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Feb 19 08 10:38 PM

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{center}jab say bichry tum
dil par phail gia hamdam
pat jhar ka mosam

men jalta sehra
ik din aa ky baras jana
tu saawan ki ghata


har dukh seh jaain
chupky say mar kar ik din
dil ki keh jaain

sun dil ka ahwal
tujh bin beet gaay jo din
lagty hen wo saal


koi to ho apna
ham bhi piar bhara Arif
dekhen kabhi sapna
{/center}
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#1 [url]

Feb 19 08 10:45 PM

QUOTE (Arif Naseem @ February 19, 2008 10:38 pm)
{center}jab say bichry tum
dil par phail gia hamdam
pat jhar ka mosam

men jalta sehra
ik din aa ky baras jana
tu saawan ki ghata


har dukh seh jaain
chupky say mar kar ik din
dil ki keh jaain

sun dil ka ahwal
tujh bin beet gaay jo din
lagty hen wo saal


koi to ho apna
ham bhi piar bhara Arif
dekhen kabhi sapna
{/center}

wahhhhhhhhhhhh bhai
kitni khubsoorti se dilki batain byaan kar di hai.
bahut acha laga aapko padhna.
aapki behan
nira

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Feb 19 08 11:48 PM

QUOTE (Arif Naseem @ February 19, 2008 10:38 pm)
{center}jab say bichry tum
dil par phail gia hamdam
pat jhar ka mosam

men jalta sehra
ik din aa ky baras jana
tu saawan ki ghata


har dukh seh jaain
chupky say mar kar ik din
dil ki keh jaain

sun dil ka ahwal
tujh bin beet gaay jo din
lagty hen wo saal


koi to ho apna
ham bhi piar bhara Arif
dekhen kabhi sapna
{/center}

oyeeeeeeeeee arif Ujala kahaan hai...why this sad sad waali poem...

waise likha bohot acha hai judaai ka dard aur kiissi se sachi mohobbat ka suboot hai..

apna khayaal rakhna aur yunhi mehfil sajaate rehna.

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Feb 20 08 2:18 AM

BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT HAIKU LIKHEN HAIN,ARIF SAAHIB
MUBARAK QABOOL FARMAAYEN
CHAMAN

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Feb 20 08 2:55 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ February 19, 2008 11:48 pm)
oyeeeeeeeeee arif Ujala kahaan hai...why this sad sad waali poem...

waise likha bohot acha hai judaai ka dard aur kiissi se sachi mohobbat ka suboot hai..

apna khayaal rakhna aur yunhi mehfil sajaate rehna.

Dont Worry Arzoo!
Ujala mery paas bhi hay or saath bhi
or rahi Sad Sad ghazal to wo aap ziada samjhti hen
Aap bhi apna khial rakhiyga

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Feb 21 08 7:56 PM

QUOTE (Arif Naseem @ February 19, 2008 10:38 pm)
{center}jab say bichry tum
dil par phail gia hamdam
pat jhar ka mosam

men jalta sehra
ik din aa ky baras jana
tu saawan ki ghata


har dukh seh jaain
chupky say mar kar ik din
dil ki keh jaain

sun dil ka ahwal
tujh bin beet gaay jo din
lagty hen wo saal


koi to ho apna
ham bhi piar bhara Arif
dekhen kabhi sapna
{/center}




wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kya likha hai justju/a096.gif justju/a096.gif

dil ki feelings ko aj tak ap gajal ya sher ke sahare show kar rahe the ....

per aj apka yeh andaj bhi bahut pasand aya mujheeeeeeee justju/fantastic.gif justju/fantastic.gif

apna khub sara khyaal rakhna aur yuhi shabdon ke sath khubsurati ke sath khelte rahna justju/thumbup.gif justju/thumbup.gif

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#9 [url]

Feb 23 08 3:57 PM

QUOTE (chamann @ February 20, 2008 02:18 am)
BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT HAIKU LIKHEN HAIN,ARIF SAAHIB
MUBARAK QABOOL FARMAAYEN
CHAMAN

Shukria Chaman
Tareef say ziada khushi is sinf i sukhan say aap ki agahi jan kr hui
Buht Shukria

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#10 [url]

Feb 24 08 8:23 PM

QUOTE (Mona @ February 21, 2008 07:56 pm)

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kya likha hai justju/a096.gif justju/a096.gif

dil ki feelings ko aj tak ap gajal ya sher ke sahare show kar rahe the ....

per aj apka yeh andaj bhi bahut pasand aya mujheeeeeeee justju/fantastic.gif justju/fantastic.gif

apna khub sara khyaal rakhna aur yuhi shabdon ke sath khubsurati ke sath khelte rahna justju/thumbup.gif justju/thumbup.gif


kya likha hai ?? wohi likha hay jo abhi tum nay parha
is men bhala pochny wali kia baat hay Akhrot



tumhen pasand aaya hmari mehnat wasool ho gai

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#13 [url]

Feb 28 08 10:48 AM

jab say bichry tum
dil par phail gia hamdam
pat jhar ka mosam

men jalta sehra
ik din aa ky baras jana
tu saawan ki ghata


har dukh seh jaain
chupky say mar kar ik din
dil ki keh jaain

sun dil ka ahwal
tujh bin beet gaay jo din
lagty hen wo saal


koi to ho apna
ham bhi piar bhara Arif
dekhen kabhi sapna


Bohut khoobsurat bayan.......judai ki tarap hai isme....
Dil se hi har rang, dil se miley har mausam !
usi se patjhar, wohi hai sawan, usi me marusthal, usi me upwan (garden)....
keep sharing.....

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