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Sep 29 07 2:12 AM

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Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...
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Sep 29 07 9:23 AM

supeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrb....i m speeechless and feeling dt every emotion what were comes in you dt time......gr8 work..

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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Sep 29 07 9:54 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...

great yaar arzoooooooo,
bahut khoooooooooob

Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi

kyaa baat hai aapki..... critical andaaz mein ehsaas kara diya bewafaai ka.......
kyaa baat hai aapki
yu hi likhte raho
yours
jeet

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Sep 29 07 4:10 PM

Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.


isb sher pe to main mar mita khudaya kitna zaheen aur gahri soch k kalam ikhti hain aap appi..aapko padjh kar dil ko beintehaan sukoon milta hai..likhti raha karen,.khush raha karen..
allah hafiz...
shaad

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Sep 29 07 5:24 PM

bahut alag see baat lagee is baar. aisa laga koyee aur hee arzoo hai jis ne likha hai ye bahut mukkaml hai har sher
likhn bahut kcuh chahta hoon bas kcuh sehat sath nahee de rahee ye man lo bahut hee bada kalam hai

Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Sep 30 07 1:21 PM

Arzoo
Main tumhara kalam padhta hooon to sirf do baatein sochta hoon!

* Jo dil itna dard samet sakta hai wo kitna pyar baant sakta hai
* doosra ki aapka kalam chhapna chahiye

Tumhara
Sanjay

"ढूँढा सब जहाँ में, पाया पता तेरा नहीं
अब पता तेरा मिला, तो पता मेरा नहीं"

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Sep 30 07 3:10 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...

arzooooooooooooooooooo dil ke paar gaya tera har share kaya kahoon bas itena kahoo ga ur grt arzooooooooo bas khood ko kabhi toot kar bhikernai na dena har mushkil mein har hal mein eash dil ke mushkarahat tum khonai na dena

```THANKS TO THOSE WHO HATED ME ``THEY MADE ME A STRONGER PERSON`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LOVED ME ``THEY MADE MY HEART BIGGER``
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO WORRIED ABOUT ME ``THEY LET ME KNOW THAT THEY ACTUALLY CARED
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LEFT ME```THEY MADE ME REALIZE THAT NOTHING LAST FOREVER`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO ENTERED MY LIFE``THEY MADE ME KNOW WHO I M TODAY `
``` GOD BLESS YOU ALL

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Sep 30 07 5:12 PM

QUOTE (Tanha_sagar @ September 29, 2007 09:23 am)
supeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrb....i m speeechless and feeling dt every emotion what were comes in you dt time......gr8 work..

haiiiiiiiiiii jaannnnnnn tumne mehsoos karliya mere dard ko kaafi hai...apna khayaal rakhna.

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Oct 2 07 4:17 AM

QUOTE (ilesh shah @ September 30, 2007 01:06 pm)
Aarzoo aapko padhna hame behad pasand aata he , jo dard aap lafjo me piroti ho kabil-e-taarif he,yunhi likhti rahe

Ileshhhhhhhhh khushi hoti hai jab koi mere kalaam ko pasand karta hai..take care n god bless.

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Oct 5 07 1:47 AM

QUOTE (sulagate_armaan @ September 29, 2007 09:54 am)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...             
           

great yaar arzoooooooo,
bahut khoooooooooob

Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi

kyaa baat hai aapki..... critical andaaz mein ehsaas kara diya bewafaai ka.......
kyaa baat hai aapki
yu hi likhte raho
yours
jeet

hahaha jeet justju/smiley-faces8.gifi bhi andaaz main ehsaas karao bewafa ke dil tak meri baat nahi pohonchti...main likh ke thak jaungi lekin wo kabhi nahi samjhega...thanks for reading my poems...take care n god bless.

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Oct 5 07 2:08 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...

bahut khoob arzoo ji, ahsaas dil ko chu gaye........

"Sunita Virender Singh"

***** Sweety *****



"Sun charkhe di mithi mithi kook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda,
mahiya aayega taaN kushiya manavaNgi,
usde raaha.n vich palka vichavaNngi,
dukh daahde te zind.di malook,
mahiya menu yaad aavNda"

"Eh aasmaa.n wale zameen par uttar ke dekh,
Hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......"

