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May 22 08 5:50 AM

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May 22 08 12:23 PM

Pahla kadam sahii padaa .. ummid karta hu.. pahaad jaldee he naap lengii aap..

Yun to subah ka suraj nikal chuka hai .. per aankhon se kal raat ki chhayi hui kaalima abhi bhee puree nahi gayee ..

koshish achhee haii.. and hope .. agar yu he koshishon ka silsila jaari raha to .. u will be the winner ...

god bless u ...

with lots of best wishes...

Yash..

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May 22 08 7:02 PM

Oh my God didi padkar mai suffocate hogayi .... dard bara yeh poem
dil ko chu gaya. daad hazir hai didi. Love you and God Bless

ROJA



Jeena Yahan Marna Yahan... Iske Siva Jana Kahan?

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May 23 08 4:50 PM

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh main to ankho se hi dare ja rahi hu.........

TANHA SAGAR


tanhasagar.blogspot.com

DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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May 23 08 7:57 PM

awesome expressions aarzooo although a bit less in riming what required to give a fine touch to a poem...!!

but a very nice attepmt of expressions i must say it again

god bless you justju/rose.gif

fais..!!

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May 25 08 7:34 PM

QUOTE (iamyash76 @ May 22, 2008 12:23 pm)
Pahla kadam sahii padaa .. ummid karta hu.. pahaad jaldee he naap lengii aap..

Yun to subah ka suraj nikal chuka hai .. per aankhon se kal raat ki chhayi hui kaalima abhi bhee puree nahi gayee ..

koshish achhee haii.. and hope .. agar yu he koshishon ka silsila jaari raha to .. u will be the winner ...

god bless u ...

with lots of best wishes...

Yash..

"Yun to subah ka suraj nikal chuka hai .. per aankhon se kal raat ki chhayi hui kaalima abhi bhee puree nahi gayee "


waqt sab se bara marham hai dost lekin afsos kuch zakhmon ko waqt bhi nahi mita sakta hai ye to bas riske nasoor ban jaate hai...haan koshish zaroor karti hun..Thansk for liking it..

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May 27 08 2:09 AM

QUOTE (dsiwal @ May 22, 2008 01:54 pm)
Beautiful just like u but as i said earlier i cant see so much of "hate" in ur wrds as u for me a person full of life n love

hugs

huggsssssssss dipssssssssss for ur sweet words.......u analyzed me better...these r a moments thoughts dipsssss...do u think u can overcome the pain or ur u can hate ur love..it's just the hurt which makes u write...hope there is never a word called goodbye in my life ever...bless u for liking...

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Jun 3 08 3:19 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ May 22, 2008 03:50 pm)
aarzoooooooo
one os utr mont beautifull creation.

well written deep thoughts and feeing, always keep writing.

nira

I know tere bagair to meri zindagi ka safar adhoora hai.

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Jun 14 08 2:17 AM

QUOTE (roja_malar @ May 22, 2008 07:02 pm)
Oh my God didi padkar mai suffocate hogayi .... dard bara yeh poem
dil ko chu gaya. daad hazir hai didi. Love you and God Bless

thanks for reading n liking it Roja..bless u guriya..

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Jun 20 08 4:40 AM

QUOTE (kurt cobain @ May 23, 2008 12:14 am)
intrusting aspect

soffocating LOVE..... thiers a hindi song also ...dheere dheere pyaar ko badhana hai...

hai na interesting subject kurt...sometimes u have to let go ur love in order to save ur relationship...gar pyaar sacha hai to laut aaiga..it's just the faith which counts...n touchwood i have a strong faith which will never die before me..

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Jun 23 08 10:07 PM

justju/c023.gif dear................


I have deleted my previous review.....

and just these lines for the one who gets suffocated by one's love & care

HELL WITH HIM AND JUST LET HIM GO !!!!!
WE HAVE HEART TOOOOOOOOOOOOO...!!!!!



Men are like that......selfish....snob......but why don' they remember that
they r not God !!

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