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May 22 08 5:59 AM

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Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai


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May 22 08 7:36 AM

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai


be inteha khoobsoorat hai arzoo aaj tum ne kamal kiya hai
ANil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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May 22 08 2:29 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ May 22, 2008 07:36 am)
Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai


be inteha khoobsoorat hai arzoo aaj tum ne kamal kiya hai
ANil

Bohot bohot shukriya parhne aur pasand karne ke liye Anil..ur words mean a lot to me..Bless u dost..

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May 22 08 3:14 PM

[FONT=Impact]jo bhi likh raha hun
dil say likh raha hun.
jo baat main nay mehsus ki
her ik baat keh raha hun

saare alfaaz saari lines cheek cheek ke bol rahi hain...aao aur parho yeh jo likha hai uss k dard ko samjho jisnay yeh likha hai... aur usay ek kandha do...ta-k us k dil main jo gubaar baki reh gaya hai woh aansoo ki shakal main nikal aaye....or uss payari si .......ka chehra phir say khilkhila jaye..aankhon main ek chamak aa jaye...mera kandha to aap k liye aise bhi free main hai.aa jaanaa kiraya nahi lunga.


kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai


aisi baat phir kabhi likhi naaa to phir ... you know me...aap ki khair nahi.

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May 22 08 4:08 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ May 22, 2008 05:59 am)
Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai



wahhhhhhhhhhh kitni ache lafazon mein tumne
yeh kalaam likha hai. her sher mukamaal hai moti
ki tarha sazaa hua hai.

daad deti hoon God bless u

nira

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May 23 08 1:35 PM

QUOTE (KASHIfIQBAL @ May 22, 2008 03:14 pm)
[FONT=Impact]jo bhi likh raha hun
dil say likh raha hun.
jo baat main nay mehsus ki
her ik baat keh raha hun

saare alfaaz saari lines cheek cheek ke bol rahi hain...aao aur parho yeh jo likha hai uss k dard ko samjho jisnay yeh likha hai... aur usay ek kandha do...ta-k us k dil main jo gubaar baki reh gaya hai woh aansoo ki shakal main nikal aaye....or uss payari si .......ka chehra phir say khilkhila jaye..aankhon main ek chamak aa jaye...mera kandha to aap k liye aise bhi free main hai.aa jaanaa kiraya nahi lunga.


kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai


aisi baat phir kabhi likhi naaa to phir ... you know me...aap ki khair nahi.

awwwwwwwwwww chooooooooooo chweeeeeeeet....kashif bohot dinon ke baad review parh kar chehre par ek muskaan aai hai...Bless u bro for liking the poem..apna dher saara kahyaal rakhna...khush raho..

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May 23 08 3:15 PM

aarzoo ji ,

mujhe bahut urdu aati nahi hai .lekin aapki ye jo rachana hai dil ko kahin bahut gahare chhooo jaati hai. khaas taur se...." mera pyaar tere liye ek tohfa ...tera pyaar khairaat kyon hai "

bahut khoob likhi hai.
plz talib aur zaat ka matlab batayengi.....

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May 23 08 5:06 PM

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

- wowwwwwwwwww beautiful sher...
bas arzu ye mardo ki duniya aisi hi hoti hai...


Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

- hota he yaar kabi kabi be-mausam barsaat aa hi jati hai...ha.ha.ha.
anyway...GARDISH ME HO TAARE..TU MAT GHABRANA PYARE...
GAR TU HIMMET NA HAARE TO HONGE VAARE..NYAARE...!!

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

- heyyyyyyyy come on...i m with u...call me...ha.ha.ha.

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai
- ek sher is baat per tere liye..

tune hi mannatte mangi thi use roshni dene k liye...
tune hi apni khushiyo k badle uski khushi mangi thi..
aaj ye khalish dil me kyu hai tere..
tune hi duai di thi uski hansi k liye..


kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai

oyeeeeeeeeeeee muje hai na abi teri chaaaaahat dear love uuuu always

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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May 23 08 7:08 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ May 22, 2008 05:59 am)
Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai



bahut hi unda kalam likha hi arzoo ji...

zaroori nhi arzoo ho to hi jeeya jaaye.
her kaam aapni khusi se kiya jaaye,
zinda rehne ka to wo bahana thay mere
ab marne ke liye wajah kahan se laayenge...

toda hai chehara aisa ki dekhne se ghabrata hu,
soochta hu ab ye chehra kahan chupayenge...
her saans dil mein ek tees deker jaati hai
dil ke zakm ka marham kahan se laayenge....

kabhi sookhne na paaye tere diye dard ki taajgi
her roz akhiyon ko ashq se hum nahlayenge.
tum jo jala gaye ho is dil ke armaan....
wada hai aakhri saans tak is dil ko hum jalayenge..

