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Jul 10 06 8:43 PM

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MUJHE AAJ BHI YAAD HAI WO PYAARA SA GAAON
WO SUNSAAN KACHI PAKKI DAGAR
JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI
WO BAAG WO HARYAALI WO PHOOL WO DAALI
WO LEHLEHAATE KHET AUR WO NADIYA KA PANGHANT
WO MITTI KI SONDHI-SONDHI SI KHUSHBOO
AUR LEHRAATI CHANCHAL TAAZI HAWA
NA JAANE KAHAAN GUM HO GAIN WO FIZAAIN
IS SHEHER KI BHEED BHAAD MAIN KAHIN
JEENE KI JAD-O-JAHAD MAIN KAHIN
KHO GAYA HAI MERA GAAON NA JAANE KAHAAN
AB BAS YAADEIN REH GAI HAI
WO TAARON BHARI JAGMAGATI RAATON KI
WO MEETHI SI SHEETAL CHANDNI KI
WO CHANCHAL TEZ HAWAAON KI
KAASH WO DIN PHIR SE LAUT AAI
WO BACHPAN KE DIN SUHAANE
JAHAAN JEEVAN AB BHI WOHI HAI
APNI DHEEMI RAFTAAR SE CHALTA HAI
APNI MASOOMIYAT KO SAMETE
AB BHI KUCH KEHTA HAI....KE LAUT AAO
YE WOHI TUMHAARI APNI MAATI HAI
WOHI TUMHAARA GAAON PYAARA SA
JAHAN TUMHAARA ASTITVA BASA HAI....
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Jul 10 06 9:20 PM

JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI

kitnee khoobsoorta baat kahe ehai aur sab se baree baat aaj bhee hamara astitve hamree jaren hain hamara gaon hai bahut hee achha likha hai aaj Arzoo ne wah
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Jul 10 06 11:04 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ July 10, 2006 08:43 pm)
MUJHE AAJ BHI YAAD HAI WO PYAARA SA GAAON
WO SUNSAAN KACHI PAKKI DAGAR
JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI
WO BAAG WO HARYAALI WO PHOOL WO DAALI
WO LEHLEHAATE KHET AUR WO NADIYA KA PANGHANT
WO MITTI KI SONDHI-SONDHI SI KHUSHBOO
AUR LEHRAATI CHANCHAL TAAZI HAWA
NA JAANE KAHAAN GUM HO GAIN WO FIZAAIN
IS SHEHER KI BHEED BHAAD MAIN KAHIN
JEENE KI JAD-O-JAHAD MAIN KAHIN
KHO GAYA HAI MERA GAAON NA JAANE KAHAAN
AB BAS YAADEIN REH GAI HAI
WO TAARON BHARI JAGMAGATI RAATON KI
WO MEETHI SI SHEETAL CHANDNI KI
WO CHANCHAL TEZ HAWAAON KI
KAASH WO DIN PHIR SE LAUT AAI
WO BACHPAN KE DIN SUHAANE
JAHAAN JEEVAN AB BHI WOHI HAI
APNI DHEEMI RAFTAAR SE CHALTA HAI
APNI MASOOMIYAT KO SAMETE
AB BHI KUCH KEHTA HAI....KE LAUT AAO
YE WOHI TUMHAARI APNI MAATI HAI
WOHI TUMHAARA GAAON PYAARA SA
JAHAN TUMHAARA ASTITVA BASA HAI....

Dear Aarzoo !


You have indeed retrospected so sweet bygone days in such artistic versification that I cannot help expressing what you may read as under:

Rok layta hay tayra her lafz aankhain is tarah

Daikhna purta hay ruk ruk ker tayre tusweer ko

Tayray lufzoun main nazer aaty hay mujh ko chandni

Raat bher purta hay Afzal ub tayre tehreer ko


My cheers for this creative piece.

Afzal Chowdhry

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Jul 11 06 8:43 AM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ July 10, 2006 09:20 pm)
JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI

kitnee khoobsoorta baat kahe ehai aur sab se baree baat aaj bhee hamara astitve hamree jaren hain hamara gaon hai bahut hee achha likha hai aaj Arzoo ne wah
Anil

BOHOT BOHOT SHUKRIYA ANIL...AAPKO HUMAARI YE RACHNA PASAND AAI...AAPNE DAAD DE DIYA TO SAMJHO HUMAARI KOSHISH KAMYAAB HOGAI.. THANKS FOR READING IT...

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Jul 11 06 10:11 AM

Gaon barra pyaar lage shehro se nyaara lge..
Gaon mein jo baat hai woh sheher mein kahan hai..
Muje bhi kaash apne gaon ki yaad aati..
Mera tou koi gaon hee nhi magar main aarzoo ji ke gaon jaana pasand karungi..
Kitna pyaara sa gaoun hai jinki yaad unehin aati hai..
Mera mann kehta hai ki woh mitti ki khushboo bhi kya meethi hogi..
Woh kuchi pucci deeware bhi kya anokhi hongi..
Gaoun mein sab log saath mein hai rehte...
Pepal ki chaoun mein apne din guzarte..
Bache meethi khatti imli khate..
Budhe sair pe nikalte..
Main tou yeh sabkuch imagine hee kar sakti hoon..
Chaalo chale mitwa unn uunch neechi rahon mein unn pyaari pyaari rahon mein kaheen hum kho jaaye...............

Chalo chale aarzoo ji ke gaoun mein

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Unke Ishq mein doob jaane ko dil yeh chahta hai..
Har pal nye khwaab sajane ko dil yeh chahta hai..
Koi kahe unko ki laut aaye mere paas..
Ki unko apni bahon mein bharne ko dil yeh chahta hai..

