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Jul 3 06 12:18 AM

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Khowaab-o-Gul Pereyshan rahnay do
Hamin Bahar na keroo Khizan rahnay do

kun chupatay ho dunia say hamary Batain
ya tu ayan hain ayan rahnay do

Dil kay phaphooloon ko na chayroo aysay
jo dard jahan hai wahan rahnay do

jo hai man main kahan koi nikalta hai ?
choroo ya waqat ka zeeyan rahnay do

na bharoo zakham hamaray saray
kuch tu gha-o kay nishan rahnay do

Sab lay lo ham say Sab hi kuch lay loo
bus aawaz-e-pa ka guman rahnay do

Jo lutf hai nala-e-neem-shab main Zee
Hamain yun hi bay karan rahnay do

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Jul 3 06 2:29 AM

HUMESHA KI TARHA PHIR KAMAAL KAR DIYA...BOHOT ACHA LIKHTE HO ZEESHAAN...HUMEIN KHUSHI HAI KE AAP IS BAZM MAIN BAAR-BAAR AATE HO...LIKHTE REHNA..HUMESHA...

na bharoo zakham hamaray saray
kuch tu gha-o kay nishan rahnay do

Sab lay lo ham say Sab hi kuch lay loo
bus aawaz-e-pa ka guman rahnay do

WAISE SAARA KALAAM KHOOBSURAT HAI...PAR YE DO SHER DIL KO CHU GAI...

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Jul 3 06 7:05 AM

"Khowaab-o-Gul Pereyshan rahnay do
Hamin Bahar na keroo Khizan rahnay do

kun chupatay ho dunia say hamary Batain
ya tu ayan hain ayan rahnay do "


Khoobsurat aagaaz............


"Dil kay phaphooloon ko na chayroo aysay
jo dard jahan hai wahan rahnay do

jo hai man main kahan koi nikalta hai ?
choroo ya waqat ka zeeyan rahnay do"


Nice Words............


"na bharoo zakham hamaray saray
kuch tu gha-o kay nishan rahnay do

Sab lay lo ham say Sab hi kuch lay loo
bus aawaz-e-pa ka guman rahnay do "


Very very Nice.............


"Jo lutf hai nala-e-neem-shab main Zee
Hamain yun hi bay karan rahnay do "


Wah...............kya baat hai



Dear Zee

khoobsurat alfaazo se sajji ye dilfareb gazal padhkar bohat acha laga.......

aate rahiyega .........shukriyah

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Jul 4 06 10:02 AM

zee fir se behad sunder ahsaas kyu chhupate ho duniya se baatine ye ayan hai ayaan rrahne do

mujhe tumhare ahsaas padhna sada hi achha laga hai seedhe rooh mai utar jaate hai ye

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