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Apr 26 07 5:53 PM

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mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 26 07 7:11 PM

QUOTE (mujmj @ April 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

Wonderful....................keep up.

Afzal Chowdhry

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Apr 26 07 7:38 PM

bahut acha likha hai aapne,par zindagi se,bhagwaan se itni mayusi theek nahi.uske ghar der hai andher nahi.har dukh-dard aane waali khushi ke aasaar liye aata hai kyonki har dard ke baad uparwaala khushi zaroor deta hai.
yunhin likhte rahen,khush rahen.

U BIN BULAAYE MILNE CHALA AATA HAI,
GHAM KO MUJHSE YEH UNSIYAT KAISI??

---AKELIJAAN---

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Apr 26 07 8:38 PM

QUOTE (mujmj @ April 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

Vikas ji

bahut dard se bhara kalaam hai. dil hi hila deta hai. bahut acha likha hai,

har kali raat ki nahi subha hoti hai.
har pathjhad ke baad bhahar hoti hai
dil ki khidki khuli rakkhna ay dost
dair se hi sahi dastak zaroor hoti hai.

yehi dua karti hoon, kuch khushi aap ke dar par bhi dastak de. apna khayal rakhna

nira

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Apr 27 07 8:49 AM

QUOTE (Diggaj Dave @ 26, 2007 06:55 pm)
Bhagwan vaise kisi ka bhi naseeb bura nahi likhta bas kisi ko jaladi khushi milti hai kisi ko der se...Kaafi acha likha hai aapne


shukriyah

Diggaj Dave ji..

shukriya aane aur phadne ke liye..

sahi kaha hai aapne ne bhagvan ne sab ke liye kuch na kuch accha sonch hota hi hai....


Shukriya...

vikas

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 8:50 AM

QUOTE (Faypal @ 26, 2007 07:11 pm)
QUOTE (mujmj @ April 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

Wonderful....................keep up.

Afzal Ji shukriya pasand karne ke liye.....


vikas

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 8:52 AM

QUOTE (akelijaan @ 26, 2007 07:38 pm)
bahut acha likha hai aapne,par zindagi se,bhagwaan se itni mayusi theek nahi.uske ghar der hai andher nahi.har dukh-dard aane waali khushi ke aasaar liye aata hai kyonki har dard ke baad uparwaala khushi zaroor deta hai.
yunhin likhte rahen,khush rahen.

Hi ! .....

Bhabvan se klhud se mausiyat nahi hai dost par jab kabhi dil mai kuch dard sa hota hai to kuch aise hi khayal aate hai na..?

Waise shukriya phadne aur samjhne ke liye.. Aise hi saath dete rahiye ....

Vikas

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 8:54 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ 26, 2007 08:38 pm)
QUOTE (mujmj @ April 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

Vikas ji

bahut dard se bhara kalaam hai. dil hi hila deta hai. bahut acha likha hai,

har kali raat ki nahi subha hoti hai.
har pathjhad ke baad bhahar hoti hai
dil ki khidki khuli rakkhna ay dost
dair se hi sahi dastak zaroor hoti hai.

yehi dua karti hoon, kuch khushi aap ke dar par bhi dastak de. apna khayal rakhna

nira

NIra ji

Kai baar soncha aisa kuch nahi likhu ke aapko dukh ho kuch dino se kuch likha bhi nahi tha. AAj mann thoda udass ho gaya tha kuch khass din tha. Mann ke vicharo ko likh diya.

Shukriya saath dene ke liye. Yunhi dosti nibhate rahiye...

Vikas

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 10:06 AM

QUOTE (mujmj @ 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

mujmj ji bhut behtreen koshish ......ehsaas pyare hain or lafaz bhi pyare hain lakin kush kami c ho jaise........yun hii koshish karte rahiyga .......meri daad kabool karain ......raj........

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Apr 27 07 1:57 PM

QUOTE (rajveer @ 27, 2007 10:06 am)
QUOTE (mujmj @ 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

mujmj ji bhut behtreen koshish ......ehsaas pyare hain or lafaz bhi pyare hain lakin kush kami c ho jaise........yun hii koshish karte rahiyga .......meri daad kabool karain ......raj........

Rajveer Ji shukriya aane aur saath dene ke liye.

vikas

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 2:01 PM

vikas ji yahi life hain ..itana mayus nahi hote .. wasie bahut accha likha hai

khaas kar yah

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

bahut khoob

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Apr 27 07 2:32 PM

QUOTE (ranjana @ 27, 2007 02:01 pm)
vikas ji yahi life hain ..itana mayus nahi hote .. wasie bahut accha likha hai

khaas kar yah

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

bahut khoob

RANJANA JI

Shukriya aapka aane aur pasand karne ke liye... Umeed hai yunhi saath deti rahengi AAP.

take care Ranju

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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Apr 27 07 2:54 PM

QUOTE (mujmj @ 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

dard aur dard

bad yahi hai life

bahut khub

sakhi

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Apr 27 07 3:07 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 27, 2007 02:54 pm)
QUOTE (mujmj @ 26, 2007 05:53 pm)
mere naseeb ai aisa kyon likha bhagvan ne
nahi samjh paya mai kabhi bhi

har samay aisa kyo lage kuch kami hai
jeevan sanvaar nahi paya kabhi bhi

laga jaise kuch choot gaya hai haatho se
kabhi jod nahi paya tuta kabhi bhi

behte rahe aankho se aansu mere
zakham sil nahi paya kabhi bhi

sukhte hontho pe leta raha naam tera
chah ke bhi saanse rok na kabhi bhi

aisi halat hai ab meri ke kaya kahu
chupa bhi nahi paya kabhi bhi....

dard aur dard

bad yahi hai life

bahut khub

sakhi

sakhi

thanks... take care

Wo bhi kaya din the jab sang muskurate the
ab to ronne ko bhi kandha dhundhte hai

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