"SHONA"

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Jul 11 06 11:17 AM

QUOTE (shonaparra @ July 11, 2006 10:11 am)
Gaon barra pyaar lage shehro se nyaara lge..
Gaon mein jo baat hai woh sheher mein kahan hai..
Muje bhi kaash apne gaon ki yaad aati..
Mera tou koi gaon hee nhi magar main aarzoo ji ke gaon jaana pasand karungi..
Kitna pyaara sa gaoun hai jinki yaad unehin aati hai..
Mera mann kehta hai ki woh mitti ki khushboo bhi kya meethi hogi..
Woh kuchi pucci deeware bhi kya anokhi hongi..
Gaoun mein sab log saath mein hai rehte...
Pepal ki chaoun mein apne din guzarte..
Bache meethi khatti imli khate..
Budhe sair pe nikalte..
Main tou yeh sabkuch imagine hee kar sakti hoon..
Chaalo chale mitwa unn uunch neechi rahon mein unn pyaari pyaari rahon mein kaheen hum kho jaaye...............

Chalo chale aarzoo ji ke gaoun mein

OHHHHHHH SO SWEEEEET SHONA...CHALO TUM KO LEKAR CHALE HUM UN FIZAAON MAIN...WO PYAARE SE GAAON MAIN...WO SAPNON KI CHAAON MAIN...JAHAAN AB BHI MERI YAADEIN BASI HAI...

KITNA ACHA LIKHA HAI SHONA...GOD BLESS...HAAN CHALO CHALEIN...
BOHOT KHOOBSURATI SE JAWAAB DIYA HAI...THANKS A LOT...

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Jul 11 06 11:45 AM

WELCOME AARZOO JI,

aapne apne gaoun ke baarein mein likha hee itna achaa hai ki...
Buss jee karta hai main yuhi pyaare se jwab doon...
Yuhi likhti rehna aap..

aapki apni shona.

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Unke Ishq mein doob jaane ko dil yeh chahta hai..
Har pal nye khwaab sajane ko dil yeh chahta hai..
Koi kahe unko ki laut aaye mere paas..
Ki unko apni bahon mein bharne ko dil yeh chahta hai..

"SHONA"

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Jul 11 06 7:57 PM

QUOTE (Faypal @ July 10, 2006 11:04 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ July 10, 2006 08:43 pm)
MUJHE AAJ BHI YAAD HAI WO PYAARA SA GAAON
WO SUNSAAN KACHI PAKKI DAGAR
JISKI SUBHEN DHUND SE BHARI HOTI THI
AUR SHAAMEIN PANCHIYON KI
CHAHCHAHATON SE GOONJTI THI
WO BAAG WO HARYAALI WO PHOOL WO DAALI
WO LEHLEHAATE KHET AUR WO NADIYA KA PANGHANT
WO MITTI KI SONDHI-SONDHI SI KHUSHBOO
AUR LEHRAATI CHANCHAL TAAZI HAWA
NA JAANE KAHAAN GUM HO GAIN WO FIZAAIN
IS SHEHER KI BHEED BHAAD MAIN KAHIN
JEENE KI JAD-O-JAHAD MAIN KAHIN
KHO GAYA HAI MERA GAAON NA JAANE KAHAAN
AB BAS YAADEIN REH GAI HAI
WO TAARON BHARI JAGMAGATI RAATON KI
WO MEETHI SI SHEETAL CHANDNI KI
WO CHANCHAL TEZ HAWAAON KI 
KAASH WO DIN PHIR SE LAUT AAI
WO BACHPAN KE DIN SUHAANE
JAHAAN JEEVAN AB BHI WOHI HAI
APNI DHEEMI RAFTAAR SE CHALTA HAI
APNI MASOOMIYAT KO SAMETE
AB BHI KUCH KEHTA HAI....KE LAUT AAO
YE WOHI TUMHAARI APNI MAATI HAI
WOHI TUMHAARA GAAON PYAARA SA
JAHAN TUMHAARA ASTITVA BASA HAI....  

Dear Aarzoo !


You have indeed retrospected so sweet bygone days in such artistic versification that I cannot help expressing what you may read as under:

Rok layta hay tayra her lafz aankhain is tarah

Daikhna purta hay ruk ruk ker tayre tusweer ko

Tayray lufzoun main nazer aaty hay mujh ko chandni

Raat bher purta hay Afzal ub tayre tehreer ko


My cheers for this creative piece.

THANKS A LOT AFZAL FOR SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORDS...UR WORDS R MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN UR WRITINGS...THANKS FOR SUCH LOVELY REVIEW....

AND THANKS ONCE ONCE AGAIN FOR WRITING SUCH BEAUTIFUL SHER...GOD BLESS...

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Jul 12 06 2:04 AM

QUOTE (shonaparra @ July 11, 2006 11:45 am)
WELCOME AARZOO JI,

aapne apne gaoun ke baarein mein likha hee itna achaa hai ki...
Buss jee karta hai main yuhi pyaare se jwab doon...
Yuhi likhti rehna aap..

aapki apni shona.

THANK YOU SHONA...

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Jul 12 06 1:41 PM

so beutiful Aarzoo apane hamare dil me bhi ek Aarzoo jaga di..........

kash hamara bhi koi gaon hota
chhote chhote khushiyon se rista juda hota
wo mitti ki khusbu, wo madmast hawaye
kash hajaro khwaisho se mera ghar bhara hota

Akash

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After every victory you made one new enemy.....

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