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Sep 16 07 5:17 PM

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Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
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Sep 16 07 5:33 PM

Arzoo

Ye Shayar log or in ki masoom khwahishen
Kia kia krna chahty hen ye

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Lafz + dunia ki sab say bari taqat lafz he to hen

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Buht khoob

jesa ke Momin kehty hen

Ay meri mot teher un ko zara any dy
Un say milny ki tamanna hay Khuda say pehly

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun

Ghzal ka hasil sher

Arzoo itni piari ghazal share ki hay ke isko tanhai men ankhen band karky gungunany ko dil kar raha hay

Thnx for such a beautiful sharing


RF

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Sep 16 07 5:58 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 16, 2007 05:17 pm)
Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
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Bohot khoob aarzoo Dii....

Dil khush ho gaya apke kalaam se.. Aur sab kahiriyat se hai.. Ap bataye kaise hain.. waise shayad aj kkal aapki nazar hamare kalaam par nahi pad rahi hai isliye aapko maloom nahi ke hum november 16 tak oficially chutti par hai.. Ne wez... Is khoobsurat kalaam ke liye dil se di hui daad kubool farmaye...

Abhi ke liye Ijazat...

Abrar...

Har ik sawaal ka us ko jawaab kya deta,
Main apni zaat ka usko hisaab kya deta,
Jo aik lafz ki khushboo na rakh saka mehfooz,
Main us ke haath main poori kitaab kiya deta.(N.M)

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Sep 16 07 7:23 PM

khoobsurti se pirooya hay Aarzoo ji aap ne, mudat baad aaj phir ussi rang meiN rangnay ko ji chaha hay
daad qabool kariyega

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Sep 16 07 10:52 PM

QUOTE (Arif Naseem @ September 16, 2007 05:33 pm)
Arzoo

Ye Shayar log or in ki masoom khwahishen
Kia kia krna chahty hen ye

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Lafz + dunia ki sab say bari taqat lafz he to hen

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Buht khoob

jesa ke Momin kehty hen

Ay meri mot teher un ko zara any dy
Un say milny ki tamanna hay Khuda say pehly

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun

Ghzal ka hasil sher

Arzoo itni piari ghazal share ki hay ke isko tanhai men ankhen band karky gungunany ko dil kar raha hay

Thnx for such a beautiful sharing


RF

bohot bohot shukriyaa arif itne bareeqi se mere kalaam par nazar daali hai...Sahi kaha hai ke shayar ka dil jaane kahaan kahaan le jaata hai..bas uske sochon ki koi had nahi hoti..lekin wo soch jo zindagi ka haasil nahi hai wo shayri main talaashta hai...shukriya mere humraah shayri ke safar main saath dene ke liye.

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Sep 17 07 9:42 AM

ARZ JB B ME TUMARE KALAAM PARTI HU...EK APNE ANDER KI MERI KAMI MUJE BAHUT KHALNE LAGTI HAI...VO YE KI KASH MUJE B ITNI ACCHHI URDU AATI..YA FIR ME URDU PER APNI ACCHHI PAKAR BANAANE K LIYE HI CHAAHE MUSLIM HOTI...KAI BAAR IS BAAT SE TUM SE JALAN B HOTI HAI KI TUM ITNI ACCHHI URDU JAANTI KYU HO???AUR ME KYU NAHI...AUR MERA DIMAG ITNA MOTA HAI KI MAIN KUCH WORDS YAAD KARNA CHAAHU TO 2-4 DIN ME BHOOL JATI HU...HMMMMMM....

ANYWAY..APKI SOCH AUR APKA KALAAM SUCH ME KAABILE TAREEF HAI..AUR ACCHHA LAG RAHA HAI KI THORI SI IS KALAAM ME MUJE TUMARI ENCOURRAGEMENT KI MEHEK AA RAHI HAI..WELL KEEP IT UP....


OK BYE..TAKE CARE

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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Sep 17 07 11:00 AM

QUOTE (Muneer Alam @ September 17, 2007 10:12 am)
Waah Arzoo

Buht khoob likha hay aap nay

Bohot bohot shukriya padhne ke liye..welcome to this family.

