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May 5 07 2:49 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Dard se bharpur aap ka yaha kalaam dil ko chuu gaya, Sakhi Ji...!

Khaaskar yaha sher ne bahut kuch yaad dilaa di hamein :

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye


Yunhi likhte rahiyega aur khush rahein


Amanush...


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May 7 07 1:23 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Wah Wah Meri Pyaari Dost SAKHI.. Bahut Hi Umda Kalaam Likha hai.. Behtreen Shayara Hain Aap..!!!

Dard ko Bakhoobi Apne Kalaam me Darshaya hai Aapne.. !!! Ehasaason ko Lafzon ke Zariye Zubaan di hai aapne....!!!!!

Daad Kubool Kijiye Apne Is Dost ki TAraf se... Great Work..

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Aap Chaahoge agar Chaahne Walon ki Tarah"

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May 7 07 6:25 PM

QUOTE (abha @ April 30, 2007 08:22 pm)
bahut dard hai isme....lekin khoobsurat bhi bahut hai

abha ji dard aur khubsurati ek sath samjhi apne mere kalaam ki
bhaut bahut shukriya
yuhi sath dena

sakhi with love

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May 7 07 6:40 PM

QUOTE (!!_Badnaam_Shayar_!& @ May 01, 2007 09:56 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Waaah bahut accha likha hai Sakhi...really brilliant..

shukriya guarav

pasand karne ke liye

sakhi

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May 7 07 6:51 PM

QUOTE (mujmj @ May 01, 2007 01:01 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

[B] Sakhi


mujhse door hone pe roye
ya mere kho jaane pe ro diye

hum to dil mai hi the
phir tum kyo ro diye




sakhi bahut aache se likha hai tumne dil ke khayalo ko. yunhi likhte raho par rona nahi.......

shukriya vikas ji sath rahne ke liye

bas yuhi sath banaye rakhna ...apki baat pe amal karungi mein ok

sakhi

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May 7 07 8:34 PM

really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dard se lagta hai aapki najdiki pehchan ban gayee hai
aapka likha achha lagta hai jab aap dard per likhte ho
lekin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeh aapke dard hame bhi to dukhi kar jaate hain
kyu na hum iss dard se bahar nikaalane ki koshish kare aapko

per fir bhi mushkil hai yaar
itni achhi achhi gazals kaha se laayenge padne ke liye


DOOOR SAHIL PER TERE ASHK AUR PARCHAI NE,,,,,,,
AHISTA SE DOOBNE KO MAJBOOR KIYAAA..........
ROSHNI TUM HO YEH SOCH SOORAJ PER LAPKE HUM,,,,,,,,
TUMHARE PYAAR NE KISS KADAR DOOBNE PE MAJBOOR KIYA.........

achha dost yu hi likhte raho lekin bina dard paaleeeeeee
aur dard ke ooper hi likhnaaaaaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeee

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May 8 07 5:51 PM

QUOTE (sprihaastro @ May 01, 2007 01:32 pm)
जो सुना तेरा हाल ए दिल ए सखी
लगा कि ग़म मेरा ही बयान हुआ है

करने को ग़म गलत अपना हम भी
तेरे आँसुओं में अपने आँसू मिला के रो दिए

bahut khub likha apne sanjay ji
sukriya padne aur samjhne ke liye
aur itna pyara reply dne ke liye

sakhi ka sath yuhi hi banaye rakhna

sakhi

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May 8 07 6:01 PM

kafi umda likha hain .. late para hain magar daad kabul kare .. app jante hain hum is forum hain ... tab bhi ab aapko yaha bi reply de rahe hain ====>>>>
kuch lines hain ;;;;;;;;;;;;;===

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

sachai peach ki hain apne .. ek aisi sachai ki jo mere alfazo se milti julti hain ...

apki nazam ke samne is chote se nachiz ki 2 line hain

koshish to puri ki thi tumjhe pane ki
Tera sath jo na mila to thak kar HAAR gaye !!!!!

sukhriya .. aise hi likhte rahe

tc

●๋•●๋•∂ιℓ мαιη υмєє∂ кι кιяαη αвнι внι вαкι нαιη ....
вαѕ ℓσн נαℓαηє кα ιηтzααя нαιη●๋•●๋• ......

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#29 [url]

May 8 07 6:02 PM

QUOTE (Nazish313 @ May 01, 2007 03:22 pm)


tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye
ji haan ye tanhaai bahaut hi takleef de cheez hai,tanhaai main yaadain na hun ye kaise mumkan hai,aur jab pyaare ,bichadne wale yaad aate hain to ansuoon ka sailab umad aata hai

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye
bahaut achha ehsas hai

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye
jane wale sab kuch saath le jate hain sukhh, neend, khushi,sab kuch hi le jate hain, to phhir hote hain hun
aur hoti hain ankhhain num


koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye
bahaut hi aala paae ka khayaal hai sakhi dil ko hia sa gia kih

jin k deed ki aas thee wo mile bhi rah main to yun kile
main nazar uthha kih tarp gia woh nazar bacha kih guzar gay


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bahaut khubbbbbbbbbbbbbbb sakhi

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keep writting

shukriya itna payara revw diya nazish ji

aap sabhi ka sath hai jo likhte hai...

yuhi sath banaye rakhna

sakhi with love

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May 11 07 8:44 PM

yahi dard hai jo dil ko bhaut tadhpata hai

yaad kisi ki hume mita deti hai aur use farq hi nahi padhta

bhaut achha likha hai beta

apna khyaal rakhna hamesha

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May 12 07 1:11 PM

QUOTE (raahi_akela @ May 01, 2007 09:12 pm)
bahut umda ehsaas meri bahan sakhi....bahut umda lafzo ka istemaal....
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye


isko kuch yu kahe to shayad achhha lage.....

