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May 22 08 12:44 AM

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सोच,
सर्फ के झाग की तरह
कुछ देर,
फेनिल झागों के समान उभरी
फिर ख़त्म हो गयी
दूध में उफान की तरह,
विचार उफनते हैं
और कुछ समय बाद
ठंडे हो जाते हैं
उन झागों की तरह
जो स्वयं नीचे बैठ गये हों.
और फिर-
वही बेरौनक सी ज़िंदगी
कैसे, कब कहाँ शुरू हुई
अहसास नही रहता
कल, आज और कल
बीतते जाते हैं
पर उनका
हिसाब नही रहता.
इस बेहिसाबी दुनिया में
तुम बीता कल ढूंढते हो
पर यहाँ तो अब आज का
हिसाब नही मिलता
वक़्त नही है
अब सोचने का
कल का क्या सोचें
कर्म किए जाओ......
फिर....
वक़्त कहीं का कहीं पहुँचे

soch,
sarf ke jhaag ki tarah
kuch der,
fenil jhaagon ke samaan ubhari
phir khatm ho gayi
dudh men uphaan kee tarah,
vichaar uphante hain
aur kuch samay baad
thande ho jaate hain
un jhaagon ki tarah
jo swayam neeche baith gaye hon.
aur phir-
wahi beraunak si zindagee
kaise, kab kahan shuru hui
ahsaas nahi rahata
kal, aaj aur kal
beetate jaate hain
par unaka
hisaab nahi rahata.
is behisaabi duniya men
tum beeta kal dhoondhate ho
par yahan to ab aaj ka
hisaab nahi milta
waqt nahi hai
ab sochane ka
kal ka kya sochen
karm kiye jaao......
phir....
waqt kahin ka kahin pahunche

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May 22 08 1:06 AM

bohut acha likha hai qatika ...
zindagi k bare main apni soch.
aur taiz raftari say zindagi k guzarte paloon ko
bohut he acha andaaz diya hai
aur un ko bohut khoobsurat tarkiya say likha hai.

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May 22 08 1:25 AM

apne itni sundarata se soch ko apni es rachana ke madhyam se bayan kiya hai ki padhte padhte main soch main pad gaya....

bahut hi sundar rachana.....

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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May 22 08 9:16 AM

s behisaabi duniya men
tum beeta kal dhoondhate ho
par yahan to ab aaj ka
hisaab nahi milta
waqt nahi hai
ab sochane ka
kal ka kya sochen
karm kiye jaao......
phir....
waqt kahin ka kahin pahunche


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May 22 08 10:34 AM

kashifiqbal ji , kurt cobain (aapka namm nahi jaanti ) ,
deerendra ji , anil ji , mrkotians.

aap sabne meri hausala afzai ki .isake liye bahu- bahut shikriya.

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May 22 08 10:36 AM

namaste gatika ji!!
achchhee fik'r aur achchhaa khayaal!! aazaad shaa'irii karte waqt bas aik baat ka dhyaan rakhiyegaa keh apnee baat ko kitne kam aur maanikhez alfaazoN meiN kah saktee hai!! kaavish kaa husn baRhtaa hai!!

Dheer

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May 22 08 10:56 PM

deer ji , aapne khayal ki saraahna ki .bahut bahut shukriya.

mujhe urdu ka bahut gyaan nahi hai. aapse 'maanikhez"

sabd ka arth jananaa chahti hoon. aapki salaah ka khayaal rakhoongi.

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May 22 08 11:18 PM

aur phir-
wahi beraunak si zindagee
kaise, kab kahan shuru hui
ahsaas nahi rahata
kal, aaj aur kal
beetate jaate hain
par unaka
hisaab nahi rahata.
is behisaabi duniya men
tum beeta kal dhoondhate ho
par yahan to ab aaj ka
hisaab nahi milta


aaj kal ki zindagi ko is khoobsurat nazm main khoob nibhaya hai...daad ki haqdaar hai...yunhi is mehfil ko apne khoobsurat kalaam se mehkaate rehna..

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May 23 08 12:22 AM

QUOTE (gatika @ May 22, 2008 10:34 am)
kashifiqbal ji , kurt cobain (aapka namm nahi jaanti ) ,
deerendra ji , anil ji , mrkotians.

aap sabne meri hausala afzai ki .isake liye bahu- bahut shikriya.

ji mera naam "kashif" hai.

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May 23 08 12:17 PM

QUOTE (gatika @ May 22, 2008 10:56 pm)
deer ji , aapne khayal ki saraahna ki .bahut bahut shukriya.

mujhe urdu ka bahut gyaan nahi hai. aapse 'maanikhez"

sabd ka arth jananaa chahti hoon. aapki salaah ka khayaal rakhoongi.

maani'khez alfaaz= word which has a great depth of meaning or sense.

Tk care

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#12 [url]

May 23 08 3:22 PM

aarzoo ji,

aapne meri soch ko padhane ka waqt nikaalaa aur saath hi saraahaa bhi .mera hausla badhane ka bahut bahut shukriya. hamesha aapki prtikriya ka intzaar rahega.

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May 24 08 11:36 AM

abha ji , hausala afzai ka shukriya.

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