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Aug 25 07 1:48 PM

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Dosto subah ye ik tehreer post ki thi....Jise kisi maksad se kisi ki post pad ker uske jawaab maiN likhi gayi hai....jise is tarah dena jaroori samjha......kyuiN ki ahsaas ki yahi demand hai....isme mere apne ahsaas kisi hud tak nahiN jud paaye haiN....umeed hai aap ise pad ker..ye soch ker ki kisi tehreer ke jawab maiN likhi gayi hai.......us nazer se DekhenGe.......Shukriya...Harash


[align=center]Kya soch ker is Shaks ko bhulaya tumne

Kya soch ker is Shaks ko bhulaya tumne
mire Ghar se hi jalta diya uthaya tumne.

De deke duhaayii apne gamoN ki yahaN
Kya kutchh hamse yuiN chhupaya tumne.

Dikha yuiN bulandhiyaaN Tanha ker diya,
Ye kaisa manzer-e-dard banaya tumne.

Na aoge khaboN me raheiN muntazir toh bhi,
Kambakhat Aisa kya Dard paa liya tumne.

Zakhm khaya hai kahiN, kya khata hamse hui
Salaam akhiri kaise ? dil ko mana liya tumne ?

Dil todne ki jaroorat kahaaN hai 'harash'
Akele yuiN rone ka sabab bana liya tumne ?

Harash
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Aug 25 07 2:40 PM

achi kalaam raha Harash ji, magar jo aapka tarz rehta hay woh aaj nazar nahi aaya ismeiN,

aapka akhri shair behud pasand aaya

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 25 07 4:45 PM

HARSH JI u lag raha he..jaise aapne ye sb likh kr mere bare me shikayet ki ho...ha.ha.ha.anyway nice as usual..

TANHA SAGAR


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DIL KI TANHAAYI KO AWAAZ BANA LETE HAI...
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA (Likh) LETE HAI..

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Aug 25 07 6:06 PM

mind blowing harash mein eashai samenj saketa hoon yah kahan or kis maksad se likha gaya hai jawaw nahi bahoot khood

```THANKS TO THOSE WHO HATED ME ``THEY MADE ME A STRONGER PERSON`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LOVED ME ``THEY MADE MY HEART BIGGER``
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO WORRIED ABOUT ME ``THEY LET ME KNOW THAT THEY ACTUALLY CARED
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LEFT ME```THEY MADE ME REALIZE THAT NOTHING LAST FOREVER`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO ENTERED MY LIFE``THEY MADE ME KNOW WHO I M TODAY `
``` GOD BLESS YOU ALL

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Aug 26 07 12:12 AM

Kya soch ker is Shaks ko bhulaya tumne
mire Ghar se hi jalta diya uthaya tumne....BEAUTIFUL LINES HARSH JI


chupchaap sulagtii chingaari
mohtaaj hawaa key jhonkey kii

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Aug 26 07 1:30 AM

Bahut khoob Harsh ji , bahut hi umda likha hai apne......


Dil todne ki jaroorat kahaaN hai 'harash'
Akele yuiN rone ka sabab bana liya tumne ?

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Aug 26 07 1:24 PM

acha likha hai dear


kisne bhulane ki koshish kar daali hai...

sakhi

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Aug 26 07 3:32 PM

QUOTE (Amaan @ August 25, 2007 02:40 pm)
achi kalaam raha Harash ji, magar jo aapka tarz rehta hay woh aaj nazar nahi aaya ismeiN,

aapka akhri shair behud pasand aaya

Amaan saheb adaaab.........Shukriya dost.......our haaN aap bilkul durust fermaate haiN......ye thereer kisi ki post ke answer maiN likhi gayi jisme usi ki jameeN ko dhayaan maiN rakh ker....usi ke ashards ke jawaab maiN daagi gayi hai.......maiN apna bhaav ismeiN na daal saka..........jiske liye maiN aapka kshma prarthi hooN........Shukriya aapne ise tarjeeh di.....


harash

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Aug 26 07 4:24 PM

QUOTE (Tanha_sagar @ August 25, 2007 04:45 pm)
HARSH JI u lag raha he..jaise aapne ye sb likh kr mere bare me shikayet ki ho...ha.ha.ha.anyway nice as usual..

Tanha ji ..kya baat kerte haiN aap?....hum apke baare maiN abhi likhne ke layak nahi haiN....hum ek chhote se writer apni jaroorat ke hisaab se yahaan lik dete haiN...our itne achhe log yahaan haiN....ki hamari rachna ko pad lete haiN....ye un sab ka badappan hai ...hamari rachna ka kamaal nahi.....aapse anurodh ke hame is laya bana do ki hum aapki shikayat kerne ke kaabil toh ho jayeiN..........

Aap is post per aaye...aapka maiN tah-e-dil se khairmakdam kertahooN...hamaaari zameeN keemat maiN jaroor ijafa hua hoga....Shukriya..


Harash

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Aug 26 07 6:24 PM

wa janb bahut khoob kaha aapne

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Aug 26 07 8:43 PM

QUOTE (risky @ August 25, 2007 06:06 pm)
mind blowing harash mein eashai samenj saketa hoon yah kahan or kis maksad se likha gaya hai jawaw nahi bahoot khood

Bahoot bahoot shukriya janaab.....


Harash

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Aug 26 07 10:39 PM

QUOTE (Solitude @ August 26, 2007 12:00 am)
bohot khoob janaab...
kissi ke ehsaason ko apne kalaam main sametna
asaan kaam nahi...
daad kubool karein.

soltitude ji bahoot bahoot shukriyaa.....aapko pehli baar dekha yahaan aaj.....our achha laga....ki aapko ye tehreer achhi lagi.......Shukriya dost


Harash

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Aug 26 07 10:59 PM

QUOTE (AngelAmit @ August 26, 2007 12:04 am)
wah wah Harsh jii

bahut acha laga aapko padna

likjte rahiyeq

Bahoot bahoot shukriyaaa.....amit ji...kaafi dino baad aap aaye is zameeN per..umeed hai aap aate raheNge..


Harash

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Aug 26 07 11:06 PM

QUOTE (Parul @ August 26, 2007 12:12 am)
Kya soch ker is Shaks ko bhulaya tumne
mire Ghar se hi jalta diya uthaya tumne....BEAUTIFUL LINES HARSH JI

parul ji namaskaar....bahoot bahoot shukriya aapka aapko tehreer pasand aayiii..


harash

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