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Jan 19 08 5:49 AM

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Maa beti ka rishta bahut ki atoot hai, jis tarah vo paalkar usse badha karti hai sanskar deti.
aor aane wale kal ke liye tyaar karti, koi nahi kar sakta. apne piya ke ghar ko sawarna bhi toh maa hi sikhati hai. par jab vo babul ka angan chor pardesh jati kya beet.ti beti, maa aor babul ker dil par, yeh ek choti si koshish ki hai aaptak paunchane ki. aapki rai, achi ho ya buri , zaroor likhain, muje intazaar rahega, shukriya.
nira

Maa hi janam deti
Fir aise kyun roti hai
Beti hi toh maa ki
Parchayi hoti hai
Angan mien ----------
Halke halke pavn
Jab chalti hai
Payal goonj uthati hai
Ek sakoon sa deti hai
Beti maa ki
Parchayi hoti hai

Bachpan badhte badhte
Jawani ki seedhiya chadte chadte
Angan smetane ko jee karta hai
Mano kabhi ye bhi choot jayega
Man kynu darta hai
Main jab bhi golmatol hokar soti
Maa chupke se mathe par hath laga roti
Kee main bhi jaoongi pardesh
Main dhundati sapno main
Piya ka desh

Aankh khulti to samne hota mera hee ghar
Mujhko lagta hai fir kaisa ye dar
Kon mujhko karega door
Kynu hai maa baap aise mazboor

Ye jaroori hai main chod doon apna ghar
Jismain jeeti rahi sans hathon main bhar
Pyaar kand kand se karti hoon main is kadar
Ho gayee jo zuda sach main jaoongi mar

Koi ban ke sajan aa bhi ja iss kadar
Jaan lele magar cheen mat mera ghar
Main tere waste pee bhi lungi jahar
Bas mujhe baksh de mere babul ka ghar

Nira
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Jan 19 08 6:11 AM

Koi ban ke sajan aa bhi ja iss kadar
Jaan lele magar cheen mat mera ghar
Main tere waste pee bhi lungi jahar
Bas mujhe baksh de mere babul ka ghar

mithayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


bahut khoooob

jaanti ho main b ik namz likhi thi..

kuhc yahi khyaal thye .....

mai woh namz bhi post karta hu,......

bahut acha likha tumne

...mithayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Jan 19 08 6:14 AM

for shaaaz aapi...........
from her mom..


.........ma ik riwayat...........

tum jhoot bolti ho shaaz bhi
mai kal bhi thi...
mai hu aaj bhi

kaun gaya hai....
bas chehra hi to mera
mera badan.
ruh to abhi bhi bahi hai jaha thi

ma kabhi nahi marti..
bas chehre badlti hai
ma ik riwayat hai
jo badan se badan chalti hai

jab tu aayee thi
to meri ma ne chehra badla tha
mera chahra ban gayee thi meri ma

aur mai to teen bar tujhme maa bani hu

ab mai tera chehra ban gayee hu
bas dunia se mai gayee hu
ma to ab bhi hai....
ma to ab bhi hai

teri ma tujhme saans le rahi hai
jo likha hai bhayee ne tere
sach yahi hai...
sun le sach yahi hai

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Jan 19 08 7:25 AM

aadaab Misty Ji,

aapkii kavitaa aapke jazbaat aur aHsaasaat kii tarjumanii kartii hai. saHeeH kahaa aapne k maaN hii apnii beTii ko baabul kaa ghar chhoR piyaa des jaane ke liye taiyaar kartii hai par beTii babul ke ghar ko chhoRnaa apnii maut samajhtii hai. baabul kaa ghar chhoRnaa aur piyaa des jaanaa ek jaaN-kaah amr hai. yaqeenan takleef deh lamHaa hotaa hai...par, yehii reet hai, yehii rivaaj hai aur yehi dastoor-e-zamaana bhii hai...shaayad, kisi nukta e nazar se hamaarii zaroorat bhii hai. Good attempt...Keep trying

_______Hashmat

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Jan 19 08 12:40 PM

Bahut acche ehsas hain Nira ji.. sach main maa beti ka rishta bahut hi anokha aur pragadh hota hai...

Nice one..

