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May 9 07 9:51 PM

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kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU
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May 9 07 10:26 PM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

Meenu bahan aapke jazbaat ehsaas aur khyalaat bahut umda hai aur saath hi lafzo ka intekhaab bahu khoobsurat hai......aapne mujhse isme tarmeem ke liye kaha hai to mai zarur isme thoda sa raddo badal karke aapki khidmat me pesh karunga

aise hi likhti rahe...maine bhi sf me hi likhna seekha hai...

khush rahe...

aapka bhai
Asif

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DEKHNE WALE TU MERI MUSKURAHAT PE NA JAA
YE TO PARDA HAI GHAME DIL CHHUPANE KE LIYE

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May 9 07 10:31 PM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

kuch khyaalo ko pada apke
dil se nikal rahe hai jaise apke saare khyaal laga dard hai bahut inmein.
acha likha hai yun to par dard na rahe life mein yahi dua hai sakhi ki

sakhi with love

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May 9 07 11:01 PM

Meenu ji acha andaaz-e-biyaaN raha aur alfaaz ka chunaao bhi acha raha
good work

Sometimes I cut myself to see how much I bleed and how much it hurts!!!!

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May 9 07 11:13 PM

umda likha hain .. dsard to barpoor hain ..
daad kabul kare ....

kuch lines ki
jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......

bahut hi khub ... maza aa gaya .. mere alfaz apke sabdo main mehsus kar raha hu ..

kuch bolna chata hu suniye ===>>>

iss raat ki tanhaaiyon ke sab rang badal gaye hai,
chand nikla hai waise hi andhere badal gaye hai,
jinke baharo se thi khushiyan woh baadal thahar gaye hai,
manzilen tou ab bhi wohi hai kuch raaste badal gaye hai

boliye kaisa laga

keep writing dear

tc

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вαѕ ℓσн נαℓαηє кα ιηтzααя нαιη●๋•●๋• ......

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May 10 07 7:22 AM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

Meenu

bahut ache khayalon ko ache shabadon se sawara hai, bahut acha laga aapko padhna. pahli baar padha hai aapko.

nira

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May 10 07 8:54 AM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

Wah Wah MEENU JI.... behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Pahali Baar aapko
Padha Aaj aur Padh kar Bahut Acha laga.. Aap Behad Khubsoorat Likhti hain..

Rachna ka Ek ek Lafz Behad Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne... !!!!!

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe..


Last ki In 2 Lines me to aapne Kamaal hi kar diya... Daad Kubool karen Dost..!!!

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**~** ManN **~**

"Hum Dil to kya Rooh main Utar Jayenge,
Aap Chaahoge agar Chaahne Walon ki Tarah"

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May 10 07 9:15 AM

QUOTE (meenu @ May 09, 2007 09:51 pm)
kuch likha hai.. aapki nazar,,,, kahe kaisa hai.. kuch kami lage to zarur bataye....


bazam mai teri aa ke hum kuch yun ruswa hue
na apna khayal raha na rukne ki zarurat rahi

tu jo masruf raha apne doston mai aye sanam
main bhi roti rahi tere aane ke intezaar mai

aanko se bharpur dekha tujhe lab na hilaye gaye
tere paas se guzar jane par hum beparda roye

aankho se dekhe sapne bhari mehfil mai humne
khud teri aagosh mai aane ko tadapte hum rahe

jo tu na aaya mere kareeb ayer mere sanam
hum khud mai hi har kami dhundhte rahe.......


MEENU

WAH wah wah meenu kamal kar diya itna accha likhne lagi ho waaaaaah. par itna dard kyon bhai. hum hain na dard ke liye........

likhti raho... kushn raho.

vikas with love....

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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