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#21 [url]

May 23 07 11:30 AM

QUOTE (Widhani @ May 23, 2007 11:18 am)
QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 11:09 am)
main darti hoon diolo ke dukhne se
aankho me bhar aane waale paani se
mujhko darata hai ye dil dharkno se
ab bhi ek aas dete ho tum apni aaaz se
chalo azmaa hi lete hain khudko dosti se

zaroor padhoongi aapko huzur !
fir aapke shabdo mein pyaari si request jo hai.


Tujhe darr lagta hai rishte banane se shayad aapke past experiences achhe nahin the. Isi par kuch kehta hooon.


Jab zaroorat thi tujhe doston ki to shayad wo door honge
Aa na sake tere ashq mitane, shayad apne bhi majboor honge
Mita liya khudko sitaron ne sirf tujhe roshni dene ke liye
Bas naam lena jab yaad aayein hum tere kareeb zaroor honge


Sabse kahufnaak to zindagi hai par jeena thodi chord dete hain pagli...

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet !!!

I loved the last line of ur message and ur $ lines are really assuring

main chalti hoon kuchh kadam
tum thaam lena mujhey agale hi kadam
zindagi ka saath nahi chhora maine
ussne mujhko aur maine ussko azmaayaa har kadam

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#22 [url]

May 23 07 2:02 PM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 11:30 am)
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet !!!

I loved the last line of ur message and ur $ lines are really assuring

main chalti hoon kuchh kadam
tum thaam lena mujhey agale hi kadam
zindagi ka saath nahi chhora maine
ussne mujhko aur maine ussko azmaayaa har kadam

main chalti hoon kuchh kadam
tum thaam lena mujhey agale hi kadam
zindagi ka saath nahi chhora maine
ussne mujhko aur maine ussko azmaayaa har kadam

Sorry Geeta lekin yahan main aapki baat nahin manunga. Main aapko kabhi nahin thamoonga. Janti hain kyon. Ek baar mujhe kisi ne kaha ki sacha dost wo hota hai jiske saath aap apne sabhi dukh baant sako. Jante ho mera jawaab. Guess karo....

Maine kaha ki sacha dost wo nahin hota jiske saath aap apne sabhi dukh baant sako. Balki sacha dost wo hota hai jo jab aapke saath ho to aapko koi dukh hi na ho. Aur main apne doston ko dukhi hone hi nahin deta to baantna to door ki baat hai na.

Kisi raat kabhi mer saath, ye haseen anokhi baat ho gayi
Sune the jiski bewafai ke kisse, us zindagi se mulaqat ho gayi.
Maine kaha kyon darling, zamana tumse kyon hara hai
Wo boli maine Ehsaason ko Nahin "Ehsaason ne mujhko mara hai"

Log kehte hain mujhe bewafa, mujhe badnaam karte hain
Jane wo log meri itni si baat kyon nahin samajhte hain
Main nahin karti bewafaai, balki ye duniya mera hi roop hai
Aaina hoon main karmo ka apne, Har zakhm mera swaroop hai


Artharth, Dosti kiye ja, Fal ki apeksha mat kar. Meetha hoga to kha lena aur jo kadwa ho to bo dena. Hazaron aur fal milenge aur mostly meethe hi honge.

Samjhe Bachha.....

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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#23 [url]

May 23 07 3:39 PM

QUOTE (Widhani @ May 23, 2007 02:02 pm)
QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 11:30 am)
        sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet !!!

I loved the last line of ur message and ur $ lines are really assuring 

main chalti hoon kuchh kadam
tum thaam lena mujhey agale hi kadam
zindagi ka saath nahi chhora maine
ussne mujhko aur maine ussko azmaayaa har kadam

main chalti hoon kuchh kadam
tum thaam lena mujhey agale hi kadam
zindagi ka saath nahi chhora maine
ussne mujhko aur maine ussko azmaayaa har kadam

Sorry Geeta lekin yahan main aapki baat nahin manunga. Main aapko kabhi nahin thamoonga. Janti hain kyon. Ek baar mujhe kisi ne kaha ki sacha dost wo hota hai jiske saath aap apne sabhi dukh baant sako. Jante ho mera jawaab. Guess karo....

Maine kaha ki sacha dost wo nahin hota jiske saath aap apne sabhi dukh baant sako. Balki sacha dost wo hota hai jo jab aapke saath ho to aapko koi dukh hi na ho. Aur main apne doston ko dukhi hone hi nahin deta to baantna to door ki baat hai na.