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Jan 19 08 2:06 PM

wah nira wah or janu manu aap dono ko risky aaj ek bahtreen or umenda kalam ke laiyai dil se dherooon duawaon ke sath salam kareta hoon dil khush hua

```THANKS TO THOSE WHO HATED ME ``THEY MADE ME A STRONGER PERSON`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LOVED ME ``THEY MADE MY HEART BIGGER``
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO WORRIED ABOUT ME ``THEY LET ME KNOW THAT THEY ACTUALLY CARED
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LEFT ME```THEY MADE ME REALIZE THAT NOTHING LAST FOREVER`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO ENTERED MY LIFE``THEY MADE ME KNOW WHO I M TODAY `
``` GOD BLESS YOU ALL

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Jan 19 08 3:05 PM

Ye jaroori hai main chod doon apna ghar
Jismain jeeti rahi sans hathon main bhar
Pyaar kand kand se karti hoon main is kadar
Ho gayee jo zuda sach main jaoongi mar

Koi ban ke sajan aa bhi ja iss kadar
Jaan lele magar cheen mat mera ghar
Main tere waste pee bhi lungi jahar
Bas mujhe baksh de mere babul ka ghar

NIRU D,
ek BETI ki bhawnao ko badi sundarta se bayan kiya hai aapne.
SACHMUCH ek Sacchai bhari baat ko, apne shabdo se ek Rachna ke roop me utara hai aapne.
achha laga padkar.
aise hi likhti raho aap.
THANXX 4 SHARING

"Laut kar khud to kabhi aata nahi,is duniya mai koi..
par yaad bahut aata hai,, chhodkar jaane wala.."

Love happens only once..........The rest is just life............

"< - J - I - T - >"

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Jan 19 08 6:27 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ January 19, 2008 05:49 am)
Maa beti ka rishta bahut ki atoot hai, jis tarah vo paalkar usse badha karti hai sanskar deti.
aor aane wale kal ke liye tyaar karti, koi nahi kar sakta. apne piya ke ghar ko sawarna bhi toh maa hi sikhati hai. par jab vo babul ka angan chor pardesh jati kya beet.ti beti, maa aor babul ker dil par, yeh ek choti si koshish ki hai aaptak paunchane ki. aapki rai, achi ho ya buri , zaroor likhain, muje intazaar rahega, shukriya.
nira

Maa hi janam deti
Fir aise kyun roti hai
Beti hi toh maa ki
Parchayi hoti hai
Angan mien ----------
Halke halke pavn
Jab chalti hai
Payal goonj uthati hai
Ek sakoon sa deti hai
Beti maa ki
Parchayi hoti hai

Bachpan badhte badhte
Jawani ki seedhiya chadte chadte
Angan smetane ko jee karta hai
Mano kabhi ye bhi choot jayega
Man kynu darta hai
Main jab bhi golmatol hokar soti
Maa chupke se mathe par hath laga roti
Kee main bhi jaoongi pardesh
Main dhundati sapno main
Piya ka desh

Aankh khulti to samne hota mera hee ghar
Mujhko lagta hai fir kaisa ye dar
Kon mujhko karega door
Kynu hai maa baap aise mazboor

Ye jaroori hai main chod doon apna ghar
Jismain jeeti rahi sans hathon main bhar
Pyaar kand kand se karti hoon main is kadar
Ho gayee jo zuda sach main jaoongi mar

Koi ban ke sajan aa bhi ja iss kadar
Jaan lele magar cheen mat mera ghar
Main tere waste pee bhi lungi jahar
Bas mujhe baksh de mere babul ka ghar

Nira

justju/fantastic.gif didi kitni khoobsoorati se aapne Maa Beti ke rishte ko byaN kiya hai.................no words for dis...............aapki sab rachnaoN mein se yeh muje sabse achi lagi.....


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bas didi aise hi likhte rahe aur hame padne ka mauka dete rahe

apna khyaal rakhna diiii

love u.......... justju/246.gif

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Jan 19 08 8:36 PM

bahut badhiya se bayan kiya hai har ahsas ye bahut kash kavitayon men se hai ise bahut sambhal ke rakhana
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Jan 19 08 9:52 PM

bahut khoob nira diiiii...zabardast likha hai aapnee..kitni behtareen tareeke se aapne jazbaat ki tarjumaani ki haiii...very well ritten..
likhti rahen yunhi ,khush rahen

U BIN BULAAYE MILNE CHALA AATA HAI,
GHAM KO MUJHSE YEH UNSIYAT KAISI??

---AKELIJAAN---

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Jan 20 08 1:06 PM

Bahut hi khoobsoorat khayaal hai aur dil ko choo leta hai. ek jawan ladkii jo babul ki dehleej par kar ke apne naye ghar jane wali hai.. uske dil me jazbaato ka ek sailab hota hai.. jo na chahte huwe bhi use paar karna hota hai.. Ek nayi zindagi ke liye.. kuchh rawayto ko zinda rakhne ek liye or shayad jamane ke dastoor ko barkarar rakhne ke liye.

aapne bahut hi kareeb se un jazbato ko pesh kiya hai.. or aapki adaygii dil par asar karti hai.
Wah.. bahut khoob. Likhti rahiye .

