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Apr 24 07 9:18 PM

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Hello Friends,

Ek aur ehsaas pesh kar raha hoon har baar ki tarah isi vaade ke saath ki ye aapko zaroor achha lagega..But this time for a change I cud not think of a title.

Its a request to all u friendz that please suggest me a title for this...

Kabhi hoti thi tanhaiyon mein bhi mere hoton par hansi
Aaj Mehfilon mein bhi mujhe dard-e-dil hua karta hai
Mere jeene ki aarzoo karte the mere dushman bhi kabhi
Aaj mera hamdard bhi meri ruksati ki dua karta hai

Samajhta tha khud ko kushnaseeb jise mere dil mein panah milti thi
Aaj ashq bhi meri aankhon mein khud ko anaath samajhta hai
Khoobsoorat hota tha har wo kalaam jo main kalam se likta tha
Aaj lahoo se likha "Ehsaas" bhi khud ko alfaaaz samjhta hai

Kabhi jeeta tha mera qatil bhi meri aashiqui ki umeed mein
Aaj mera dil bhi meri zindagi ke liye kahaan dhadakta hai
Kya hoti hai bewafaai ye to kabhi maloom na tha
Aaj zarra zarra mera mohabbat ke liye tadapta hai

Itna roshan tha dil mera mujhe suraj ki bhi Zaroorat na thi
Aaj Andheri galiyon mein "Ehsaas" roshni ke liye bhatakta hai
Kabhi dikti thi apni parchayi amawas ki kali raat mein bhi mujhe
Aaj mera hi Saya mujhe Ujaalon tak mein nahin dikhta hai

Socha tha hogi Maut meri kisi anjaane Dushman ke haath se
Aaj rehnuma bhi mera mere qatal ka shauk rakhta hai
Mera to dil rota tha dushmanon ki bhi majaar par
Aaj har bawafa dost mera meri hi chita pe aag rakhta hai

Kabhi tapte registan ki dhool mein bhi main gehri neend sota tha
Aaj mera Aashiyana bhi mujhe sukoon se sone nahin deta hai
Tera Aanchal hi meri jaanat tha Maaaa par ab tu khud jannat mein hai
Rona chahta hoon par tere dard ka "Ehsaas" rone bhi nahin deta hai

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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Apr 24 07 9:41 PM

Amit ji

bahut acha kalaam likha hai jabaat ko acha aksharon mein byaan kiya hai. dil ko choo gayen hain inke ehsaas. daad kabool farmayain. yunhi yahan bazm ko mahekate rahiyega.

muje yeh title thik laga hai

Aaj mera hamdard bhi meri ruksati ki dua karta hai

nira




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Apr 24 07 10:26 PM

Samajhta tha khud ko kushnaseeb jise mere dil mein panah milti thi
Aaj ashq bhi meri aankhon mein khud ko anaath samajhta hai
Khoobsoorat hota tha har wo kalaam jo main kalam se likta tha
Aaj lahoo se likha "Ehsaas" bhi khud ko alfaaaz samjhta hai



Wah kya baat hai..........


Kabhi jeeta tha mera qatil bhi meri aashiqui ki umeed mein
Aaj mera dil bhi meri zindagi ke liye kahaan dhadakta hai
Kya hoti hai bewafaai ye to kabhi maloom na tha
Aaj zarra zarra mera mohabbat ke liye tadapta hai

Itna roshan tha dil mera mujhe suraj ki bhi Zaroorat na thi
Aaj Andheri galiyon mein "Ehsaas" roshni ke liye bhatakta hai
Kabhi dikti thi apni parchayi amawas ki kali raat mein bhi mujhe
Aaj mera hi Saya mujhe Ujaalon tak mein nahin dikhta hai



Bohat khoob bohat khoob..............kya kahe ab


Kabhi tapte registan ki dhool mein bhi main gehri neend sota tha
Aaj mera Aashiyana bhi mujhe sukoon se sone nahin deta hai
Tera Aanchal hi meri jaanat tha Maaaa par ab tu khud jannat mein hai
Rona chahta hoon par tere dard ka "Ehsaas" rone bhi nahin deta hai



Nice.......



