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Sep 28 07 11:07 PM

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imaan sabka jinda hota to acha hota,
aadmi hoon main, bandaa hota to acha hota,,

udtaa hoon assmaan main, khvabon ke pur liye,
hakikat mai mai parindaa hota to acha hota,,

rukhsat-aey-mahfilsey aub gumjada hoon main,
vukut rahteymain sharmindaa hota to acha hota,,

meri awaaj door tulak badi mushkils ey jati hey,
terey shaar ka main vashindaa hota to acha hota,,

kiskey isharon per ye saaj bajta hey 'madhur'
kash vo main sajindaa hota to acha hota................]
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Sep 28 07 11:19 PM

Bahut khoob madhur ji.. bahut hi accha kalam hai......

kiskey isharon per ye saaj bajta hey 'madhur'
kash vo main sajindaa hota to acha hota................

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Sep 28 07 11:35 PM

wahhhhhhhhhhh madhur ji...
wah...
pehli hi post me dil jeet liya aap ne


kya baat hai janaab....
too good.

yuhi mehfil ki shaan badhate rahiyega
khush rahyega

-Ziyaad.
Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad.

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Sep 29 07 2:15 AM

welcome to sf madhur ji

apke pahle do sher pade bahut ache lage

udtaa hoon assmaan main, khvabon ke pur liye,
hakikat mai mai parindaa hota to acha hota,,


sach kaha kam se kam khule asmaan mein uth to lete bina girne ka dar huye

sakhi kii daad kubul kare

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Sep 29 07 10:21 PM

thanks for apriciations friends,

chirag sa jalney ki koshish karunga,
bus nujhey hosley ki hava detey rahihey

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Sep 29 07 10:37 PM

khoobsurat kalaam Madhur ji...behud umda likha hay aap ne, daad qabool kariyega

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Sep 30 07 9:22 PM

QUOTE (dheerendra @ September 28, 2007 11:19 pm)
Bahut khoob madhur ji.. bahut hi accha kalam hai......

kiskey isharon per ye saaj bajta hey 'madhur'
kash vo main sajindaa hota to acha hota................

mere ajnabi dost madhur ji

mene bhi kabhi likhne ki koshish ki hai,,

par itna achcha nahi likh paaya hu ,,,

... mujhe padh kar laga ki aapne meri jindgi ka naksha hii uttar diya ho jese ,,

aapki kalam ko meri dua hai ,, ki wah essi hii nazme likhti rahe

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Suresh

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Sep 30 07 10:58 PM

thanks jahenaseeb doston
app humain himmat detey hain kuch likhney ki koshish karney ki

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