Kisi raat kabhi mer saath, ye haseen anokhi baat ho gayi
Sune the jiski bewafai ke kisse, us zindagi se mulaqat ho gayi.
Maine kaha kyon darling, zamana tumse kyon hara hai
Wo boli maine Ehsaason ko Nahin "Ehsaason ne mujhko mara hai"

Log kehte hain mujhe bewafa, mujhe badnaam karte hain
Jane wo log meri itni si baat kyon nahin samajhte hain
Main nahin karti bewafaai, balki ye duniya mera hi roop hai
Aaina hoon main karmo ka apne, Har zakhm mera swaroop hai


Artharth, Dosti kiye ja, Fal ki apeksha mat kar. Meetha hoga to kha lena aur jo kadwa ho to bo dena. Hazaron aur fal milenge aur mostly meethe hi honge.

Samjhe Bachha.....

Ji sarkaar samjhi................
aap bhi apni jagah bilkul durust farmaa rahe hian aur main apni soch ke daayre mein hoon. par aapse poora ittefaaq rakhti hoon. mujhko dost kehane ka shukriya huzur. justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

aapne jo zindagi ko lafzo ka jaamaa ppehanaayaa hai wo bahaut sahi hai aur ek kadwa sach ki tasveer dikhata hai. fal chaaahe kadwe ho ya meethey main dono ko hi uss hi pyaar se except karti hoon. meetha aur kadwa dono aadhe mere aur aadhe main aapke kahe anoosaar bo doongi aur pyaar se seenchoongi.

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#24 [url]

May 23 07 4:52 PM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 03:39 pm)
Ji sarkaar samjhi................
aap bhi apni jagah bilkul durust farmaa rahe hian aur main apni soch ke daayre mein hoon. par aapse poora ittefaaq rakhti hoon. mujhko dost kehane ka shukriya huzur. justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

aapne jo zindagi ko lafzo ka jaamaa ppehanaayaa hai wo bahaut sahi hai aur ek kadwa sach ki tasveer dikhata hai. fal chaaahe kadwe ho ya meethey main dono ko hi uss hi pyaar se except karti hoon. meetha aur kadwa dono aadhe mere aur aadhe main aapke kahe anoosaar bo doongi aur pyaar se seenchoongi.

To kya main ye samjhoo ki aap mujhse dosti karke mujhpar ye inayat karengi???

Chooo Chweeeetttttt...

Aapke reply ka intzaar rahega...

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 24 07 11:03 AM

QUOTE (Widhani @ May 23, 2007 04:52 pm)
QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 03:39 pm)
Ji sarkaar samjhi................ 
aap bhi apni jagah bilkul durust farmaa rahe hian aur main apni soch ke daayre mein hoon. par aapse poora ittefaaq rakhti hoon. mujhko dost kehane ka shukriya huzur. justju/rose.gif  justju/rose.gif

aapne jo zindagi ko lafzo ka jaamaa ppehanaayaa hai wo bahaut sahi hai aur ek kadwa sach ki tasveer dikhata hai.  fal chaaahe kadwe ho ya meethey main dono ko hi uss hi pyaar se except karti hoon. meetha aur kadwa dono aadhe mere aur aadhe main aapke kahe anoosaar bo doongi aur pyaar se seenchoongi.

To kya main ye samjhoo ki aap mujhse dosti karke mujhpar ye inayat karengi???

Chooo Chweeeetttttt...

Aapke reply ka intzaar rahega...

arey mujhey laga ki ab tak humlog dost bnan chuke hain...!! warna aapse itani baatein kar ke main aapko itna pareshaan nahi karti aur na hi har reply ka reply deke wait karti apake reply ka.... umeed hai aap iss friendship ko accept karenge justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

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#26 [url]

May 24 07 11:09 AM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 24, 2007 11:03 am)
arey mujhey laga ki ab tak humlog dost bnan chuke hain...!! warna aapse itani baatein kar ke main aapko itna pareshaan nahi karti aur na hi har reply ka reply deke wait karti apake reply ka.... umeed hai aap iss friendship ko accept karenge justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif

Accept Karenge!!!!!!!