Baada phir baada hai main zehar bhi pee jaauN 'Qateel',
Shart ye hai koi bahoN meiN sambhaley Mujhko.......

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Jan 21 08 12:11 PM

Wah wah Kya Baat Hai NIRA Didu.. Kamaal kar diya aapne.. !!! Behut Hi Bhavuk Peshkash
Hai aapki.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooooob...!!!



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**~** ManN **~**

"Hum Dil to kya Rooh main Utar Jayenge,
Aap Chaahoge agar Chaahne Walon ki Tarah"

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Jan 22 08 6:56 AM

QUOTE (janumanu @ January 19, 2008 06:11 am)
Koi ban ke sajan aa bhi ja iss kadar
Jaan lele magar cheen mat mera ghar
Main tere waste pee bhi lungi jahar
Bas mujhe baksh de mere babul ka ghar

mithayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


bahut khoooob

jaanti ho main b ik namz likhi thi..

kuhc yahi khyaal thye .....

mai woh namz bhi post karta hu,......

bahut acha likha tumne

...mithayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

jammmm
thank u ji tmuhe nazm pasnad aayi. yeh toh achi baat huyi tumne bhi isi topic par likha hai.

meethayeeeee

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Jan 22 08 7:06 AM

QUOTE (janumanu @ January 19, 2008 06:14 am)
for shaaaz aapi...........
from her mom..


.........ma ik riwayat...........

tum jhoot bolti ho shaaz bhi
mai kal bhi thi...
mai hu aaj bhi

kaun gaya hai....
bas chehra hi to mera
mera badan.
ruh to abhi bhi bahi hai jaha thi

ma kabhi nahi marti..
bas chehre badlti hai
ma ik riwayat hai
jo badan se badan chalti hai

jab tu aayee thi
to meri ma ne chehra badla tha
mera chahra ban gayee thi meri ma

aur mai to teen bar tujhme maa bani hu

ab mai tera chehra ban gayee hu
bas dunia se mai gayee hu
ma to ab bhi hai....
ma to ab bhi hai

teri ma tujhme saans le rahi hai
jo likha hai bhayee ne tere
sach yahi hai...
sun le sach yahi hai

bahut pyaari nazm hai sach chehre badalte maa toh zinda rahti hai.

bahut acha laga padhkar.

meethayee

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Jan 22 08 7:14 AM

QUOTE (Mitwaa @ January 19, 2008 07:25 am)
aadaab Misty Ji,

aapkii kavitaa aapke jazbaat aur aHsaasaat kii tarjumanii kartii hai. saHeeH kahaa aapne k maaN hii apnii beTii ko baabul kaa ghar chhoR piyaa des jaane ke liye taiyaar kartii hai par beTii babul ke ghar ko chhoRnaa apnii maut samajhtii hai. baabul kaa ghar chhoRnaa aur piyaa des jaanaa ek jaaN-kaah amr hai. yaqeenan takleef deh lamHaa hotaa hai...par, yehii reet hai, yehii rivaaj hai aur yehi dastoor-e-zamaana bhii hai...shaayad, kisi nukta e nazar se hamaarii zaroorat bhii hai. Good attempt...Keep trying

_______Hashmat

Meett aapne mere jazbaaton ko samajha
ehsaason ko mehsoos kiya muje acha laga,
sach riwaazon ko ma.na toh hot hi hai.

aapka bahut bahut shukriya yahan saath milta rahi iski asha karti hoon.

nira

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Jan 22 08 7:18 AM

QUOTE (dheerendra @ January 19, 2008 12:40 pm)
Bahut acche ehsas hain Nira ji.. sach main maa beti ka rishta bahut hi anokha aur pragadh hota hai...

Nice one..

dheeren ji

aapko pasand aayi meri nazm iska dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon

nira

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Jan 22 08 12:26 PM

niraaaaaaaaaaaaa

aur kuch baki bacha he to ab meri jaaan nichor de....

uffffffffffff

kya kya topic le aati he...
rula k hi manegi...........
leking muje nahi ronaaaaaaaaa

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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Jan 25 08 5:39 AM

QUOTE (risky @ January 19, 2008 02:06 pm)
wah nira wah or janu manu aap dono ko risky aaj ek bahtreen or umenda kalam ke laiyai dil se dherooon duawaon ke sath salam kareta hoon dil khush hua

bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaa

aapko meri nazm aur janu ki nazm pasand aayi
aapka bahut bahut shukriya, yunhi saath dete rahiye

aapki meethoooo

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