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Sep 17 07 2:45 PM

QUOTE (Amaan @ September 16, 2007 07:23 pm)
khoobsurti se pirooya hay Aarzoo ji aap ne, mudat baad aaj phir ussi rang meiN rangnay ko ji chaha hay
daad qabool kariyega

Zahe naseeb humaare aapke kalam se do lafz zyaada nikal gai is nacheez kalaam ki tareef main....hmmm phir to waqiye humne kuch acha hi likha hoga...Ab jaldi se apna kalam uthaai aur ek khoobsurat si tehreer issi rang main rang ke likh daalen...i'm waiting eagerly to read something new from ur pen..Apna khayaal rakhen

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Sep 17 07 3:09 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 16, 2007 05:17 pm)
Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
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HELLO DEE...KESE HO AAP,

ISE PADKAR TO MERE AANSUN HI NIKAL PADE, BAHUT HI PYARI AUR KHUD ME JAHAN BHAR KI TADAP SAMETE HUE AAPKA QALAAM DIL SE NIKAL KAR DIL TAK PAHUNCH GAYA...

ISME 1-2 WOPRDS K MEANING MUJHE NAHI PATA...

JESE SAYYED, AJAL, JAFAKAAR...

PLEASE INKE MEANING MUJHE BATANA....

MERI DAAD AAP QUBOOL KARE...

UOON HI LIKHTI RAHE....


ISHIQA....

Ye AuR bAaT hAi Ke KiSmAt MuJHsE lipAt Ke RoI,
vArNa BaAhEn ToH tUjHe DeKhKaR fAiLaYi ThI



ISHQ

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Sep 18 07 1:52 PM

QUOTE (abrarsworld @ September 16, 2007 05:58 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 16, 2007 05:17 pm)
Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
[align=center]Text[/align]

Bohot khoob aarzoo Dii....

Dil khush ho gaya apke kalaam se.. Aur sab kahiriyat se hai.. Ap bataye kaise hain.. waise shayad aj kkal aapki nazar hamare kalaam par nahi pad rahi hai isliye aapko maloom nahi ke hum november 16 tak oficially chutti par hai.. Ne wez... Is khoobsurat kalaam ke liye dil se di hui daad kubool farmaye...

Abhi ke liye Ijazat...

Abrar...

awwwwwwwww chotuuuuuuuuu shayad galti se miss hogaiiiiiiii.......par diiiiiiii kabhi kissi ka kalaam miss nahi karti haan kabhi kabhi galat se chuut jaati hai.. n ur writings are as always awesome beta...kabhi apne kalam ko na rokna didu ki dua humesha tumhaare saath hai...n thanks for reading my kalaam...apna khayaal rakhna.

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Sep 18 07 11:23 PM

aaj kareeb kareeb isee tarah ki romantic tahreer mene bhee likhee post nahee kee aur aau aisa hee kcuh tumhara bhee padha ham ek sa sochte hain na? ek ek sher dard kee inteha hai par dard itna khobsoorta hai ki shikayat kya karoon zakhmon se haan tumhe takleef hotee hogee likhne se pahale is ko mahsoos karne men ye janata hoon

tumahar kamal ke kalam ko salam karata hoon aur kya kahoon ansoo se likha hai muskan se wah karata hoon shayed kcuh gam kam ho sake

Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Sep 19 07 11:58 AM

QUOTE (Tanha_sagar @ September 17, 2007 09:42 am)
ARZ JB B ME TUMARE KALAAM PARTI HU...EK APNE ANDER KI MERI KAMI MUJE BAHUT KHALNE LAGTI HAI...VO YE KI KASH MUJE B ITNI ACCHHI URDU AATI..YA FIR ME URDU PER APNI ACCHHI PAKAR BANAANE K LIYE HI CHAAHE MUSLIM HOTI...KAI BAAR IS BAAT SE TUM SE JALAN B HOTI HAI KI TUM ITNI ACCHHI URDU JAANTI KYU HO???AUR ME KYU NAHI...AUR MERA DIMAG ITNA MOTA HAI KI MAIN KUCH WORDS YAAD KARNA CHAAHU TO 2-4 DIN ME BHOOL JATI HU...HMMMMMM....