Namaskaar Amit sahab


Sach kahu to aaj shabad nahi mere pass aapki tarif karne k liye...bohat umda aur khoobsurat aapne likha hai aur chun-2 k alfaaz kaam mein liye hai jo dil par vaar karte hai...daad qabool kare dost


apna khayal rakhe

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Apr 25 07 9:55 PM

amit bhaut dard hai isme aur bhaut si sachhyi batata hua ye kalaam

yahi hai rishte yahi zindgi hai

waqt ke saath badal rahahai

iska tiltle

badalte rishte

yaa dard bhara pyaar ho sakta hai

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Apr 26 07 3:16 PM

QUOTE (Misty @ April 24, 2007 09:41 pm)
Amit ji

bahut acha kalaam likha hai jabaat ko acha aksharon mein byaan kiya hai. dil ko choo gayen hain inke ehsaas. daad kabool farmayain. yunhi yahan bazm ko mahekate rahiyega.

muje yeh title thik laga hai

Aaj mera hamdard bhi meri ruksati ki dua karta hai

nira

Padne Ke Liye Shukriya Nira Ji, Aapko ye "Ehsaas" pasand aaya, humein sukoon mila.

Ji aapne jo Title sujhaya hai, hum uspar gaur zaroor karenge. Bas ye janna chahte hain ki humare baaki doston k ye "Ehsaas" kaisa laga aur wo log iske baare mein kya sochte hain..

Aur haan har baar ki tarah vaada karte hain aapo humare baaki "ehsaas" bhi achhe lagenge..

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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Apr 26 07 3:22 PM

QUOTE (Diggaj Dave @ April 24, 2007 10:26 pm)
Samajhta tha khud ko kushnaseeb jise mere dil mein panah milti thi
Aaj ashq bhi meri aankhon mein khud ko anaath samajhta hai
Khoobsoorat hota tha har wo kalaam jo main kalam se likta tha
Aaj lahoo se likha "Ehsaas" bhi khud ko alfaaaz samjhta hai



Wah kya baat hai..........


Kabhi jeeta tha mera qatil bhi meri aashiqui ki umeed mein
Aaj mera dil bhi meri zindagi ke liye kahaan dhadakta hai
Kya hoti hai bewafaai ye to kabhi maloom na tha
Aaj zarra zarra mera mohabbat ke liye tadapta hai

Itna roshan tha dil mera mujhe suraj ki bhi Zaroorat na thi
Aaj Andheri galiyon mein "Ehsaas" roshni ke liye bhatakta hai
Kabhi dikti thi apni parchayi amawas ki kali raat mein bhi mujhe
Aaj mera hi Saya mujhe Ujaalon tak mein nahin dikhta hai



Bohat khoob bohat khoob..............kya kahe ab


Kabhi tapte registan ki dhool mein bhi main gehri neend sota tha
Aaj mera Aashiyana bhi mujhe sukoon se sone nahin deta hai
Tera Aanchal hi meri jaanat tha Maaaa par ab tu khud jannat mein hai
Rona chahta hoon par tere dard ka "Ehsaas" rone bhi nahin deta hai



Nice.......



Namaskaar Amit sahab


Sach kahu to aaj shabad nahi mere pass aapki tarif karne k liye...bohat umda aur khoobsurat aapne likha hai aur chun-2 k alfaaz kaam mein liye hai jo dil par vaar karte hai...daad qabool kare dost


apna khayal rakhe

Diggaj Ji,

Hamare har kadam par saath chalne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
Vaada karta hoon aage bhi aapko apne alfaazon se niraash hone ka mauka nahin doonga.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya.