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May 23 08 8:05 PM

aarzoo tumhari kuch likhawat shakir parween ke kalam se nikli likhawat ka ahsaas dilati hai aur isse bada complement dena mere bas mein nahi, i love shakir parween's lines and now would love to read you the same as i read her


very good lines i enjoyed reading it like anything

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i wish if i could personally give all these flowers to you for this beautiful poem

god bless you justju/rose.gif

fais..!!

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May 24 08 2:37 AM

QUOTE (kurt cobain @ May 22, 2008 03:36 pm)
wah wah ... it seems app to bhuut hi accha likne lagi ek dum se

this was truely ...waht do say 4 that ...mixtre of feelings with very fine words

keep rocking

Thanks for liking it Kurt...Bless u...

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May 24 08 2:38 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ May 22, 2008 04:08 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ May 22, 2008 05:59 am)
Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne  Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai



wahhhhhhhhhhh kitni ache lafazon mein tumne
yeh kalaam likha hai. her sher mukamaal hai moti
ki tarha sazaa hua hai.

daad deti hoon God bless u

nira

Thanks a lot niraaaaaaaaa.......ehsaas to wohi hai.wohi gham aur wohi tanhaai..

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May 24 08 1:53 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ May 22, 2008 05:59 am)
Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai



hamesha ki tarah supar likha ha tc dbs

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I love walking in the rain....
B'coz
no one knows i am crying.....

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May 24 08 11:30 PM

QUOTE (dbs @ May 24, 2008 01:53 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ May 22, 2008 05:59 am)
Tabassum bawajh-e inaayaat kyoon hai
Miree har Khushee teri sauGhaat kyooN hai

Yeh rasmon men jakRee huuwee zindagaanee
Rasan men bandhee aaj har zaat kyoon hai

Mira pyaar tere liye ek tohfa
Tira pyaar phir ek Khairat kyoon hai

Main himmat nah hari kabhi mushkiloN se
Nah pocho yeh ashkoN ki barsaat kyoon hai

Muqaddar! mujhe aaj itna bataa dey
Keh har shub miri hijr ki raat kyoon hai

Usey raushni bakhsh dee tou ne  Khaliq!
Tou har raat meri siyah raat kyoon hai

kisee ko nahiN “Aarzoo” teri chaahat
tou jeene ki talib tiree zaat kyooN hai



hamesha ki tarah supar likha ha tc dbs


bohot dinon baad aai hain aap..umeed hai khairiyat se honge...shukriya parhne ke liye..

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May 25 08 3:45 AM

QUOTE (invisible_fais @ May 23, 2008 08:05 pm)
aarzoo tumhari kuch likhawat shakir parween ke kalam se nikli likhawat ka ahsaas dilati hai aur isse bada complement dena mere bas mein nahi, i love shakir parween's lines and now would love to read you the same as i read her


very good lines i enjoyed reading it like anything

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i wish if i could personally give all these flowers to you for this beautiful poem

god bless you justju/rose.gif

fais..!!

Fais i don't have words to thank u par wo bohot bari shaqsiyat hai..aur main bas koshish kar rahi hun...haan shayad aurat hun na to shayad khayalaat takra jaate hai..Akhir kaar dard to saanjhi hota hai na..

n thanks for those beautiful flowers..

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May 25 08 6:31 PM

QUOTE (gatika @ May 23, 2008 03:15 pm)
aarzoo ji ,

mujhe bahut urdu aati nahi hai .lekin aapki ye jo rachana hai dil ko kahin bahut gahare chhooo jaati hai. khaas taur se...." mera pyaar tere liye ek tohfa ...tera pyaar khairaat kyon hai "

bahut khoob likhi hai.
plz talib aur zaat ka matlab batayengi.....

gatika mere kalaam ke ahsaas tumhaare dil tak pohonchte to samjho mera likhna safal hua..

kuch lafz bohot asaan hote hai lekin samjhana mushkil

zaat m'ana mera apana self meri zaat aapki zaat.
Taalib means chaahne wala, talabgaar, Khuwahish karne wala, mangne wala.

umeed hai aapko samajh main agaya hoga..keep coming n keep reading..

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