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______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash
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Sep 25 06 6:32 PM

Harash ji....bilkul samajh nahin paa rahi hoon ki kya kahoon aapki rachna ko padhkar stabdh ho gayi hoon.....sach lafz nahin mil rahe jo aapki kalam ke sath wafa karen......bahut khoob! bahut khoob!

Rafta rafta dard syahi mein ghul gaya “wafa”
Aur zindagi ka karz panno mein ada ho gaya

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Sep 25 06 6:44 PM

QUOTE (ek_wafa @ September 25, 2006 06:32 pm)
Harash ji....bilkul samajh nahin paa rahi hoon ki kya kahoon aapki rachna ko padhkar stabdh ho gayi hoon.....sach lafz nahin mil rahe jo aapki kalam ke sath wafa karen......bahut khoob! bahut khoob!

Aapne Is nachhez ke baramde main aaker jo tana bana guna hai apni soch ka...main uska bada hi shukra-Guzar hoon Ek wafa ji.....bahoot khoob...

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Sep 25 06 7:11 PM

QUOTE (annji-d-pagal @ September 25, 2006 07:02 pm)
HARSH WHERE DO YOU GET WORDS BUDDY ......... I DONT GET WORDS TO SAY ANYTHING AFTER READING YOUR POSTS

love to see you always pagal ji.............

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Sep 25 06 7:24 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

Harash ji

sabka sahi kahna hai. bahut badhi baat kahi hai, dil ko lagi hai. apna khayal rakhye.

nira

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Sep 25 06 7:46 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ September 25, 2006 07:24 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

Harash ji

sabka sahi kahna hai. bahut badhi baat kahi hai, dil ko lagi hai. apna khayal rakhye.

nira

Nira ji...aapke shabdoN ka ab mere paas koi jawaab Nahi...bahoot bahoot shukriya..ki aapne waqt diya..hamaare jazbatoN ko....

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Sep 25 06 8:12 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

hmmmmmmm...harsh sochne waali baat hai....aapke pathar dil par ahsaasaton ke phool khilaane ke liye kissi kalaakar ki nahi...ek aise sache jeevan sathi ki zaroorat hai jo apne pyaar se aapke dil ko mom karde...kahaan aap sangtarash se umeed kar baithe hai...insaan ke dil aur pathar main bohot farq hota hai...

bohot khoobsurat aur anokha ahsaas bayaan kiya hai...acha laga padh kar...

dil to mera pathar hai
tum apne pyaar se is main
wafa ke phool khila do
aur "aarzoo" ke deep jala do...

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Sep 25 06 8:49 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 25, 2006 08:12 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

hmmmmmmm...harsh sochne waali baat hai....aapke pathar dil par ahsaasaton ke phool khilaane ke liye kissi kalaakar ki nahi...ek aise sache jeevan sathi ki zaroorat hai jo apne pyaar se aapke dil ko mom karde...kahaan aap sangtarash se umeed kar baithe hai...insaan ke dil aur pathar main bohot farq hota hai...

bohot khoobsurat aur anokha ahsaas bayaan kiya hai...acha laga padh kar...

dil to mera pathar hai
tum apne pyaar se is main
wafa ke phool khila do
aur "aarzoo" ke deep jala do...

bahoot khoob....aapke jawaab main bahoot taaseer hai wafa ki.....Thx Aarzoo ji....

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Sep 26 06 4:41 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

Aa ki hogeya Harashji... bedi gehri baat kehgey tusi, great imaginatiosn.

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Sep 26 06 6:49 AM

KYA WO DIL KO JODH KAR KOI GARDEN BANA SAKEGA

KHYAAL SACH MAI GHARE HAI AUR UNHE KAHNE KA ANDAAZ BHAUT ACHHA LAGA

SAYAD KOI TO HOGA JI

MERE TOOTE SE DIL MAI THODI SI CHAMAK DEGA
MAN MAI KUSHI KI THODI SI KHANK DEGA
NAHI CHAHA KABHI PURI BAGIYA HI MERI HO
KOI TO KABHI MUJHE EK PHOOL KI MAHAK DEGA

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Sep 26 06 7:33 AM

QUOTE (Anushka @ September 26, 2006 04:41 am)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

Aa ki hogeya Harashji... bedi gehri baat kehgey tusi, great imaginatiosn.

badahi shukriya tuhada ji Anushka ji....