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 7 07 2:19 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ April 27, 2007 12:36 pm)
amit bahut khub likha hai
mere khyaal se iska title hai...

aaj aur kal...ek kasham-kas

Thanx Sakhi. Achha title bataya aapne.

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 8 07 3:52 AM

Samajhta tha khud ko kushnaseeb jise mere dil mein panah milti thi
Aaj ashq bhi meri aankhon mein khud ko anaath samajhta hai
Khoobsoorat hota tha har wo kalaam jo main kalam se likta tha
Aaj lahoo se likha "Ehsaas" bhi khud ko alfaaaz samjhta hai

bohat khoob amit gr8 work daad khubool kijiye

god bless lovely awesome
i dont have words to say
any ways keep writing
take care
faiq waljee

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May 18 07 9:55 AM

QUOTE (faiq @ May 08, 2007 03:52 am)
bohat khoob amit gr8 work daad khubool kijiye

god bless lovely awesome
i dont have words to say
any ways keep writing
take care
faiq waljee

Shukriya Faiq aur vaada karta hoon aapko mere baaki ehsaas bhi achhe lagenge.

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 18 07 10:17 AM

QUOTE (Widhani @ April 24, 2007 09:18 pm)
Kabhi hoti thi tanhaiyon mein bhi mere hoton par hansi
Aaj Mehfilon mein bhi mujhe dard-e-dil hua karta hai
Mere jeene ki aarzoo karte the mere dushman bhi kabhi
Aaj mera hamdard bhi meri ruksati ki dua karta hai

जो रूठे हैं मेरे हमदर्द भी मुझसे, क्या मैं भी रूठा बैठा हूँ
जो मिलती है तन्हाई महफ़िलों में आकर मुझसे
क्या मैं सबसे टूटा बैठा हूँ

कैसा दिखता है अक्स मेरा ज़माने के दर्पण में
क्या मैं अपनी बिखरी तस्वीर लिए बैठा हूँ

"ढूँढा सब जहाँ में, पाया पता तेरा नहीं
अब पता तेरा मिला, तो पता मेरा नहीं"

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May 18 07 6:00 PM

QUOTE (SanjayGulatiMusafir @ May 18, 2007 10:17 am)
जो रूठे हैं मेरे हमदर्द भी मुझसे, क्या मैं भी रूठा बैठा हूँ
जो मिलती है तन्हाई महफ़िलों में आकर मुझसे
क्या मैं सबसे टूटा बैठा हूँ

कैसा दिखता है अक्स मेरा ज़माने के दर्पण में
क्या मैं अपनी बिखरी तस्वीर लिए बैठा हूँ



Mera Darpan, Mera Aaina Meri maa ki Aankhen thi
Aaj usne aankhen moond li hain
Kahan jaaon kahan niharoun khud ko
Maa ab duniya mein hi nahin hai

Main nahin rootha us hamdard se kabhi
Aaj wo hi mujhe choot gayi
Main tanha apni marzi se nahin hoon
Meri taqdeer mujhse rooth gayi

Kabhi jo mehfilein mere naam se roshan thi
Aaj wo meri rooh ko wo dafna chuke main
Mehekte the jo phool aashiyane mein mere
Aaj meri majaar par wo murjha chuke hain

Meri saanse khuda ki marzi nahin meri maa ki amanat hain
Jo zinda hai ye hans baazon ke mele mein ye uski inayat hai

Shayad hogi teri zaroorat khuda ko par usse mujhe kya lena maa
Maa tu ja rahi hai Maa tu mat ja....
Tujh bin kahan jee paunga main tu mujhse door to mat ja
Dar dar bhatak raha hoon maa aa mere paas aa, aa mere paas aa...

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 20 07 12:15 AM

Amit bahaut khoobsurat ehasaas hain aur utni hi khoobsurati se piroya hai.
ek lai bandhi hai aapki rachna mein, achhi baat hai. parh kar laga ki main aur aapki rachnaien achhe friends ban jaayenge. likahte rahiye yun hi.

