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Apr 27 07 2:41 AM

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Zindagi ke ehsas ko
Jaga rakkha hai
Shaid kabhi
Un sansoon ki garmi Phir mil jaaye
Un Lams ka ehsas
Phir kahin mil jayae
Jinhoon ne zindagi ko jila bakhshi thee
In bai noor jalti aankhoon ko
Intezar hai un shookh nigahoon ka
Shaiad phir iqrar ka izhar hu jayae
Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea
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Apr 27 07 6:36 AM

ntezar hai un shookh nigahoon ka
Shaiad phir iqrar ka izhar hu jayae
Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea

bahut khoobsoorat hai ye alfaz to bahut khoobsoorat tareeke se ek tadap ko bayan kiya hai
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Apr 27 07 8:51 AM

Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea



Bohat badhiya..........


Javed sahab.......


Jab bhi jo kuch bhi likhte khoob likhte ho..last mein likhi sabhi panktiya bohat pasand aayi mujhe vaise poori nazm badhiya hai...apna khayal rakhe

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Apr 29 07 7:54 PM

QUOTE (javedarshad @ 27, 2007 02:41 am)
Zindagi ke ehsas ko
Jaga rakkha hai
Shaid kabhi
Un sansoon ki garmi Phir mil jaaye
Un Lams ka ehsas
Phir kahin mil jayae
Jinhoon ne zindagi ko jila bakhshi thee
In bai noor jalti aankhoon ko
Intezar hai un shookh nigahoon ka
Shaiad phir iqrar ka izhar hu jayae
Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea

javed sahab namaskar
kya kamal ka likhtey hoo aap too
bhut khoob likhte rahey
really bhut aacha laga aap ko ped keer
daad hazir ha
i yeh aap ke leay umeed hai pasand aay gi


teri kalam main hum ko wo jaduu nazar aya
har nazam ne teri, jhan mein faley andkhaar ko mitaya
socha to tha kai-o- ne ki tujeh rok dey hum
per tuje jisne rok na chaha wo-dhara-shahi- nazar aya

take care and keep smiling

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उसका क्या कुसूर था जो उसको ये सज़ा दी
किया जिसने मुझ पर ख़ुद से ज़्यादा भरोसा
बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Jun 24 07 2:37 AM

QUOTE (javedarshad @ April 27, 2007 02:41 am)
Zindagi ke ehsas ko
Jaga rakkha hai
Shaid kabhi
Un sansoon ki garmi Phir mil jaaye
Un Lams ka ehsas
Phir kahin mil jayae
Jinhoon ne zindagi ko jila bakhshi thee
In bai noor jalti aankhoon ko
Intezar hai un shookh nigahoon ka
Shaiad phir iqrar ka izhar hu jayae
Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea

javed ji

pahle toh maafi chahti hoon dairse aaneki.

aapke kalaam ki tadap aor jazbaat bono hi bahut ghahe hai. dil tak dastak de gaye. har kalaam aapka bemisaal hota hai. yunhi likhte rahiyega. hume intazaar rahega.

nira

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Jul 1 07 8:02 PM

QUOTE (javedarshad @ April 27, 2007 02:41 am)
Zindagi ke ehsas ko
Jaga rakkha hai
Shaid kabhi
Un sansoon ki garmi Phir mil jaaye
Un Lams ka ehsas
Phir kahin mil jayae
Jinhoon ne zindagi ko jila bakhshi thee
In bai noor jalti aankhoon ko
Intezar hai un shookh nigahoon ka
Shaiad phir iqrar ka izhar hu jayae
Bhatak raha hun un rahun per
Jahan teri khushbu basti thee
Shaiad yeh hawa chupke se
Tera pata kabhi bata de
Bus ji raha hai javed
Zindagi tere liyae
Isi ehsas ko liyea

javed ko ISHQ ka adaab...............

kam shabdo me ehsaaso ko khoob piroya hai..padd kar aacha laga...........

uoon hi likhte rahe

Ye AuR bAaT hAi Ke KiSmAt MuJHsE lipAt Ke RoI,
vArNa BaAhEn ToH tUjHe DeKhKaR fAiLaYi ThI



ISHQ

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#18 [url]

Jul 2 07 2:10 AM

Ishiqa ji
Bahut bahut
adaab
aap ka shukria ke aap ne pdaha aur pasand kia


many many tx

javed

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