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Aug 8 07 11:18 PM

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do din ka Dera kuchh bhii nahin
yahaaN tera mera kuchh bhii nahiin.

din chaR'hte hi dil duub gayaa
ab saanj'h sawera kuchh bhii nahiN

taariikii-ye-dil ke hai aage
raatoN ka andhera kuchh bhii nahin

sabh kuchh hai meraa jo samaj'haiN
kahne ko vo meraa kuchh bhii nahin

dil uska jis par aa jaaye
tera hai nah meraa kuchh bhii nahin

hai zindgi saraa-ye-kaaravaan
ik rain basera kuchh bhii nahin

yeh duniyaa-daarii do din kii
jogi ka phera kuchh bhii nahiN.

ik aas dilaasaa kahiiN kabhii
hai gham bohteraa kuchh bhii nahin

bas chaar dinoN kii chaandnii zeest
phir ghup andhera kuchh bhii nahiiN

jab dil berabt be-simt huwaa
phir chaar chaupheraa kuchh bhii nahin.

hoN laakh rafeeeq, aqaarib, rabt
tu nahin jo meraa kuchh bhii nahiin.

har eik ta'alluq, rasm-o-rahii
ik zakhm lavera kuchh bhii nahin

ik sozish-e-jaaN, taptii raahein
saaya na gh`anera kuchh bhii nahin

gham-e- Khalqat aage se aage
hai kyaa dukh teraa kuchh bhii nahi

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Aug 8 07 11:32 PM

leave everything to a lover or to God
and be humble for ever and ever

does this fulfill one's life?
is this Indian culture what it is?


Chaman, you poem reads great. I am not well gifted to make comments on poetics, but you seem to very talented in poetry. An interesting read.

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Aug 9 07 11:30 AM

har khiyaal ko khoobsurti se sajana aur alfaaz ka chunaao se laikar us k zariye khiyaal ki takmeel tuk aap kamaal kartay haiN Chamann ji, daad qabool kariyega apni is peshkesh per

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 13 07 10:51 PM

QUOTE (Ravi Kopra @ August 08, 2007 11:32 pm)
leave everything to a lover or to God
and be humble for ever and ever

does this fulfill one's life?
is this Indian culture what it is?


Chaman, you poem reads great. I am not well gifted to make comments on poetics, but you seem to very talented in poetry. An interesting read.

mamnoon hoon,ravi ji

shukriya

chaman

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Aug 13 07 11:08 PM

bahut khoob chaman ji..bahut khoob,bahut zabardast likha aapne yunhin likhte rahiye..

U BIN BULAAYE MILNE CHALA AATA HAI,
GHAM KO MUJHSE YEH UNSIYAT KAISI??

---AKELIJAAN---

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Aug 13 07 11:10 PM

Aadab chaman Ji...

Bohot khoobsurti se aapne apne alfaazon ko sajaya hai.. Accha laga padhkar... Daad haazir hai kubool kare...

Abrar...

Har ik sawaal ka us ko jawaab kya deta,
Main apni zaat ka usko hisaab kya deta,
Jo aik lafz ki khushboo na rakh saka mehfooz,
Main us ke haath main poori kitaab kiya deta.(N.M)

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Aug 15 07 12:45 AM

QUOTE (Amaan @ August 09, 2007 11:30 am)
har khiyaal ko khoobsurti se sajana aur alfaaz ka chunaao se laikar us k zariye khiyaal ki takmeel tuk aap kamaal kartay haiN Chamann ji, daad qabool kariyega apni is peshkesh per

shukriya,amaan ji

khush rahein

chaman

dil ki sabh ranj-o-alam jabr-o-zarar bhool gayaa
us pe yeh bhool yeh sochaa ki tujhe bhool gayaa

sach hai dil jaanata to hai,tu mujhe bhool gayaa
thii nahii.n bhoolne ki baat magar bhool gayaa

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Aug 15 07 1:50 AM

Bahut khoob,chaman bhai.Khaas kar kay yeh she'r:
sabh kuchh hai meraa jo samaj'haiN
kahne ko vo meraa kuchh bhii nahin
Brijinder

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