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Aug 9 07 12:36 AM

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adaab
aik ghazal pesh hai
umeed hai aap ko pasand aaye gi

ab na dewaar na Dar lagta hai
kiysa veeran ye ghar lagta hai

ik mehel ho ke daricha dil ka
gar hai khali to khandhar lagta hai

tapte sehera ki musafat maiN kabhi
aik patta bhi shajhar lagta hai

meri aankhoN ne talab maiN rakhkha
wo sitara jo qamar lagta hai

aaoo chalte haiN ab oos paar kahiN
ees jazire maiN to dar lagta hai

gul dehelve

kathin shabdha
Dar>>>>darwaza
sehera>>retila maidaan
musafat>>> safar ki lambaee
shajhar>>paidh >.darakht>>tree
talab>>>maangna
qamar>>>chaand..chandarma

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Aug 9 07 9:56 PM

QUOTE (gul @ August 09, 2007 12:36 am)
adaab
aik ghazal pesh hai
umeed hai aap ko pasand aaye gi

ab na dewaar na Dar lagta hai
kiysa veeran ye ghar lagta hai

ik mehel ho ke daricha dil ka
gar hai khali to khandhar lagta hai

tapte sehera ki musafat maiN kabhi
aik patta bhi shajhar lagta hai

meri aankhoN ne talab maiN rakhkha
wo sitara jo qamar lagta hai

aaoo chalte haiN ab oos paar kahiN
ees jazire maiN to dar lagta hai

gul dehelve

kathin shabdha
Dar>>>>darwaza
sehera>>retila maidaan
musafat>>> safar ki lambaee
shajhar>>paidh >.darakht>>tree
talab>>>maangna
qamar>>>chaand..chandarma

bahut khoobsoorat kalaam hai gul ji;go ki saara behr men hai lekin do ek jagah men behtari ki gunzaaish hai[mere khayaal men-aur yeh sirf opinion ka mu'aamlaa hai]

ho mehel ya ke daricha dil ka
gar hai khali to khandhar lagta hai


--
meri aor se is khoobsoorat kalaam pe daad haazir hai

mukhlis
chaman

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Aug 9 07 10:29 PM

adaab
chaman sahib

zarra nawazi aap ko ghazal pasand aaee
hosla afzaee ka shukriya
umeed hai aage bhi qimti Aara milti rahe gi

gul dehelvi
karachi
pakistan

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Aug 10 07 2:48 PM

Tasleem Gul
ik bahot hee oomdha khilaa kay saath aapkay jazbaat paray
byhadh motmaeen hoh jatte hoon jabh jabh aalaa fankaar paranay koh moka miltah hay

God bless

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Aug 10 07 2:56 PM

gul ji namaskaar

bhut khoob likha hai aap ne
bhut suder hai ru har shabd bhut aaachaa hai
keep writing and keep smiling
take care

sagar

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किया जिसने मुझ पर ख़ुद से ज़्यादा भरोसा
बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Aug 10 07 10:37 PM

ab na dewaar na Dar lagta hai
kiysa veeran ye ghar lagta hai

haan veeran hi hoga ghar agar kuch nahi hoga


ik mehel ho ke daricha dil ka
gar hai khali to khandhar lagta hai

haan ghar khali khandar hi hota hai gul dost

tapte sehera ki musafat maiN kabhi
aik patta bhi shajhar lagta hai

bhaut bhaut sach kaha hai apane

meri aankhoN ne talab maiN rakhkha
wo sitara jo qamar lagta hai

aaoo chalte haiN ab oos paar kahiN
ees jazire maiN to dar lagta hai


ek bhaut hi achhi gazal kahi hai aapne aapki gazal ki tarif karna suraj ko roshni idkhane jaisa hai

main to shuru se hi aapko padhne ke liye eager rahti hoon

likhte rahe aapke har sher ke intezaar main

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Aug 10 07 10:41 PM

BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA

DAAD HAZIR HE

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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