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Apr 28 08 12:49 PM

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Ek insane ne bade jatan se ek ghosla banaya,
Sochkar ki ek din koi chidiya aakar usme bathegi
Aur waqt aane par ande degi.
Uske bad uske bachcho ki chachahat uske ghar me goonjengi.

Ek din ek chidiya aayi
Usne bade bariki se ghosle ka muaina kiya,
Aur fir furr se ud gayi
Vapas kabhi nahi aayi,
Chidiya ko shayad uski neeyat par bharosa nahi huaa
Aakhir insane jo thahra.
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Apr 28 08 3:37 PM

QUOTE (Paheli @ April 28, 2008 12:49 pm)
Ek insane ne bade jatan se ek ghosla banaya,
Sochkar ki ek din koi chidiya aakar usme bathegi
Aur waqt aane par ande degi.
Uske bad uske bachcho ki chachahat uske ghar me goonjengi.

Ek din ek chidiya aayi
Usne bade bariki se ghosle ka muaina kiya,
Aur fir furr se ud gayi
Vapas kabhi nahi aayi,
Chidiya ko shayad uski neeyat par bharosa nahi huaa
Aakhir insane jo thahra.

paheli ji

sahi kaha hai insaan ko tahraa
kaise chidya barosa karti,

bahut acha likha hai

nira

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Apr 28 08 9:38 PM



is choti si kavita main aapne insaan ko mano ek darpan dikha diya hai.

bahut achchi lagi yeh kavita.


insaan aisa ho gaya hai ki koi kisi ka bhala kare to hairat hoti hai, hai na!


regards
aarya

regards
aarya


khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Apr 29 08 3:13 AM

QUOTE (Paheli @ April 28, 2008 12:49 pm)
Ek insane ne bade jatan se ek ghosla banaya,
Sochkar ki ek din koi chidiya aakar usme bathegi
Aur waqt aane par ande degi.
Uske bad uske bachcho ki chachahat uske ghar me goonjengi.

Ek din ek chidiya aayi
Usne bade bariki se ghosle ka muaina kiya,
Aur fir furr se ud gayi
Vapas kabhi nahi aayi,
Chidiya ko shayad uski neeyat par bharosa nahi huaa
Aakhir insane jo thahra.

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God Bless

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May 1 08 8:16 PM

Neera

mere chand shbdo ko itna samman dene ka bahut bahut dil se shukriya


paheli

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May 1 08 8:22 PM

Sakhi

likhne wale ko apna inam mil jata hai agra padne wale ko pasand aajaye to

shukriya

paheli

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