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May 20 07 3:40 PM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 20, 2007 12:15 am)
Amit bahaut khoobsurat ehasaas hain aur utni hi khoobsurati se piroya hai.
ek lai bandhi hai aapki rachna mein, achhi baat hai. parh kar laga ki main aur aapki rachnaien achhe friends ban jaayenge. likahte rahiye yun hi.

Ji sirf mere ehsaason se hi dosti karengi yaa >......

Waise main bhi bura to nahinnn..

justju/246.gif

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 20 07 8:36 PM

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Mera Darpan, Mera Aaina Meri maa ki Aankhen thi
Aaj usne aankhen moond li hain
Kahan jaaon kahan niharoun khud ko
Maa ab duniya mein hi nahin hai

Main nahin rootha us hamdard se kabhi
Aaj wo hi mujhe choot gayi
Main tanha apni marzi se nahin hoon
Meri taqdeer mujhse rooth gayi

Kabhi jo mehfilein mere naam se roshan thi
Aaj wo meri rooh ko wo dafna chuke main
Mehekte the jo phool aashiyane mein mere
Aaj meri majaar par wo murjha chuke hain

Meri saanse khuda ki marzi nahin meri maa ki amanat hain
Jo zinda hai ye hans baazon ke mele mein ye uski inayat hai

Shayad hogi teri zaroorat khuda ko par usse mujhe kya lena maa
Maa tu ja rahi hai Maa tu mat ja....
Tujh bin kahan jee paunga main tu mujhse door to mat ja
Dar dar bhatak raha hoon maa aa mere paas aa, aa mere paas aa...


Amit ji
jo tadap aur khalipana aap jata maa ko khone uskha andaaz hai mujko.
aapne mama keliye ehsaas byaan kiye hai aatmaa talk hil gayi hai. iske aage kuch kaha nahi jayega. kash yeh din kisi ki zindgi mein aa aaye.

apna khayal rakhiyega.
aapki dost
nira

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May 22 07 10:01 AM

QUOTE (Misty @ May 20, 2007 08:36 pm)
Amit ji
jo tadap aur khalipana aap jata maa ko khone uskha andaaz hai mujko.
aapne mama keliye ehsaas byaan kiye hai aatmaa talk hil gayi hai. iske aage kuch kaha nahi jayega. kash yeh din kisi ki zindgi mein aa aaye.

apna khayal rakhiyega.
aapki dost
nira

Ji bas aapke ek spelling mistake ko theek kar raha hoon.

Kaash ye din kisi ki zindagi mein na aaye.....
justju/239.gif

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 22 07 10:20 AM

QUOTE (shrddha @ April 25, 2007 09:55 pm)
amit bhaut dard hai isme aur bhaut si sachhyi batata hua ye kalaam

yahi hai rishte yahi zindgi hai

waqt ke saath badal rahahai

iska tiltle

badalte rishte

yaa dard bhara pyaar ho sakta hai

Thnx 4 thinking about it and suggesting such beautiful title.

Waise aisa lagta hai aapko mere sabhi Ehsaas bahut pasand aate hain.

Kahin Makhan to nahin lagate na.

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 22 07 3:54 PM

QUOTE (Widhani @ May 20, 2007 03:40 pm)
QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 20, 2007 12:15 am)
Amit bahaut khoobsurat ehasaas hain aur utni hi khoobsurati se piroya hai.
ek lai bandhi hai aapki rachna mein, achhi baat hai. parh kar laga ki main aur aapki rachnaien achhe friends ban jaayenge.   likahte rahiye yun hi.

Ji sirf mere ehsaason se hi dosti karengi yaa >......

Waise main bhi bura to nahinnn..

justju/246.gif

Amit,

dosti kar to loo.n main magar
insaa.n parakhne ki aadat nahi

kehate hain log aksar ye mujhse
Geeta ab band aankho ka zamana nahi

well Amit ji aap meri baat ka bura na maaniyega kya karoo aapka reply dekh kar sabse pehla khayaal yahi aaya dil mein so likh diya, aur rahi baat aapse dosti ki to...aap bhi yahin hain aur main bhi.! dosto ho hi jaayegi.

