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Apr 29 07 11:33 PM

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aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi
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Apr 30 07 1:24 AM

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

bahut achha hai bahut dard men dooba hai kalam bahut khoob
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Apr 30 07 5:14 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

sakhi

aapki tahreer padhi toh hum hi ro diye dil waisi bahut bhari tha.

bahut acha dard mein dooba kalam hai.

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

nira

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Apr 30 07 7:16 AM

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye



Bohat badhiya..........



Sakhi jee


Dard hai magar dil ko chhu lene wala aur bohat pyaara hai...Dard bhi pyaara hota pata hai aapko kabhi mauka mile to zaroor mehsoos karna..Baaki aapka qalaam kamaal ka..sabhi ashaar kaafi ache hai..


shukriyah

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Apr 30 07 11:11 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)



Sakhi i have no words........... simply wonderful..... bahoot khuuub likha hai .....

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Apr 30 07 3:38 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

sakhi ji namaskar


aaj kafi dard pesh kiya hai aapne apni is gazal main

ehsason ka to bus poochiye mat bahut khoob hai.n

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

is sher par to lagta hai jaise kaleja nikal kar rakh diya hai

daad hazir hai

shurkiyaa

dilip

Jindgii jane ko thii
humen mout ko bula liya
kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya

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Apr 30 07 4:46 PM

Bahot khoob ...sakhi
bahot aacha likha hai...lagta hai her kise ke dil ke baat aapne apne dil se likh de ho.
Pad ke bahot aacha likha.

"Wheere There Is A Will There Is A Way."

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May 1 07 9:56 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

Waaah bahut accha likha hai Sakhi...really brilliant..

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May 1 07 1:01 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

[B] Sakhi


mujhse door hone pe roye
ya mere kho jaane pe ro diye

hum to dil mai hi the
phir tum kyo ro diye




sakhi bahut aache se likha hai tumne dil ke khayalo ko. yunhi likhte raho par rona nahi.......

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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May 1 07 1:28 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ 30, 2007 01:24 am)
jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

bahut achha hai bahut dard men dooba hai kalam bahut khoob
Anil

shukriya anil ji apne ise pasand kiya aur samjha hamesha ki tarah

sakhi

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May 1 07 1:32 PM

जो सुना तेरा हाल ए दिल ए सखी
लगा कि ग़म मेरा ही बयान हुआ है

करने को ग़म गलत अपना हम भी
तेरे आँसुओं में अपने आँसू मिला के रो दिए

किसी दूसरे शायर की पंक्त्तियाँ हैं पर मुझ पर लागू हैं:

"ढूँढा सब जहाँ में पाया पता तेरा नहीं
अब पता तेरा मिला तो पता मेरा नहीं"

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May 1 07 1:33 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ 30, 2007 05:14 am)

sakhi

aapki tahreer padhi toh hum hi ro diye dil waisi bahut bhari tha.

bahut acha dard mein dooba kalam hai.

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

nira

didi
apko rona pada islye dil dukhi hua...
apne pada aur samjha likhna safal hua

sakhi with love

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May 1 07 3:22 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye
ji haan ye tanhaai bahaut hi takleef de cheez hai,tanhaai main yaadain na hun ye kaise mumkan hai,aur jab pyaare ,bichadne wale yaad aate hain to ansuoon ka sailab umad aata hai

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye
bahaut achha ehsas hai

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye
jane wale sab kuch saath le jate hain sukhh, neend, khushi,sab kuch hi le jate hain, to phhir hote hain hun
aur hoti hain ankhhain num


koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye
bahaut hi aala paae ka khayaal hai sakhi dil ko hia sa gia kih

jin k deed ki aas thee wo mile bhi rah main to yun kile
main nazar uthha kih tarp gia woh nazar bacha kih guzar gay


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May 1 07 9:12 PM

bahut umda ehsaas meri bahan sakhi....bahut umda lafzo ka istemaal....
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye


isko kuch yu kahe to shayad achhha lage.....

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko thukra ke ro diye

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May 2 07 1:38 AM

QUOTE (Diggaj Dave @ 30, 2007 07:16 am)
koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye



Bohat badhiya..........



Sakhi jee


Dard hai magar dil ko chhu lene wala aur bohat pyaara hai...Dard bhi pyaara hota pata hai aapko kabhi mauka mile to zaroor mehsoos karna..Baaki aapka qalaam kamaal ka..sabhi ashaar kaafi ache hai..


shukriyah

diggaj ji

dard mein kitna pyar hai ye to mahsoos karne wala janta hai kyun ki pyaar ke bina dard nahi hota...jahan dard hai wahan pyar jarur hota hai.. dard ko mein har pal pahsoos karti hun aur isliye meri kalam shayad dard mein jayada chalti hai.

shikriya kalam acha laga apko

sakhi

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May 2 07 8:11 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

* bikhrii kijiyegaa!!

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi ko le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye]

bahut khoob!!

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye
khoob kahaa!!
sakhi

kaafi achi pakad rahi kalaam pe Sakhi ji !! daad haazir hai!!

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May 2 07 10:40 PM

hello sakhi beautiful poetry

god bless ........ yes its very touching aapki poetry padh kar maine bhi ek poetry likdi i ll post soon if i gettime

taka care

faiq

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May 5 07 1:41 AM

QUOTE (ALONE BAD @ April 30, 2007 11:11 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
 



Sakhi i have no words........... simply wonderful..... bahoot khuuub likha hai .....

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alone ji shukriya

apko ye asand aai..

khush rahna aur apna khyal rakhna
sakhi

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May 5 07 1:44 AM

QUOTE (dilip200 @ April 30, 2007 03:38 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 29, 2007 11:33 pm)
aaj kuch khyaal yuhi chale aaye kisi ka likha hua kuch pada to.... apki nazar kar rahi hun mein...apni ye ek dam taza likhi peshkash

tanhaaiyaa mili to ham ghbara ke ro diye
jab yaad teri aai to dil tadpaa ke ro diye

jab naa dikha koi hamein apne aas pass
tab yaad teri har taraf bikhara ke ro diye

tum is tarah gaye ki har khushi sath le gaye
jab dukh ne aake ghera to ghabra ke ro diye

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

sakhi

sakhi ji namaskar


aaj kafi dard pesh kiya hai aapne apni is gazal main

ehsason ka to bus poochiye mat bahut khoob hai.n

koi bhi yaad na kare hamein aaj kal' sakhi'
ye baat yaad aayi to dil ko samjha ke ro diye

is sher par to lagta hai jaise kaleja nikal kar rakh diya hai

daad hazir hai

shurkiyaa

dilip

dilip ji bahut bahut shukriya padne ke liye aur smjhne ke liiye...

yuhi sath dena
sakhi

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May 5 07 1:48 AM

QUOTE (puneet @ April 30, 2007 04:46 pm)
Bahot khoob ...sakhi
bahot aacha likha hai...lagta hai her kise ke dil ke baat aapne apne dil se likh de ho.
Pad ke bahot aacha likha.

puneet ji
bahut bahut dil se shuiya aap yahan aaye ..aaj pahli baar aaye ho aap meri post pe.
apne saraha to acha laga..
aage bhi yuhi sath milega umeed hai
sakhi

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