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Aug 25 07 4:08 PM

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Lol frnds aaj pehli baar yaha romantic topic per kuchh likhne ki koshish ki he...jo ek larki apne piya k intzar me sadiyo se baithi hi..pal do pal ka use saath mila bhi jo u usko tadfa sa gaya aur uske tanha man se u aashar nikle...jo apki nazer hai..


AAj muje u aadha-adhura sa chhor diya
Aaj muje u thora sa chhuu kr chhor diya
Me jaanti hu ye badan ab hamare mujhane lage he..
magar 'JAANU' dil k armaa.n jalaane lage hai..

Kabi to jii bher k chaaho muje..
Zindgi ka koi ek pura din to de do muje..
pyasa na reh jaaye ye SAGAR kahin.
apne pyar ke sawan me nehla do muje..

Saanjh hone se pehle baras jaao tum..
Zindgi tamaam hone se pehle..
badli si ban k guzer jaao tum...!!

Koi shikva na rahe SAGAR ko..
Zindgi se rukhsat hote huai..
Tadfe na vo fir kisi k liye..
Janmo se pyasi rooh ko tript ho jane do..

pyase SAGAR ki pyas bujh jaayegi..
TANHA SAGAR ki tanhaayii mit jaayegi..
Bhatakti rooh ko nai zindgi mil jaayegi...!!

Ek tum hi to Mahasagar ho mere
Me to neereeh nadiya hu jo...
behtii hu jo tumare liye...

Aaj u adha -adhura na chhor jao muje..
Choo kr muje u na tadfaao priye..!!


TANHA SAGAR


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Aug 26 07 12:40 AM

wah wah sagar kya baat hai bhaut khoob kaha hai

ye aapke ehsaas ke saath kuch sabad mere


kabhi to mujhe chhuo mujhe pura kar do
aao ab pyaar se meri maang bhar do
kabhi kaho mohbaat ke sabad mere kaan main
tum aaj meri shaam ko sahar kar do
roshani ho har taraf wafa bhi ho darmiyan
kuch is tarah meri nazar kar do

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Aug 28 07 1:02 PM

wonderfull!!!!!!!!!!!! meine aapko phli bar hee padha hai aaj par aapne jis tarah se feelings ko shabdo me dala hai wo waqai kabeele tareef hai.........bhaut hee acchi tarah se feelings ko express kar leti hai aap apne kalam ke jariye..........keep it up.............nice justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

"Who says nothing is impossible ..!! I have done nothing in the past 15 Yrs n believe me.. 'IT IS POSSIBLE' !!"
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Aug 29 07 3:34 PM

QUOTE (Shrddha @ August 25, 2007 07:10 pm)
wah wah sagar kya baat hai bhaut khoob kaha hai

ye aapke ehsaas ke saath kuch sabad mere


kabhi to mujhe chhuo mujhe pura kar do
aao ab pyaar se meri maang bhar do
kabhi kaho mohbaat ke sabad mere kaan main
tum aaj meri shaam ko sahar kar do
roshani ho har taraf wafa bhi ho darmiyan
kuch is tarah meri nazar kar do

Sharad thanks a lot....lekin acchhha hota aap thora aur jyada kuch likhti..coz aapka likha bahut aachha laga...maza aa gaya par k....u hi saath deti rehna...

TANHA SAGAR


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Sep 3 07 4:10 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ August 27, 2007 07:59 am)
advitiay kaha hai bahut khoob bahut khoobsoorta likha man khil gaya
Anil

Massoom ji kin lafzo me apka shukriya ada karu...samajh nahi aata..aap ko ye acchhi lagi..aur reply diya..lot of thanks for it.

TANHA SAGAR


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Sep 3 07 4:12 PM

QUOTE (Mr.lonely @ August 28, 2007 07:32 am)
wonderfull!!!!!!!!!!!! meine aapko phli bar hee padha hai aaj par aapne jis tarah se feelings ko shabdo me dala hai wo waqai kabeele tareef hai.........bhaut hee acchi tarah se feelings ko express kar leti hai aap apne kalam ke jariye..........keep it up.............nice justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

Thanks lonly ji ki aap ne hame para...aur ab aage umeed karte he ki ab to aap hame parte rahenge..bas u hi hame parte rahiye hamare hausle likhne ko aur buland ho jayenge...thanks once again for coming.

TANHA SAGAR


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DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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Sep 9 07 12:18 AM

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sagar main itnaaaaaaaaaa pyaaaaaar....hmmmmmmmmmmm chupi rustoommmmmmm tusi to pyaar par bhi likhti hooooo..wowwwwwwwww a tight hugggggg to u sagar.........yaar u write so well.......ek aurat ke pyaar ke jazbaat ko kitni khoobsurati se kalamband kiya hai...tadpa diya na mujheeee..... .....beautifulllll emotions.......aisi hi khush raha karo..god bless.

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Sep 12 07 9:34 AM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ September 08, 2007 06:48 pm)
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sagar main itnaaaaaaaaaa pyaaaaaar....hmmmmmmmmmmm chupi rustoommmmmmm tusi to pyaar par bhi likhti hooooo..wowwwwwwwww a tight hugggggg to u sagar.........yaar u write so well.......ek aurat ke pyaar ke jazbaat ko kitni khoobsurati se kalamband kiya hai...tadpa diya na mujheeee..... .....beautifulllll emotions.......aisi hi khush raha karo..god bless.

oyeeeeeeeeeee tusi hun dekhya saanu....good mogambo apko yaha dekh kar khush hua ji....aur apka jawab par kar hoto ko muskuraahat mily...thanks a lot...and tumse b jyada meri tight wali jafiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii justju/458.gif justju/458.gif ha.ha.ha.

TANHA SAGAR


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