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko thukra ke ro diye

bhiya apka change acha laga

shukriya itni gahraai se padne ke liye bahan ka likha

bas sath banaye rakhna hamesha
sakhi with love

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May 12 07 1:20 PM

QUOTE (dheer @ May 02, 2007 08:11 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

* bikhrii kijiyegaa!!

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi ko le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye]

bahut khoob!!

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye
khoob kahaa!!
sakhi

kaafi achi pakad rahi kalaam pe Sakhi ji !! daad haazir hai!!

shukriya dheer ji

yuhi sath dena


khush rahiye
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#33 [url]

May 12 07 2:02 PM

QUOTE (faiq @ May 02, 2007 10:40 pm)
hello sakhi beautiful poetry

god bless ........ yes its very touching aapki poetry padh kar maine bhi ek poetry likdi i ll post soon if i gettime

taka care

faiq

shukriya faiq ji padne aur samjhne ke liye

apne post ki ya nahi abhi??
khush rahna
tc
sakhi

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May 13 07 4:27 PM

QUOTE (Amanush... @ May 05, 2007 02:49 am)

Dard se bharpur aap ka yaha kalaam dil ko chuu gaya, Sakhi Ji...!

Khaaskar yaha sher ne bahut kuch yaad dilaa di hamein :

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye


Yunhi likhte rahiyega aur khush rahein


Amanush...


amanush ji
aapko yahan paya to bahut khushi hui ..ki chalo koi purana sathi abhi bhi yahan sath hai.

shukriya apko pasand aay amera likha hua ek baar phir..
bas ye sath bana arhe
sakhi with love justju/643.gif

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May 13 07 4:34 PM

QUOTE (vicky @ May 07, 2007 01:23 pm)


Wah Wah Meri Pyaari Dost SAKHI.. Bahut Hi Umda Kalaam Likha hai.. Behtreen Shayara Hain Aap..!!!

Dard ko Bakhoobi Apne Kalaam me Darshaya hai Aapne.. !!! Ehasaason ko Lafzon ke Zariye Zubaan di hai aapne....!!!!!

Daad Kubool Kijiye Apne Is Dost ki TAraf se... Great Work..

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shukriya vicky
acha laga apne apne shabdo se nawaza jab mujhe.
yuhi sath dena dost hameshaaaaaaaaaaaaa

sakhi with love

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May 17 07 8:33 PM

QUOTE (sulagate_armaan @ May 07, 2007 08:34 pm)
really great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dard se lagta hai aapki najdiki pehchan ban gayee hai
aapka likha achha lagta hai jab aap dard per likhte ho
lekin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeh aapke dard hame bhi to dukhi kar jaate hain
kyu na hum iss dard se bahar nikaalane ki koshish kare aapko

per fir bhi mushkil hai yaar
itni achhi achhi gazals kaha se laayenge padne ke liye


DOOOR SAHIL PER TERE ASHK AUR PARCHAI NE,,,,,,,
AHISTA SE DOOBNE KO MAJBOOR KIYAAA..........
ROSHNI TUM HO YEH SOCH SOORAJ PER LAPKE HUM,,,,,,,,
TUMHARE PYAAR NE KISS KADAR DOOBNE PE MAJBOOR KIYA.........

achha dost yu hi likhte raho lekin bina dard paaleeeeeee
aur dard ke ooper hi likhnaaaaaaaaaaa
byeeeeeeeeeeeee

DOOOR SAHIL PER TERE ASHK AUR PARCHAI NE,,,,,,,
AHISTA SE DOOBNE KO MAJBOOR KIYAAA..........
ROSHNI TUM HO YEH SOCH SOORAJ PER LAPKE HUM,,,,,,,,
TUMHARE PYAAR NE KISS KADAR DOOBNE PE MAJBOOR KIYA.........

bahut khub raha apka bhi
shukriya

ok koshish karenge bina dard paale ham dard kko likhe
bas apke sath ki umeed bhi hogi ok

samjha uar saraha acha laga
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May 17 07 10:50 PM

sach main sakhi ji bahut accha likha hai apne aur sach main
ye tanhai hoti hi aise chez hai ki bus pooncho mat .....................

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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May 22 07 10:13 PM

QUOTE (mayur_sharma @ May 08, 2007 06:01 pm)
kafi umda likha hain .. late para hain magar daad kabul kare .. app jante hain hum is forum hain ... tab bhi ab aapko yaha bi reply de rahe hain ====>>>>
kuch lines hain ;;;;;;;;;;;;;===

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

sachai peach ki hain apne .. ek aisi sachai ki jo mere alfazo se milti julti hain ...

apki nazam ke samne is chote se nachiz ki 2 line hain

koshish to puri ki thi tumjhe pane ki
Tera sath jo na mila to thak kar HAAR gaye !!!!!

sukhriya .. aise hi likhte rahe

tc

shukriya mayur yahan aaye jo aap na aate huye bhi...


koshish to puri ki thi tumjhe pane ki
Tera sath jo na mila to thak kar HAAR gaye !!!!!

sher acha laga

bahut khub

yuhi sath dena sakhi ka

sakhi with love

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May 28 07 2:46 PM

QUOTE (shrddha @ May 11, 2007 08:44 pm)
yahi dard hai jo dil ko bhaut tadhpata hai

yaad kisi ki hume mita deti hai aur use farq hi nahi padhta

bhaut achha likha hai beta

apna khyaal rakhna hamesha

di such kaha ye dard dil ko bahut tadpata hai

shukriya samjhne ke liye aur sath dene ke liye
with love sakhi

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