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Sep 16 07 9:33 PM

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Assalaam Alaykum,

Kaafi din baadh kuch dimaagh mein aaya toh socha ki aap sabhke nazar kar doon, yuN toh hum roz likha kartey they magar aajkal waqt kaafi kam ho gaya hain. padiye aur jawaab deejiye.

wafaa ki aag tumhe bujhaane na detaa,
ghalat fahmi beech mein aane na detaa,

Na main root jaata teri na_insaafi seh,
zamaane koh yun muskuraane na detaa,

daaman teraa chota ya khvaahish badi meri,
tu de nahi sakhta toh aazmaane na detaa,

hota agar main teraa haath pakadne,
tujhe apnaa he ghar jalaane na detaa,

khushi rehti khusboo rehti zindagi rehti,
agar sanam tu mujhey jaane na detaa.


Saqib Ahsan Saqib

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Sep 16 07 9:57 PM

Na main root jaata teri na_insaafi seh,
zamaane koh yun muskuraane na detaa,

daaman teraa chota ya khvaahish badi meri,
tu de nahi sakhta toh aazmaane na detaa,

saqib bhai.....

kamaal ka likha hai. ye sher to bas rooh tak utar gaye hain....
subhanallah...

bahut umda...bahut badhiya bhai.....

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keep writing..

-Ziyaad.
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Sep 18 07 1:45 PM

daaman teraa chota ya khvaahish badi meri,
tu de nahi sakhta toh aazmaane na detaa,

khushi rehti khusboo rehti zindagi rehti,
agar sanam tu mujhey jaane na detaa

Waah kya baat haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii saqib ye hui na baat..itne dinon ka intezaar kaargaar saabit hui..bohot hi khoobsurat kalaam padhne ko mila...kabhi kabhi humaare liye bhi waqt nikaal liya karein...apna khayaal rakhna.

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Sep 18 07 4:04 PM

Wah saqib ji kya khoob likha hai apne..........
bahut hi umda kalam.........

khushi rehti khusboo rehti zindagi rehti,
agar sanam tu mujhey jaane na detaa.

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Sep 18 07 6:06 PM


bahoot khuub Saqib ji... bahoot he aacha likha hai...

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Sep 21 07 1:21 AM

QUOTE (saqibahsan @ September 16, 2007 09:33 pm)
Assalaam Alaykum,

Kaafi din baadh kuch dimaagh mein aaya toh socha ki aap sabhke nazar kar doon, yuN toh hum roz likha kartey they magar aajkal waqt kaafi kam ho gaya hain. padiye aur jawaab deejiye.

wafaa ki aag tumhe bujhaane na detaa,
ghalat fahmi beech mein aane na detaa,

Na main root jaata teri na_insaafi seh,
zamaane koh yun muskuraane na detaa,

daaman teraa chota ya khvaahish badi meri,
tu de nahi sakhta toh aazmaane na detaa,

hota agar main teraa haath pakadne,
tujhe apnaa he ghar jalaane na detaa,

khushi rehti khusboo rehti zindagi rehti,
agar sanam tu mujhey jaane na detaa.


Saqib Ahsan Saqib

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Saquib achhe ahsaas leker likhi hi aapne apni ye tehreer .....umeed hai apna istar banaye rakhoge.....bahoot khood dost daad kabool kareiN..

Harash

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Sep 21 07 5:43 PM

Shukriaah Mahak jee, Shraddha jee and harash jee, aap sabh ke support ke wajah seh hum achha likhne ki koshish kartey hain.

khush rahiye aur humesha saath deejiye

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