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Jun 7 07 4:12 PM

QUOTE (dheerendra @ May 17, 2007 10:50 pm)
sach main sakhi ji bahut accha likha hai apne aur sach main
ye tanhai hoti hi aise chez hai ki bus pooncho mat .....................

dheerndra ji
shukriya apka bahut bahut

sakhi

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Jun 12 07 1:49 AM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ May 23, 2007 07:52 pm)
waah sakhi...kaafi dil achha likha....dard likhna achha laga..


harash

bahut bahut shukriya harsh ji

yuhi sath dena

sakhi

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Jun 12 07 8:24 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

accha likha hai sakhi............

uoon hi likhti raho...........

Ye AuR bAaT hAi Ke KiSmAt MuJHsE lipAt Ke RoI,
vArNa BaAhEn ToH tUjHe DeKhKaR fAiLaYi ThI



ISHQ

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Jun 28 07 5:55 PM

QUOTE (ISHIQA @ June 12, 2007 08:24 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

accha likha hai sakhi............

uoon hi likhti raho...........

dear ishu

shukriya sath dene ke liye

pasand kiya apne acha laga
khush rahna

sakhi

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Jun 29 07 7:08 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Hello sakhi ji kaise haiN aap?.....Main pehle bhi tumhaare is thread par utra tha per jaldi maiN tha....Bahoot muddat baad tumhaari is Ghazal per phir se utra hooN....Per jab bhi utrta hooN...toh bas yahi lagta hai ki kyuiN utra hooN...ab tumeh yahi lagega ki kyuiN aisa kaha....woh is liye jab koi nousikhiyaa...Gaadi galat chalata hai toh wazeh nazer aati hai...per koi driver aisa kerta hai toh takleef hoti hai.....aaj shayad teesri baar tumhaari is Ghazal per aya hooN....Itni dil kashish Ghazal tumne pesh ki hai ki socta hooN..ki tum abhi yahaan kya ker rahi ho....tumeh toh jaaker kahiN office khol ker ham jaisoN ko sikhaane ke liye bulana chahiye..our tumhare jaise ahsaas ..kaise laate haiN...hameiN bhi pata chale....per tumeh pata hai..maiN bahoot hi kadwa insaan hooN....Ghazl ke baare maiN....kam se kam aapke liye toh jaroor hooN....chchoti chhoti Galati Ghazal ka poora noor kho deti hai.....meri kalam kutchh ker baithhe is liye maiN khud hi chala jana chahta tha..per tumhaare saath aisa nahi ker sakta tha.....Daad toh khoob nikal rahihai...woh bhi dil se..per is tarah nahiN....
Sakhi ji....aapki Ghazal ke ahsaasoN ko barkaraar rakhne ki koshish maiN...aapki Ghazal pur-asar hai ya nahiN maloom nahi....lekin kam se kam...ise itna toh hona hi chahiye tha.....Doosre aap is waqt mod ban chuki haiN iske liye aapko tah-e-dil se badayii deta hooN.....

aap chaeiN toh aap is review ko agar achha na lage toh delte ker saktieN haiN....Ek baar phir daad haazir hai aapke sunder ahsaasoN ko...

tanhaaiyaa mili toh ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaadeiN teri aayieN toh tadpaa ke ro diye

jab muzhko naa dikha tha mere aas-pass koi
tab yaadeiN teri har taraf bikhra ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi bhi sang gayi
jab dukh ne aake ghera toh ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
ye baateiN yaad aayieN khud samjha ke ro diye(ye beher maiN hai lekin aapka ahsaas poora nahiN aa paya ismeiN apne ahsaas kobeher maiN hipoora keejiye..main ahsaas badal nahi sakta tha)
or
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
Ham khud hi apne dil ko samjha ke ro diye


Harash

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Jul 2 07 3:51 PM

QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ June 29, 2007 07:08 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Hello sakhi ji kaise haiN aap?.....Main pehle bhi tumhaare is thread par utra tha per jaldi maiN tha....Bahoot muddat baad tumhaari is Ghazal per phir se utra hooN....Per jab bhi utrta hooN...toh bas yahi lagta hai ki kyuiN utra hooN...ab tumeh yahi lagega ki kyuiN aisa kaha....woh is liye jab koi nousikhiyaa...Gaadi galat chalata hai toh wazeh nazer aati hai...per koi driver aisa kerta hai toh takleef hoti hai.....aaj shayad teesri baar tumhaari is Ghazal per aya hooN....Itni dil kashish Ghazal tumne pesh ki hai ki socta hooN..ki tum abhi yahaan kya ker rahi ho....tumeh toh jaaker kahiN office khol ker ham jaisoN ko sikhaane ke liye bulana chahiye..our tumhare jaise ahsaas ..kaise laate haiN...hameiN bhi pata chale....per tumeh pata hai..maiN bahoot hi kadwa insaan hooN....Ghazl ke baare maiN....kam se kam aapke liye toh jaroor hooN....chchoti chhoti Galati Ghazal ka poora noor kho deti hai.....meri kalam kutchh ker baithhe is liye maiN khud hi chala jana chahta tha..per tumhaare saath aisa nahi ker sakta tha.....Daad toh khoob nikal rahihai...woh bhi dil se..per is tarah nahiN....
Sakhi ji....aapki Ghazal ke ahsaasoN ko barkaraar rakhne ki koshish maiN...aapki Ghazal pur-asar hai ya nahiN maloom nahi....lekin kam se kam...ise itna toh hona hi chahiye tha.....Doosre aap is waqt mod ban chuki haiN iske liye aapko tah-e-dil se badayii deta hooN.....