Ji itni shiddat aur Khushi se to maine Khuda se zindagi bhi accept nahin ki thi.

waise agar aap chahien to hum Shout box mein baatein kar sakte hain. Phir aapko mere reply ka zyada intzar nahin karna padega.

:-)

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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#27 [url]

May 24 07 2:52 PM

Amit aapke dono replies ka reply yahin de rahi hoon.
haan mujhey saja kubool hai aur ye bhi ki Shout box mein baat ki jaa sakti hai aur karenge bhi.
thanks for being a friend.

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May 24 07 4:21 PM

amit ji aaj apko pehli baar padha he aur soch rahi hun ki pehle q nahi padha
anyway kehte hain na dair aye durust aye

apne jazbaat ko lafzon main ba khubi piroya he bahut khubsurat andaze bayan he apka padhkar man khush ho gaya

behtreeeeeeen kalam par tahe dil se dad hazir he




keep writing
take care
bye

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Mangi thi mene tumse mohabbat ki zindagi
Tumne to zindagi ko mohabbat bana diya

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#29 [url]

May 24 07 5:11 PM

QUOTE (khushi @ May 24, 2007 04:21 pm)
amit ji aaj apko pehli baar padha he aur soch rahi hun ki pehle q nahi padha
anyway kehte hain na dair aye durust aye

apne jazbaat ko lafzon main ba khubi piroya he bahut khubsurat andaze bayan he apka padhkar man khush ho gaya

behtreeeeeeen kalam par tahe dil se dad hazir he




keep writing
take care
bye

ji mujhe nahin lagta ki aapne mujhe pehli baar padha hai kyonki maine kai baar shout box mein bhi kaafi kuch likha hai.

Aur agar aapne pehli baar meri koi post padhai haito chahein to aur bhi padh sakti hai. Vaada karta hoon achhi lagengi..

Aur haan I am not too sure if u've read this whole post.

page 2 padhein. Ek badsurat Haqiqat ko khoobsurat alfaaz diye hain.

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 28 07 11:08 AM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 24, 2007 02:52 pm)
Amit aapke dono replies ka reply yahin de rahi hoon.
haan mujhey saja kubool hai aur ye bhi ki Shout box mein baat ki jaa sakti hai aur karenge bhi.
thanks for being a friend.

I m waiting 4 ur next message Geeta.... And U

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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#31 [url]

May 29 07 12:48 AM

justju/rose.gif hi amit
aapko me jayada to nahi janti lekin ha itna jarur kah sakti hu ki aapko kuch kuch to jan chuki hu.
itna dard apke kalaam me kaise aaya shayad ye bhi thoda thoda sa samajhti hu.
apne dard ko bakai badi berahmi se mehsoos kiya hai,or me yahi soch rahi hu ki itna dard bhara kalaam likhte samay aapne kitna dard mehsoos kiya hoga.shayad wo pal kaafii bojhal kadmo se aapke pass se gaye honge.
me yahi dua karti hu apne bhagwan se ki wo apko itni shakti de ki aap is dard se nizaat paa sako.

apki dost justju/643.gif

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#32 [url]

May 29 07 12:25 PM

QUOTE (mahuaa_mehek @ May 29, 2007 12:48 am)
justju/rose.gif hi amit
aapko me jayada to nahi janti lekin ha itna jarur kah sakti hu ki aapko kuch kuch to jan chuki hu.
itna dard apke kalaam me kaise aaya shayad ye bhi thoda thoda sa samajhti hu.
apne dard ko bakai badi berahmi se mehsoos kiya hai,or me yahi soch rahi hu ki itna dard bhara kalaam likhte samay aapne kitna dard mehsoos kiya hoga.shayad wo pal kaafii bojhal kadmo se aapke pass se gaye honge.
me yahi dua karti hu apne bhagwan se ki wo apko itni shakti de ki aap is dard se nizaat paa sako.

apki dost justju/643.gif


Kya Kahoon Mahuaa???

Yaar aapke Khuda se ek baar maine khushi maangi thi. Apne liye nahin un logon ke liye jinhe main bahut mohabbat karta tha. Janti ho usne kya kiya?

Aaj wo log us duniya mein hain jahan kisi ko dukh nahin hota. Usne unhe apne paas bula liya. Ab kya maangu usse aur kyon. Aapne mere liye dua karke mujhe apne gulaambana liya. Kabhi bhi meri zaroorat ho to pukariyega zaroor....

Aapka Apna...

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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