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Mar 15 08 7:48 PM

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Mere Nayan bare aatur hai
priye tumhe paane ko |
aur dekho, kumhlayee aankho mai bhee,
le aate hain tarunai, tere tasveer banane ko |

bilakh-chalak kar palkon sang
nain banate hai teri chaaya ,
tei muskan , tera aawran
aur rang bharte hain apne ashruon se |


par ye ashru bhe saath nahe dete ,
chann bhar mai dhara par aa jaate hain,
aur feer eek sannata
aur feer mere nayanon ki feer wahe kosis......


jab thakne lagte nayano ki kosis
to wo barbas pooch baithte mere karno se
ki...kya tumne suna
mere priye ke bol


Aur mere karn bilak se parte
apne eentzaar ko anyas kah parte
..door door se doondh raha
hunn apne priyatam ki aawaj ko


jab kahee hawa chalti hai
aur ye katl karti hui peron ki sansanahat
to usme doondhta hunn main...
tere swar, teri aahat , aur tere pag chap
aur paata sunya , saanjh , Maru




mann kah uthta hai
priye tum door kahee ho...
aur door chali jaa rahe ho
Par hridaya aaj bhee bharte hain
tumhe apni swanso mai


Ohh ye barfili baaris
jisme swatah jaa khara hota hunn
aur apne aansuon ki tapis bujhata hunn
apni agan ees dhara , ees barf mai lagata hunn


Aur khare hokar een barfili raaton mai
mai bhee apne nayano sang
tumhari awiral pratima banata hunn
saayd cheer saayad anant



~Suyash

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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Mar 18 08 5:03 PM

par ye ashru bhe saath nahe dete ,
chann bhar mai dhara par aa jaate hain,
aur feer eek sannata
aur feer mere nayanon ki feer wahe kosis......


jab thakne lagte nayano ki kosis
to wo barbas pooch baithte mere karno se
ki...kya tumne suna
mere priye ke bol


Wowwwwwwwww kia leekha hay har alhfaaz byhad saadiq hay

God bless

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Mar 28 08 5:34 AM

QUOTE (mahak @ March 18, 2008 05:03 pm)
par ye ashru bhe saath nahe dete ,
chann bhar mai dhara par aa jaate hain,
aur feer eek sannata
aur feer mere nayanon ki feer wahe kosis......


jab thakne lagte nayano ki kosis
to wo barbas pooch baithte mere karno se
ki...kya tumne suna
mere priye ke bol


Wowwwwwwwww kia leekha hay har alhfaaz byhad saadiq hay

God bless

Thnks Mahak !

ye lines jo aapko achii lagi..wo lines hai jo maine jiyee hai :-)


Thnks for reading and appreciating !

~Shaam

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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Mar 28 08 5:35 AM

QUOTE (bisani @ March 15, 2008 08:13 pm)
KHUBSURAT

BAHUT ACCHE...BHAI!

Thnks buddy!

~Shaam

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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Mar 28 08 5:37 AM

QUOTE (Sweetsapna @ March 17, 2008 06:24 am)
wah suyash beautifulllllllllllllllllllllll likha hai justju/rose.gif

Thnks for reading sapna :-)

readers make poems beautifull :-)


~Shaam

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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Apr 1 08 6:26 PM

mann kah uthta hai
priye tum door kahee ho...
aur door chali jaa rahe ho
Par hridaya aaj bhee bharte hain
tumhe apni swanso mai

haan pyaar jo door bhale chale jaaye pass hi hota hai


Ohh ye barfili baaris
jisme swatah jaa khara hota hunn
aur apne aansuon ki tapis bujhata hunn
apni agan ees dhara , ees barf mai lagata hunn

bhaut sachhi baat

Aur khare hokar een barfili raaton mai
mai bhee apne nayano sang
tumhari awiral pratima banata hunn
saayd cheer saayad anant

hmm dukh ke siwa aansun ke siwa tanhayi ke siwa kaha kuch hota

bahut hi apni si lagi aapki kavita suyas

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Apr 8 08 8:28 AM

QUOTE (Shrddha @ April 01, 2008 06:26 pm)
mann kah uthta hai
priye tum door kahee ho...
aur door chali jaa rahe ho
Par hridaya aaj bhee bharte hain
tumhe apni swanso mai

haan pyaar jo door bhale chale jaaye pass hi hota hai


Ohh ye barfili baaris
jisme swatah jaa khara hota hunn
aur apne aansuon ki tapis bujhata hunn
apni agan ees dhara , ees barf mai lagata hunn

bhaut sachhi baat

Aur khare hokar een barfili raaton mai
mai bhee apne nayano sang
tumhari awiral pratima banata hunn
saayd cheer saayad anant

hmm dukh ke siwa aansun ke siwa tanhayi ke siwa kaha kuch hota

bahut hi apni si lagi aapki kavita suyas

Thnks Shrdha Ji

Thnks a ton....


aap u hee hosla afjaayee karte rahen.......


~Suyash

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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Apr 8 08 9:58 AM

amazing yash...ek tasveer kheech di aapne hamare bhi nayeno me...
aur kaisa intzaar ka rang bhara hai...kaabile tareef hai...bahut khoob...

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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May 20 08 9:23 AM

QUOTE (Tanha_sagar @ April 08, 2008 09:58 am)
amazing yash...ek tasveer kheech di aapne hamare bhi nayeno me...
aur kaisa intzaar ka rang bhara hai...kaabile tareef hai...bahut khoob...

Thanks Tanha

Thanks a lot for reading it...and appreciating it :-)


~Suyash

jab roop badal kar aati ho
priee tan mann mai eek baaris si laati ho
madd hridaye pe khusiyon si chaa jaati ho
jab roop badal kar aati ho

~suyash

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