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Sep 26 06 7:39 AM

QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 06:49 am)
KYA WO DIL KO JODH KAR KOI GARDEN BANA SAKEGA

KHYAAL SACH MAI GHARE HAI AUR UNHE KAHNE KA ANDAAZ BHAUT ACHHA LAGA

SAYAD KOI TO HOGA JI

MERE TOOTE SE DIL MAI THODI SI CHAMAK DEGA
MAN MAI KUSHI KI THODI SI KHANK DEGA
NAHI CHAHA KABHI PURI BAGIYA HI MERI HO
KOI TO KABHI MUJHE EK PHOOL KI MAHAK DEGA

Shraddha ji....achha laga aapka yuin yahaaN present hona our dil-o-demaag se soch ker ise samajhana our phir apni hi tehreen maiN piroker jawaab dena bahoot khoob.....

Shraddha ji...ye Ek ashar aapki nazer kerta hoon....Umeed hai aap ise Dil-o-demaag se samjhengi...fir is jawaab ke saath mere saath Ek lamha bitayengi....

Kashish hai pyaar maiN Aisi, Talism ker dikhaye jo,
Badalte Fool maiN dekha, Use, Jo Ek pathher tha.

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Sep 26 06 11:00 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

harsh aapki yeh poem mujhe sach mein dil se pasand aayi ...

bahut khubsurti se aapne isko lafazo mein prioya hai

wondrful .....

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Sep 26 06 11:24 AM

nahee Harsh jee main nahee jane doonga us kalakar ke pas aap ko kabhee, chahe aap ko bandh ke rakhana pare. aap kee rachanye jo un ahsas se banee hain kisee rock garden se kam nahee hain main nahee chahta in se milne ke liye hamare is pariwar se bahar jana pare. aap kee apeal thukra dee gayee

pholon ke baag lagayen ya rock ke aap ko yaheen lagane hain
main hee nahee yahan sab aap kee kalam ke deewane hain
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Sep 26 06 4:36 PM

QUOTE (ranjana @ September 26, 2006 11:00 am)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

harsh aapki yeh poem mujhe sach mein dil se pasand aayi ...

bahut khubsurti se aapne isko lafazo mein prioya hai

wondrful .....

Ranjana ji main aapka kin shabdoN se shukrya ada kerooN.....aap logoN ke pyaar maiN hi itni takat hai ki Lafz kis tarah tareer banker aap sab ke paas parose jaate haiN....khuda jaanta hai....Ranjana ji....ye kalam kab kis tarah chalti hai mujhe bhi maloom nahi....Gazal meri Vidha hai....Kavita maiN apne bhavoN ko apne paas rakhne ke liye likhta hooN....bas yuiN hi maine is jagah site par likh di...in ahsaasoN ko maiN gazal ka roop na de saka....our ek baar diya bhi tha...par iska aser jata raha!!...maiN toh is Kavita ka jawaab aapse umeed kerta tha....par shayad.....aapka man abhi use post kerne maiN nahi hai....Bahoot bahoot shukriya Ranjana ji........

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Sep 26 06 4:43 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ September 26, 2006 11:24 am)
nahee Harsh jee main nahee jane doonga us kalakar ke pas aap ko kabhee, chahe aap ko bandh ke rakhana pare. aap kee rachanye jo un ahsas se banee hain kisee rock garden se kam nahee hain main nahee chahta in se milne ke liye hamare is pariwar se bahar jana pare. aap kee apeal thukra dee gayee

pholon ke baag lagayen ya rock ke aap ko yaheen lagane hain
main hee nahee yahan sab aap kee kalam ke deewane hain
Anil

Anil ji....aapke is pyaar ne hamaiN is kader baandh diya hai ki koi kahiN jaane ke kaabil reh hi kahaaN jata hai...aapke yahaaN itne achhay shayar our shayara haiN
ki unko parh ker man bahoot pulkit ho uthhta hai...baaki rahi hamari baat....

Mehfil ko pyaar se sazana kisi Ek Shaks ke bas ki baat nahiN,
Aap sab ki shayari parne ko mile is se badi koi sougat nahI


Bahoot bahoot shukriya Anil ji....

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Sep 26 06 8:04 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 26, 2006 07:39 am)
QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 06:49 am)
KYA WO DIL KO JODH KAR KOI GARDEN BANA SAKEGA

KHYAAL SACH MAI GHARE HAI AUR UNHE KAHNE KA ANDAAZ BHAUT ACHHA LAGA

SAYAD KOI TO HOGA JI

MERE TOOTE SE DIL MAI THODI SI CHAMAK DEGA
MAN MAI KUSHI KI THODI SI KHANK DEGA
NAHI CHAHA KABHI PURI BAGIYA HI MERI HO
KOI TO KABHI MUJHE EK PHOOL KI MAHAK DEGA

Shraddha ji....achha laga aapka yuin yahaaN present hona our dil-o-demaag se soch ker ise samajhana our phir apni hi tehreen maiN piroker jawaab dena bahoot khoob.....

