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Feb 20 08 10:41 AM

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{center}Paanv hamare apne haiN par safar begana lagta hai
VarshoN se rehte jis Ghar maiN ab begana lagta hai.

Basti Ek basi thi kal tak khanddar katha sunaate haiN,
Kal jis Gulshan maiN rounaq thi ab veerana lagta hai.

Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.

Kitni chehel-pehel thi Ghar maiN ammaN-abbu rehte the,
GuddiyoN-GuddoN wala bachpan ab afsana lagta hai.

Hansne waale chehre yaaro aksar hameiN udaas lage,
Unke dil maiN dard-o-gum ka ajab khazana lagta hai.
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Feb 20 08 12:09 PM

speech less harsh jii ..koi lafz nahii hai iski tariif mein

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.

behad khoobsurat..or gahre bhaav khoobsurtii ka bhi javab nahii dulhan ki tarah sajaya hai aapne

daad kubool kareN

बाद मुद्दत के जो उनकी नजरों से नजरें मिली!
कशमकश दिल में हुई नीर नयन से बह चला!!


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Feb 20 08 10:29 PM

Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.


bahut khoobsoorat kalaam,harash ji
daad qabool farmaayen

chaman

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Feb 21 08 3:10 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ February 20, 2008 10:41 am)
{center}Paanv hamare apne haiN par safar begana lagta hai
VarshoN se rehte jis Ghar maiN ab begana lagta hai.

Basti Ek basi thi kal tak khanddar katha sunaate haiN,
Kal jis Gulshan maiN rounaq thi ab veerana lagta hai.

Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.

Kitni chehel-pehel thi Ghar maiN ammaN-abbu rehte the,
GuddiyoN-GuddoN wala bachpan ab afsana lagta hai.

Hansne waale chehre yaaro aksar hameiN udaas lage,
Unke dil maiN dard-o-gum ka ajab khazana lagta hai.
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Harash ji
taras gaye the aapke kalam ka jadu padhne ke liye.
wowwwwwwwwwwww kitni khubsoorat ghazal likhi hai

Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.

Kitni chehel-pehel thi Ghar maiN ammaN-abbu rehte the,
GuddiyoN-GuddoN wala bachpan ab afsana lagta hai.

yeh sher toh dil mein bas gaye hain. God bless u ji. daad hazir hai kabool farmayain
nira

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Feb 21 08 8:51 PM

QUOTE (dheerendra @ February 20, 2008 11:39 am)
Bahut hi khoobsurat kalam Harsha ji.. har ek sher dil ko chhoo gaya..
dil se dad hazir hai..

janaab dheer ji bahoot bahoot shukriyaaa.....

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Feb 21 08 10:12 PM

Harsh jee.....


ek antaraal ke baad aapka likha hua kuch parha ....

Bohut gehri baatein likhi hain aapne....ab kaun si lines zyada achhi hai, ye kehna mushkil hai, har panktiyaan apne aap me hi bejore hai.

Keep sharing.

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Feb 22 08 9:54 AM

QUOTE (nirjharneer @ February 20, 2008 12:09 pm)
speech less harsh jii ..koi lafz nahii hai iski tariif mein

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.

behad khoobsurat..or gahre bhaav khoobsurtii ka bhi javab nahii dulhan ki tarah sajaya hai aapne

daad kubool kareN

nirjhar saheb aapke shabd toh shayad hamare shabdoN se kahiN jiyada acche lag rahe haiN...shukriyaa janaab...


Harash

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Feb 23 08 11:55 PM

QUOTE (chamann @ February 20, 2008 10:29 pm)
Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.


bahut khoobsoorat kalaam,harash ji
daad qabool farmaayen

chaman

Chamann ji aapke vichaar is tehreer per achhe lage......samjho ke likhna safal ho gaya..


harash

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Feb 24 08 12:00 AM

QUOTE (chamann @ February 20, 2008 10:29 pm)
Bachhpan doonde kin galiyoN maiN sab kutchh kitna badal gaya,
Itne per bhi wahi sheher kitna pehchana lagta hai.

Nayi peediyaaN nayi seediyaN poochhe koun puraane ko,
BateiN ker lete bargad se wahi purana lagta hai.


bahut khoobsoorat kalaam,harash ji
daad qabool farmaayen

chaman

Chamann ji aapke vichaar is tehreer per achhe lage......samjho ke likhna safal ho gaya..


harash

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