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Sep 28 07 5:56 PM

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Aise nadaan the ham kisee ke dard ko na jan sake
Jo chahte the hame, unkee chaht ko n pahchan sake


Guftgoo ko unkee guftgoo hee samhte rahe ham
Wo pyar karte the ham the kee unke pyar ko jan sake


Dil kee bat wo na kar sake baya juban se apnee
Ham kaise the aashik kee unki njaro n pahachaan sake
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[B]Badee muddat ke bad wo shyam ayee hai
Hamne unke sath jindgee kee mahfil sajayee hai


Umeedo kee roshnee ke saath wo aaj muskurayee hai
Wo apnee dastaa lafje-thareer se kah jate hai


Wo to hanste the jhukar ken ajar, najaro se apnee
Khatawaar the ham hee us hansee ko pahachan sake
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Sep 28 07 6:07 PM

waaaaaaah.....kya baat haiiiiiiiii....hmmmmmmmm kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai...ke hum kiisii ko nahi pehchaan paate hai...ya unke haal-e-dil ko na jaan paate hai..bohot acha bayaan kiya hai aapne..yunhi likhte rahiye.

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Sep 28 07 10:10 PM

acha likha hay Raj ji ..aapk qalam se jo tehreer aati hay ismeiN woh baat thori si kam lagi aaj

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Sep 29 07 8:38 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 28, 2007 06:07 pm)
waaaaaaah.....kya baat haiiiiiiiii....hmmmmmmmm kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai...ke hum kiisii ko nahi pehchaan paate hai...ya unke haal-e-dil ko na jaan paate hai..bohot acha bayaan kiya hai aapne..yunhi likhte rahiye.

thanks arjoo ji,

aap bhoot acha likhtee hai aapka reply dekh kar bhoot acha laga

raj___

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Sep 29 07 8:40 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 28, 2007 06:07 pm)
waaaaaaah.....kya baat haiiiiiiiii....hmmmmmmmm kabhi kabhi aisa ho jaata hai...ke hum kiisii ko nahi pehchaan paate hai...ya unke haal-e-dil ko na jaan paate hai..bohot acha bayaan kiya hai aapne..yunhi likhte rahiye.

thanks arjoo ji,

aap bhoot acha likhtee hai aapka reply dekh kar bhoot acha laga

raj___

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Sep 29 07 8:41 AM

QUOTE (Amaan @ September 28, 2007 10:10 pm)
acha likha hay Raj ji ..aapk qalam se jo tehreer aati hay ismeiN woh baat thori si kam lagi aaj

thanks aman for suggestion mai age se or ahca likhne kee koshish karunga

raj___

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Sep 29 07 8:48 AM



a nice poem....
liked reading it...

thanks for sharing it...

regards
aarya

regards
aarya


khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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