aap chaeiN toh aap is review ko agar achha na lage toh delte ker saktieN haiN....Ek baar phir daad haazir hai aapke sunder ahsaasoN ko...

tanhaaiyaa mili toh ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaadeiN teri aayieN toh tadpaa ke ro diye

jab muzhko naa dikha tha mere aas-pass koi
tab yaadeiN teri har taraf bikhra ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi bhi sang gayi
jab dukh ne aake ghera toh ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
ye baateiN yaad aayieN khud samjha ke ro diye(ye beher maiN hai lekin aapka ahsaas poora nahiN aa paya ismeiN apne ahsaas kobeher maiN hipoora keejiye..main ahsaas badal nahi sakta tha)
or
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein toh ab 'sakhi'
Ham khud hi apne dil ko samjha ke ro diye


Harash

apne apna samjh itna kaha bahut bahut shukriya
par apko mein bhala kaise seekha sakti hun kuch aap to is ilm mein mahir hai...mein bas seekh rahi hun.

mod banne par apki badhai sweekar hai mujhe dil se.
apne jo bhi sudhar kiya hai use dil se sarahti hun aur shukriya ada karti hun apka....apne ye kyun socha mujhe bura lagega ya mein ise del karungi..

yuhi hamesha apne sujhav se avgat karate rahiye

regards
sakhi

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Jul 2 07 3:59 PM

QUOTE (vipin @ June 29, 2007 06:29 pm)
Namaskaar Sakhi Ji
bahaut pasand aaya aapka likha har shabd. Yunhi likhtey rahiyega.

vipin

namskar vipin ji
kaphi time baad apko sath paya hai

acha laga apka aana shukriya

yuhi aate rahna
regards
sakhi

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Dec 29 07 11:25 AM

sakhi bahut hi kub likha hai aapne.........verry verry nice one sakhi.......

yaad le aayi bachpan ki wo maasoom hansi..

jab manzile paati kagaz ki kashti pani mai ussi



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Dec 29 07 11:55 AM

zabardasttt sakhiii,simply superbbb.
kya andaaz-e-bayan hai,kitna dard bhardiya haii tumnee.
bahut khoob.
likhti raho yunhin,khush rahoi sada

U BIN BULAAYE MILNE CHALA AATA HAI,
GHAM KO MUJHSE YEH UNSIYAT KAISI??

---AKELIJAAN---

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Dec 29 07 1:59 PM

sakhi
bhut sahi likhaa hai
bhut dard bhraa bhi hai

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

bus kyaa khaoon

take care and keep smiling

sagar

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उसका क्या कुसूर था जो उसको ये सज़ा दी
किया जिसने मुझ पर ख़ुद से ज़्यादा भरोसा
बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Dec 29 07 6:36 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

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Jan 1 08 10:56 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

uffffffff sakhi ji..kya kahe aisa lagra hai jaise apne mera dil ka hal bayan kar rahi hai..
tanhaiya may sisak te rehti hun har dam,
teri yaad mujhe tadpa jati hai har dum....
keep writing sakhi ji,jst love to read ur creation...

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Jan 1 08 11:58 PM

sakhi ji.. bahut dino baad is section main aaya aur ate hi ate apka
dil chhoo lene vala kalam padne ko mila...
bahut accha likha hai apne... dad hazir hai........

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Feb 28 08 2:25 PM

QUOTE (akelijaan @ December 29, 2007 11:55 am)
zabardasttt sakhiii,simply superbbb.
kya andaaz-e-bayan hai,kitna dard bhardiya haii tumnee.
bahut khoob.
likhti raho yunhin,khush rahoi sada

shukriya ....bahut bahut

sakhi

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Feb 28 08 10:46 PM

aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

Sakhi jee........

Bohutt khoobsurat likha hai aapne ! Aakhiri line me jo baat keh diya aapne, wo man ko jhankjhor gaya. Sach me aisa hee feel hota hai.

Keep sharing.

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Feb 29 08 1:43 PM

QUOTE (sirftum @ December 29, 2007 01:59 pm)
sakhi
bhut sahi likhaa hai
bhut dard bhraa bhi hai

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

bus kyaa khaoon

take care and keep smiling

sagar

sagar

shukriya bahut bahut

sada khush raho

sakhi

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Apr 15 08 10:50 PM

QUOTE (saira @ January 01, 2008 10:56 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

uffffffff sakhi ji..kya kahe aisa lagra hai jaise apne mera dil ka hal bayan kar rahi hai..
tanhaiya may sisak te rehti hun har dam,
teri yaad mujhe tadpa jati hai har dum....
keep writing sakhi ji,jst love to read ur creation...

saira ji sabse pahle mafi chahungi..late hun mein rply dene mein...


apne saraha acha laga..aur apko apne dil ki baat lage eye janke aur acha laga..aate rahna

tanhaiya may sisak te rehti hun har dam,
teri yaad mujhe tadpa jati hai har dum....

acha laga apka khyaal

apna khyaal rakhna ...

sakhi

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