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Oct 5 07 3:20 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...

hi appi hugsssssssss

hamesha ki tarah zabardast pehskash he apki appi kya kahun apke dard bhare kalam padhkar dil ko sukoon milta he inko padhna hamesha hi achha lagat he magar bas ek hi soch parehsan kar jati he k meri appi ke pas kitna dard he allah apka dard mujhe de de aur apko meri sari khushyan yahi dua he ab ye dard sirf kalam tak rakhna apppi dil tak na ane dena ye guzarish he meri love u appi justju/246.gif

dad hazir he


keep writing
Allah Hafiz

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apki apni khushi

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Mangi thi mene tumse mohabbat ki zindagi
Tumne to zindagi ko mohabbat bana diya

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Oct 6 07 6:50 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 29, 2007 02:12 am)
Jab dard had se guzre ansoo ka qatra samaundar lage hai kabhi
Tanhaai ke alaam main apni parchaai se bhi dar lage hai kabhi
Jeene ke liye duniya to haasil karli lekin wajood kahin mit gaya
Issiliye sab kuch jeet kar bhi haath khaali lage hai kabhi...
Aankhon main chalakta pyaar aseem aasmaan bhi lage chota
Paakar sanam ka pyaar saari kaainaat baahon main lage hai kabhi
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.
Dil ussi se nibhaata hai preet jo kare hai bewafaai
Lut kar raah-e-ishq main paati hai rooh sukoon kabhi
Gar dekha jaai to taajmahal do pyaasi roohon ka nagar hai
Wahaan qaid hai "aarzoo" aur namukammal muraaden hai dabi...

ap asa likhti ha padhne wala apne ansu nhi rok pata very good dbs

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B'coz
no one knows i am crying.....

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Oct 8 07 10:29 AM

QUOTE (sameer'shaad' @ September 29, 2007 04:10 pm)
Toot ke chaahna ek jurm-e-sangeen lage hai kabhi
Wohi deta hai daag-e-jigar jo maseeha lage hai kabhi.


isb sher pe to main mar mita khudaya kitna zaheen aur gahri soch k kalam ikhti hain aap appi..aapko padjh kar dil ko beintehaan sukoon milta hai..likhti raha karen,.khush raha karen..
allah hafiz...
shaad

Sameer tum padhte ho mera kalaam ko dil ko ek sukoon se mehsoos hota hai...yunhi saath nibhaate rehna..aur haan ye sher mere bhi dil ke kareeb hai kyonke ismain zindagi ki sachaai chupi hai.

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Oct 8 07 10:31 AM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ September 29, 2007 05:24 pm)
bahut alag see baat lagee is baar. aisa laga koyee aur hee arzoo hai jis ne likha hai ye bahut mukkaml hai har sher
likhn bahut kcuh chahta hoon bas kcuh sehat sath nahee de rahee ye man lo bahut hee bada kalam hai

Anil

Anil apna khayaal rakhna aur khushi hui aapko is baat ek alag sa rang nazar aaya mere kalaam main...apni sehat ka dhyaan rakhna....

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Oct 8 07 10:33 AM

QUOTE (ilesh shah @ September 30, 2007 01:06 pm)
Aarzoo aapko padhna hame behad pasand aata he , jo dard aap lafjo me piroti ho kabil-e-taarif he,yunhi likhti rahe

bohot bohot shukriya ilesh mere kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye..apna khayaal rakhna.

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Oct 8 07 10:34 AM

QUOTE (SanjayGulatiMusafir @ September 30, 2007 01:21 pm)
Arzoo
Main tumhara kalam padhta hooon to sirf do baatein sochta hoon!

* Jo dil itna dard samet sakta hai wo kitna pyar baant sakta hai
* doosra ki aapka kalam chhapna chahiye

Tumhara
Sanjay

Sanjay aap bhi na...kuch bhi likh dete ho...ye bas aap sab ka pyaar hai jo aisa kehta hai...apna khayaal rakhna.

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Oct 9 07 9:39 PM

shukriya di.. mere jaise logon k liye likhne k liye...

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Ek toot.ta Sa....
Ek Doobta Sa... Sahil....

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Oct 13 07 3:48 AM

QUOTE (sahil_violin @ October 09, 2007 09:39 pm)
shukriya di.. mere jaise logon k liye likhne k liye...

oyeeeeeeee sahil kahaan gum hogai ho..hmmmmmm aisa kyonkaha???..hope ur fine bro..apna khayaal rakhna..god bless.

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