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KAANCH KE RANGEEN TUKDE

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Aug 9 07 1:41 AM

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ajay ne mujese yeh poem share ki, mujse raha na gaya main isse aap sab ke samne le aayi hoon.
aap sab rai ka intazaar rahega.

thank u.
nira

KAANCH KE RANGEEN TUKDE

YEH KAANCH KE RANGEEN TUKDE
JAB DEKHTA HUN KAHIN PADE
MAJBOOR KARTE HAI YE MUJHE
AUR MAIN LE AATA HUN UNHE
APNE SAATH APNE AASHIYANE MAIN
BAHUT KUCH KEHTE HAI YEH ISHARE SE

SOCHTA HI REHTA HUN MAIN
KI JAB YEH RAHE HONGE HISSA KISI KA
LOG KEHTE HONGE KISSA INHI KA
YEH TAARIF KE KABIL THE TAB
INHE KOI DHEKHTA BHI NAHIN AB
MAGAR LAGTA HAI MUJHE KYUN AISA

KI INME NASHA BAAKI HAI PEHLE JAISA
BAS JARORAT BHAR HAI INHE PARAKHNE KI
KI BARKARAR HAI ABHI KASHISH INKI
TUTE HI TOH HAI BARBAAD NAHIN HAI
INKE RANG KISI KE MOHTAAZ NAHIN HAI
YE KEHTE HAI AAP APNI KAHANI

KI REHTI THI DUNIYA INKI DIWANI
INKE AASTITAVA MAIN JO KAMI HAI
VOH MERE AASHIYANE KI JAMIN HAI
AUR MAIN POORA KARTA HUN JOODTA HUN
KAI RANGON KE TUKDO KO MILATA HUN
IN KAANCH KE TUKDO KI TARAH

JINDIGI KO KABHI NA KARNA TABAH
KI YEH TOH JUD JAATE HAI KISI NA KISI SE
MAGAR JIWAN JOODTA NAHIN AASAANI SE
JO BIKHARA AGAR TUT KAR YEH KABHI
TOH LAAKH KOSISHO SE BHI JUDTA NAHIN
YAHIN KEHTE HAI YEH TUKDE RANGEEN

TABAH KARNA JEEWAN JURM HAI SANGEEN
AUR YAHIN REHTI HAI KOSHISH MERI
KI KAHIN BIKHARE NA TUT KAR KABHI
KOI KAANCH KA TUKDA YA JINDAGI KOI
KYUNKI BIKHARA HUA KUCH BHI ACCHA NAHIN

by Ajay
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Aug 9 07 8:50 AM

mind blowing bahoot hee umenda or ghaeri soch ko pesh kiya gaya hai eash tahreer ke vich mein meri dil se daad kabool karai

```THANKS TO THOSE WHO HATED ME ``THEY MADE ME A STRONGER PERSON`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LOVED ME ``THEY MADE MY HEART BIGGER``
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO WORRIED ABOUT ME ``THEY LET ME KNOW THAT THEY ACTUALLY CARED
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO LEFT ME```THEY MADE ME REALIZE THAT NOTHING LAST FOREVER`
```THANKS TO THOSE WHO ENTERED MY LIFE``THEY MADE ME KNOW WHO I M TODAY `
``` GOD BLESS YOU ALL

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Aug 9 07 3:04 PM

ajay likhta hee bahut achha hai nira ne un kee kavita aage la ke bahut achha kam kiya par ajay main chahta hoon tum khud bhee apne eye tahreer mafil e shayar men dalo wahan aur zyada log parhenge mujhe bahut achee lagee shabash aur khush raho
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Aug 15 07 4:43 PM

JINDIGI KO KABHI NA KARNA TABAH
KI YEH TOH JUD JAATE HAI KISI NA KISI SE
MAGAR JIWAN JOODTA NAHIN AASAANI SE
JO BIKHARA AGAR TUT KAR YEH KABHI
TOH LAAKH KOSISHO SE BHI JUDTA NAHIN
YAHIN KEHTE HAI YEH TUKDE RANGEEN

TABAH KARNA JEEWAN JURM HAI SANGEEN
AUR YAHIN REHTI HAI KOSHISH MERI
KI KAHIN BIKHARE NA TUT KAR KABHI
KOI KAANCH KA TUKDA YA JINDAGI KOI
KYUNKI BIKHARA HUA KUCH BHI ACCHA NAHIN


kyonnnnnnnnnnnn????ajay ji??kyon chupaayi rakhi ise humse??
bas padhe to padhte chalen jaaye..ek baar padhker mann nahi bhara.
yeh lines..inke to bas kya kehne..kitni gehraayi hia in lines mai..bahut hi zabardast likha aapne.

thanks nira ji for sharing

U BIN BULAAYE MILNE CHALA AATA HAI,
GHAM KO MUJHSE YEH UNSIYAT KAISI??

---AKELIJAAN---

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Aug 16 07 10:00 AM

अच्छी संकेतात्मक कविता है. लेखक को सुंदर संवेदना के लिये बधाई. और आपको प्रसार के लिये प्रसंसा.

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