeer hai wo
aap ka naseeb hai wo
Nibhana hai jeevan bhar
Ye kachi pakki zindagi ki dor...

Aarzoo ji aapka yuin tasdeekwaar bhayan bahoot hi sunder laga...bahoot hi oomda tareeke se..ek teacer ki tarah...vyakhaan..bahoot hi srahniye hai.....Thanx alot for your kind words.....

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Sep 25 06 11:00 PM

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

kya baat kahi hai.............

kuch confusion zindagi bher rahte hi hai.........

door ho to lage paas kyo nahi .
paas ho to lage ab door sahi......

thanks for sharing

archana

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Sep 26 06 4:29 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

Wah harashji, bahut acha likha hai..

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.


yeh chand lines ahamay bahut achi legi..

Keep writing.

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Sep 26 06 7:44 AM

QUOTE (archana @ September 25, 2006 11:00 pm)
Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

kya baat kahi hai.............

kuch confusion zindagi bher rahte hi hai.........

door ho to lage paas kyo nahi .
paas ho to lage ab door sahi......

thanks for sharing

archana

bahoot bahoot shukriya archana ji....thanx for your kind words....

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Sep 26 06 7:46 AM

QUOTE (Anushka @ September 26, 2006 04:29 am)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

Wah harashji, bahut acha likha hai..

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.


yeh chand lines ahamay bahut achi legi..

Keep writing.

Anushka ji...aapka yuin ham sang saroorana achha laga....

JahaaN se ham chale the aa gaye Aakhir wahaaN hi,
Tum sang ye safer hi Aakhirish hameiN achha laga.

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Sep 28 06 8:33 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

wowwwwwwwww kiya gazal hay bahot din key baad aayee hu

umda kalaam

se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.


yeh sheyr behad pasand aayey

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Sep 28 06 9:10 PM

QUOTE (mah @ September 28, 2006 08:33 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 08:21 pm)
______________Parda

Rukh se hatega parda aaj mere naseeb ka,
Kaisi milegi dulhan aaj lage ajeeb sa.

Bachhpan se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.

Jakhmo.n se ban chuka hai dil pe har taraf mahel,
Dulhan wo ban gayee magar lagoo.n rakeeb sa.

~~~Harash©~~~~

wowwwwwwwww kiya gazal hay bahot din key baad aayee hu

umda kalaam

se ab talak, jehen mein thi basi hui,
Tasweer unki ban gayee mukaddar gareeb ka.

Suna kiye the daastaa.n unke mureedo.n ki,
Kuchh dooria.n hui, magar lage kareeb sa.

Dastak jo na umeedi mein unko diya kiye,
Ye jaankar bhi rishta ab bana saleeb sa.


yeh sheyr behad pasand aayey

mah ji bahoot bahoot Shukriya aap yaahaN aaye our hamaari shayari ka Rutba barha our unhe oonchayiyaN nasee b hui.....

Harash

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