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Mar 1 08 3:11 PM

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Guldaan me saje phoolon ne justju/rose.gif

dheeme se thandi hawaon se poocha,

kab.........aakhir kab

mai tumhare safar ki raahi banungi,

mujhe yoon hi tum na choro,

in khamosh si tanhaayion me !
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Mar 1 08 7:53 PM

QUOTE (ahsaAs @ March 01, 2008 03:11 pm)
Guldaan me saje phoolon ne justju/rose.gif

dheeme se thandi hawaon se poocha,

kab.........aakhir kab

mai tumhare safar ki raahi banungi,

mujhe yoon hi tum na choro,

in khamosh si tanhaayion me !

tanhai

insaan ka azali naseeb bhi hay or uski behtareen sathi bhi

{sannata jab tanhai ky zahr men chubhta hay
wo gharian kesy katTi hen kahy batain tumhen}

buht khobsorat kalaam share kia hay aap nay

zabardast

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Mar 2 08 2:30 PM

tanhai

insaan ka azali naseeb bhi hay or uski behtareen sathi bhi

{sannata jab tanhai ky zahr men chubhta hay
wo gharian kesy katTi hen kahy batain tumhen}

buht khobsorat kalaam share kia hay aap nay

zabardast


Arif.......

Sach kahan aapney, tanhai se kaun bach paya hai, asli saathi hai...

Apna ekdam mind blowing sher likha iske jawab me, bohut achha laga.
bohut sahi hai, un ghariyon ka koi bayan nahi hota, wo to bhukt-bhogi (the one who feels it) he jaan sakta hai !

Thanks Arif.

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Mar 3 08 1:21 PM

behad umda kahoon to aapko achcha lagega
par mafi chahta you r just sharing ur thought not justifying with shayiri

write more or less but make sure it should come out in terms of good poetry as well, the way this site is all about, im surprised for all those people who have encouraged you for these lines, i know they all are good poets themselves and can make you correct your way of making and writings pritty easily.

aapka aur yahan bahot sare logo ka bahot bura alochak 'bana'

siddarth shekhawat

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Mar 6 08 11:45 PM

Shrddha jee.....


Aapka kisi ki rachna tak aana hi uska inaam hota hai.
Warna ye to kuch aise hi ehsaas hote hai, jo aap sab ke beech baantana chahti hoon.

Parhne ke liye Shukriya Shrddha jee.

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Mar 8 08 3:23 PM

justju/fantastic.gif

yeh phoooool bhi hain na kitne shant kitne khamosh.....

khamosh rehkar bhi woh khushiyaan or pyaar is jahaan mein baant'te hain....

aur hum insaan uss fooooool ke baidaan ko bhi bhoool jaaten hain..

kash yeh fooool hum sab ke jivan mein khushiyaan hi khushiyaan laaye......

issi ummid mein..

aapka dost..

jeet

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Oh Tan Mainu Har Waar Manaundi Bahut Si...
Mere Ton Hi Na Sambhaal Hoye Sucche Moti Pyar De
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Mar 8 08 5:50 PM




Sach kaha aapne Jeet......

phool.....shant, saumya se ek mook bhasha bolte hain
har ehsaason ka izhaar phool kar sakte hain.....
Dua ke liye shukriya

Thanks dost....

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