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Aug 8 07 11:08 PM

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dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 10 07 9:05 AM

QUOTE (Amaan @ August 08, 2007 11:08 pm)
dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

amaan ji

bard ke ehsaason ko khub pesh kiya hai

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

yeh sher bahut dil ko choo gaye.

nira

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Aug 10 07 9:58 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ August 09, 2007 05:06 pm)
bahut khub

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

JINDAGY KI HAKIKAT HE


DAAD HAZIR HE

shukariya Shakun ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 10 07 10:39 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ August 10, 2007 09:05 am)
QUOTE (Amaan @ August 08, 2007 11:08 pm)
dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

amaan ji

bard ke ehsaason ko khub pesh kiya hai

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

yeh sher bahut dil ko choo gaye.

nira

shukariya Misty ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 12 07 8:39 PM

Dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

kya baat kahi hai bhaut khoob suruwad


hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein


wah wah sach ek bahut sach

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

bhaut bhaut sach

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

bhaut sach bahut sach

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

kya baat hai aaj to aapne jaise alag roop main likhne ka socha ho aur sare fact zindgi ke likh diya

bhaut achha laga aapki kalam se sach ko padhna

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Aug 13 07 12:57 PM

wonder ful amaan bhut aacha likhaa hai
aache se pesh kiya ek sachai ko

keep writing and keep smiling

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उसका क्या कुसूर था जो उसको ये सज़ा दी
किया जिसने मुझ पर ख़ुद से ज़्यादा भरोसा
बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Aug 13 07 1:47 PM

dil ki galiyo me halchal machadi amaan achha likha he aapne

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Aug 13 07 2:02 PM

QUOTE (Amaan @ August 08, 2007 11:08 pm)
dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein


Ye akhri sher bohot kuch keh gayaaaaaaa....jaise zehan ko jhinjod diya....jab halaat bikherte hai to kahaan ehsaas hota hai ache bure ka.......bohot khoob aur ek naya ehsaas lekar aai hai bazm main.

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Aug 14 07 2:04 AM

bahut khoob kaha aapne...

nida ji ki ek gahzal yaad aa gayi...uska ek sher kehti hoon

zindagi kaa muqaddar safar dar safar
aaKhiri saans tak beqaraar aadami


tc

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Aug 14 07 2:46 AM

QUOTE (maansi @ August 11, 2007 03:09 pm)
Namste Amaan
apne har rang zindgii ka bata diya hai

badhayi apkii sunder gazal ke liye

shukariya Maansi ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 14 07 2:47 AM

QUOTE (Shrddha @ August 12, 2007 08:39 pm)
Dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

kya baat kahi hai bhaut khoob suruwad


hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein


wah wah sach ek bahut sach

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

bhaut bhaut sach

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

bhaut sach bahut sach

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

kya baat hai aaj to aapne jaise alag roop main likhne ka socha ho aur sare fact zindgi ke likh diya

bhaut achha laga aapki kalam se sach ko padhna

shukariya Shilpa ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 14 07 2:48 AM

QUOTE (sirftum @ August 13, 2007 12:57 pm)
wonder ful amaan bhut aacha likhaa hai
aache se pesh kiya ek sachai ko

keep writing and keep smiling

shukariya Sagar ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 14 07 2:55 PM

QUOTE (heart_bit @ August 13, 2007 01:47 pm)
dil ki galiyo me halchal machadi amaan achha likha he aapne

shukariya Janaab

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 14 07 2:56 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ August 13, 2007 02:02 pm)
QUOTE (Amaan @ August 08, 2007 11:08 pm)
dekh le anjaam-e-bashar bebasi mein
maut se hay ja milta kaisi bekasi mein

hota hay bekhabar zaalim taqdeer se
yeh zindagi guzray gi kaisi behasi mein

kabhi be-roozgaari ne hay usko maara
kabhi jaan de ghumooN ki udaasi mein

ishq mohabbat mein jeene wale aashiq
haif gaye kaise is duniya se bebasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein

rishtoon ki uljhan ko suljhatay suljhatay
hoker tang deta hay jaan is khulasi mein

marna sabhi ko ek na ek din Amaan per
mar na jaye koi haraam maut bekasi mein


Ye akhri sher bohot kuch keh gayaaaaaaa....jaise zehan ko jhinjod diya....jab halaat bikherte hai to kahaan ehsaas hota hai ache bure ka.......bohot khoob aur ek naya ehsaas lekar aai hai bazm main.

shukariya Aarzoo ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 15 07 7:25 PM

QUOTE (divya @ August 14, 2007 02:04 am)
bahut khoob kaha aapne...

nida ji ki ek gahzal yaad aa gayi...uska ek sher kehti hoon

zindagi kaa muqaddar safar dar safar
aaKhiri saans tak beqaraar aadami


tc

shukariya Divya ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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Aug 16 07 9:55 PM

shukariya Taskeen ji

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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