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May 23 07 10:20 AM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 22, 2007 03:54 pm)
Amit,

dosti kar to loo.n main magar
insaa.n parakhne ki aadat nahi

kehate hain log aksar ye mujhse
Geeta ab band aankho ka zamana nahi

well Amit ji aap meri baat ka bura na maaniyega kya karoo aapka reply dekh kar sabse pehla khayaal yahi aaya dil mein so likh diya, aur rahi baat aapse dosti ki to...aap bhi yahin hain aur main bhi.! dosto ho hi jaayegi.

Dosti ho jati humari agar insaa parakhna aata unhe,
Na koi gehna na shringaar koi. Apni mohabbat se sajata unhe..
Hain kuch to zamane ko ruswaiyan mujhse yun hi to nahi tadpata hai,
Jo pirota hoon chun chun kar phool rah mein, ye kaante bichata hai...

justju/rose.gif


Waise agar aap mera ek ehsaas jo ki Khushamadeed mein hai "Main Kaun Hoon" padh lein to dosti khud ba khud ho jayegi..

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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May 23 07 11:09 AM

QUOTE (Widhani @ May 23, 2007 10:20 am)
QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 22, 2007 03:54 pm)
Amit,

dosti kar to loo.n main magar
insaa.n parakhne ki aadat nahi

kehate hain log aksar ye mujhse
Geeta ab band aankho ka zamana nahi

well Amit ji aap meri baat ka bura na maaniyega kya karoo aapka reply dekh kar sabse pehla khayaal yahi aaya dil mein so likh diya, aur rahi baat aapse dosti ki to...aap bhi yahin hain aur main bhi.! dosto ho hi jaayegi.

Dosti ho jati humari agar insaa parakhna aata unhe,
Na koi gehna na shringaar koi. Apni mohabbat se sajata unhe..
Hain kuch to zamane ko ruswaiyan mujhse yun hi to nahi tadpata hai,
Jo pirota hoon chun chun kar phool rah mein, ye kaante bichata hai...

justju/rose.gif


Waise agar aap mera ek ehsaas jo ki Khushamadeed mein hai "Main Kaun Hoon" padh lein to dosti khud ba khud ho jayegi..


main darti hoon diolo ke dukhne se
aankho me bhar aane waale paani se
mujhko darata hai ye dil dharkno se
ab bhi ek aas dete ho tum apni aaaz se
chalo azmaa hi lete hain khudko dosti se

zaroor padhoongi aapko huzur !
fir aapke shabdo mein pyaari si request jo hai.

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May 23 07 11:18 AM

QUOTE (GEETANJALI @ May 23, 2007 11:09 am)
main darti hoon diolo ke dukhne se
aankho me bhar aane waale paani se
mujhko darata hai ye dil dharkno se
ab bhi ek aas dete ho tum apni aaaz se
chalo azmaa hi lete hain khudko dosti se

zaroor padhoongi aapko huzur !
fir aapke shabdo mein pyaari si request jo hai.


Tujhe darr lagta hai rishte banane se shayad aapke past experiences achhe nahin the. Isi par kuch kehta hooon.


Jab zaroorat thi tujhe doston ki to shayad wo door honge
Aa na sake tere ashq mitane, shayad apne bhi majboor honge
Mita liya khudko sitaron ne sirf tujhe roshni dene ke liye
Bas naam lena jab yaad aayein hum tere kareeb zaroor honge


Sabse kahufnaak to zindagi hai par jeena thodi chord dete hain pagli...

Amit Widhani....

Ek Teeli Maachis se, Samandar ko kya Jalaoge Tum !!!!

Piye ho jisne Khoon ke Aansoo, Chand Kharonchon se usse kya Rulaoge Tum???

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