Shraddha ji...ye Ek ashar aapki nazer kerta hoon....Umeed hai aap ise Dil-o-demaag se samjhengi...fir is jawaab ke saath mere saath Ek lamha bitayengi....

Kashish hai pyaar maiN Aisi, Talism ker dikhaye jo,
Badalte Fool maiN dekha, Use, Jo Ek pathher tha.

aapki baat sahi hai harsh

lekin iska jawab ye hai


pyaar ke waade nibhaye aisa koi nahi
khud ko is aag mai jalaye aisa koi nahi
jara si chot aur raah badal lete hai saathi
khud ko sang mai mitaye aisa koi nahi



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Sep 26 06 8:26 PM

QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 08:04 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 26, 2006 07:39 am)
QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 06:49 am)
KYA WO DIL KO JODH KAR KOI GARDEN BANA SAKEGA

KHYAAL SACH MAI GHARE HAI AUR UNHE KAHNE KA ANDAAZ BHAUT ACHHA LAGA

SAYAD KOI TO HOGA JI

MERE TOOTE SE DIL MAI THODI SI CHAMAK DEGA
MAN MAI KUSHI KI THODI SI KHANK DEGA
NAHI CHAHA KABHI PURI BAGIYA HI MERI HO
KOI TO KABHI MUJHE EK PHOOL KI MAHAK DEGA

Shraddha ji....achha laga aapka yuin yahaaN present hona our dil-o-demaag se soch ker ise samajhana our phir apni hi tehreen maiN piroker jawaab dena bahoot khoob.....

Shraddha ji...ye Ek ashar aapki nazer kerta hoon....Umeed hai aap ise Dil-o-demaag se samjhengi...fir is jawaab ke saath mere saath Ek lamha bitayengi....

Kashish hai pyaar maiN Aisi, Talism ker dikhaye jo,
Badalte Fool maiN dekha, Use, Jo Ek pathher tha.

aapki baat sahi hai harsh

lekin iska jawab ye hai


pyaar ke waade nibhaye aisa koi nahi
khud ko is aag mai jalaye aisa koi nahi
jara si chot aur raah badal lete hai saathi
khud ko sang mai mitaye aisa koi nahi

Meri baat har jagah sahi hi lagegi Shraddha ji....aapne bahoot khoob likha....ise yuin hi na samjhe mere hamdam mere dost.......


Pyaar maiN tu is kader kerta chala jaooN,
Tu Zakhm diye jaaye maiN bharta chala jaooN.

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Sep 26 06 8:28 PM

QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 08:04 pm)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 26, 2006 07:39 am)
QUOTE (shrdh @ September 26, 2006 06:49 am)
KYA WO DIL KO JODH KAR KOI GARDEN BANA SAKEGA

KHYAAL SACH MAI GHARE HAI AUR UNHE KAHNE KA ANDAAZ BHAUT ACHHA LAGA

SAYAD KOI TO HOGA JI

MERE TOOTE SE DIL MAI THODI SI CHAMAK DEGA
MAN MAI KUSHI KI THODI SI KHANK DEGA
NAHI CHAHA KABHI PURI BAGIYA HI MERI HO
KOI TO KABHI MUJHE EK PHOOL KI MAHAK DEGA

Shraddha ji....achha laga aapka yuin yahaaN present hona our dil-o-demaag se soch ker ise samajhana our phir apni hi tehreen maiN piroker jawaab dena bahoot khoob.....

Shraddha ji...ye Ek ashar aapki nazer kerta hoon....Umeed hai aap ise Dil-o-demaag se samjhengi...fir is jawaab ke saath mere saath Ek lamha bitayengi....

Kashish hai pyaar maiN Aisi, Talism ker dikhaye jo,
Badalte Fool maiN dekha, Use, Jo Ek pathher tha.

aapki baat sahi hai harsh

lekin iska jawab ye hai


pyaar ke waade nibhaye aisa koi nahi
khud ko is aag mai jalaye aisa koi nahi
jara si chot aur raah badal lete hai saathi
khud ko sang mai mitaye aisa koi nahi

Meri baat har jagah sahi hi lagegi Shraddha ji....aapne bahoot khoob likha....ise yuin hi na samjhe mere hamdam mere dost.......


Pyaar maiN tu is kader kerta chala jaooN,
Tu Zakhm diye jaaye maiN bharta chala jaooN.

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Sep 26 06 8:39 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

HARASH JI


BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HE

SUKRIYA


SHAKUN

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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