ANYWAY..APKI SOCH AUR APKA KALAAM SUCH ME KAABILE TAREEF HAI..AUR ACCHHA LAG RAHA HAI KI THORI SI IS KALAAM ME MUJE TUMARI ENCOURRAGEMENT KI MEHEK AA RAHI HAI..WELL KEEP IT UP....


OK BYE..TAKE CARE

awwwwwwwwwwwww huggsssssssssssssss tanhaaaaaaaa...kya kahun main is baat par.........tum itna acha likhti ho ke kuch aur seekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai...bas mera saath yunhi dete rehna..aur apna khayaal rakhna..

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Sep 19 07 7:23 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 16, 2007 05:17 pm)
Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
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aarzooooooooooo

wahhhhhhh daad hi daad hai dil ki chahaat par aaj.

main bhi kuch kana chahti hoon. par abbi paata nahi sochkar batati hoon.

jokinggggggggggg baba. bahut acha likha hai aarzoo. aise hi likhti rahna.

nira

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Sep 20 07 3:35 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ September 19, 2007 07:23 pm)
QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 16, 2007 05:17 pm)
Apni kismat aazmaana chahti hun
Phir naya zakhm khaana chahti hun

Tere diye zulm-o-sitam ki saughaat
Ansuon main bahaana chahti hun

Nasheman par hai sayyad ki nazar
Phir naya aashiyan banaana chahti hun

Zor-e-kalam ko na parakh jafakaar
Lafzon main baandh kar bulaana chahti hun

Zindagi ka bahaana hai teri yaad sanam
Yaad-e-maazi main bitaana chahti hun

Chand sanson ki mohollat de ai ajal
Intezaar-e-sanam ka bahaana chahti hun

Aajaa ai katil dilbar sunle meri pukaar
Intezaar ki ghadiyon ko nibhaana chahti hun

Apne tarsh lehje se "aarzoo" ko naya zakhm de jaa
Aaj phir main muskuraana chahti hun
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aarzooooooooooo

wahhhhhhh daad hi daad hai dil ki chahaat par aaj.

main bhi kuch kana chahti hoon. par abbi paata nahi sochkar batati hoon.

jokinggggggggggg baba. bahut acha likha hai aarzoo. aise hi likhti rahna.

nira

Nira tum aai ho mere liye ab saare lafz beimaane hai..apna khayaal rakhna aur mera saath nibhaate rehna.

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Sep 20 07 1:12 PM




Arzoo,

Arzoo jee, ek aurat ke dard, mohabbat aur intazzar ka
bohut khoobsurat manzar pesh kiya aapne,
sach hi hai, ek aurat pyaar me har had se guzar jana chahti hai.
Aapki baton me kitni kashish hai........
bohut achha laga apki parhna...


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Sep 20 07 2:29 PM

ohhhooo...
superb ! absolutely superb.

kya baat hai aarzoo di kya baat hai...

hameeeesha ki taraf...sab se judaa, aur bahut umda qalaam pesh kiya aapne..

dil khush ho gaya..

bas yuuuuuuhi ek se badhkar ek qalaam likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye.

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-Ziyaad.
Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad.

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Sep 21 07 1:58 PM

QUOTE (ahsaAs @ September 20, 2007 01:12 pm)
Arzoo,

Arzoo jee, ek aurat ke dard, mohabbat aur intazzar ka
bohut khoobsurat manzar pesh kiya aapne,
sach hi hai, ek aurat pyaar me har had se guzar jana chahti hai.
Aapki baton me kitni kashish hai........
bohut achha laga apki parhna...

ahsaas main ne humesha se dekha hai..tum mere kalaamon ko ek aurat ke nazariye se badi gehraai se padhti ho...acha lagta hai jab aurat ke andar ke ehsaas ko koi pehchaanta hai..umeed akrti hun aage bhi yunhi saath milta rahega.

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