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Apr 24 07 7:03 PM

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ek aur Sher likh raha hu !!!!!!!!!

Kaash koi prem ki pyali pilane waala hota,
To aaj hum sharaabi naa hote...
Kaash koi hum par jaan fida karne waala hota,
To aaj hum kaatil naa hote...
Kaash koi hamare saath ghar basanewala hota,
To aaj hum beghar naa hote...
Shaayad accha hi hua ke koi bhi nahi hai,
Nahi to aaj hum shaayar naa hote...!!


^^^^^ HOPE U LIKE IT ^^^^^^


●๋•●๋•∂ιℓ мαιη υмєє∂ кι кιяαη αвнι внι вαкι нαιη ....
вαѕ ℓσн נαℓαηє кα ιηтzααя нαιη●๋•●๋• ......

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Apr 24 07 7:15 PM

QUOTE (mayur_sharma @ April 24, 2007 07:03 pm)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ek aur Sher likh raha hu !!!!!!!!!

Kaash koi prem ki pyali pilane waala hota,
To aaj hum sharaabi naa hote...
Kaash koi hum par jaan fida karne waala hota,
To aaj hum kaatil naa hote...
Kaash koi hamare saath ghar basanewala hota,
To aaj hum beghar naa hote...
Shaayad accha hi hua ke koi bhi nahi hai,
Nahi to aaj hum shaayar naa hote...!!


^^^^^ HOPE U LIKE IT ^^^^^^

shayr bhi rahoge aap aur apko saari umeed puri karne ka mauka bhi bhagwan dega ek din
acha laga padke
sakhi

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Apr 24 07 7:20 PM

SUKRIYA SAKI JI APKE SUPPORT KE LIYE AAP SAB KI DUYAE HI TOHAIN ...........


EK SHER AUR LIJIYE ======

Jinko rahe dhundte dar-bader...
vo Dil ke reh-numa nikle...
ab Tanhaai hum se nahi katt ti..
vo mile to humari JAAN nikle...




●๋•●๋•∂ιℓ мαιη υмєє∂ кι кιяαη αвнι внι вαкι нαιη ....
вαѕ ℓσн נαℓαηє кα ιηтzααя нαιη●๋•●๋• ......

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Apr 24 07 7:29 PM

Zaroori nahi bhai mere ki dard se hi insaan shayar banta hai koi Pyaar mein bhi shayar banta hai to koi aese hi ban jata hai


Pyaar ka pyala aur sharaab kaafi ache se pesh kiya hai aapne...dil ko acha laga padhna...daad hazir hai

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Apr 24 07 9:03 PM

QUOTE (mayur_sharma @ April 24, 2007 07:03 pm)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ek aur Sher likh raha hu !!!!!!!!!

Kaash koi prem ki pyali pilane waala hota,
To aaj hum sharaabi naa hote...
Kaash koi hum par jaan fida karne waala hota,
To aaj hum kaatil naa hote...
Kaash koi hamare saath ghar basanewala hota,
To aaj hum beghar naa hote...
Shaayad accha hi hua ke koi bhi nahi hai,
Nahi to aaj hum shaayar naa hote...!!


^^^^^ HOPE U LIKE IT ^^^^^^

wah jee waah...bohot pasand aayi aapki ye choti si rachna mayur...bilkul sach kaha gar gam na hote to hum na hote na hi ye shayri hoti...well said...keep sharing ur thoughts..god bless.

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Apr 24 07 9:11 PM

kassh kakaha koi jawaab hota hai sweetu bhai jaan

kassh ki koi hota kassh ki aisa ho pata

suno is par kuch kahte hain


khwaab hoon ek khawaab ki tabir nahi hoti yaha
har kisi ki aap jaisi taqdeer nahi hoti yaha
jiske har lafz main pyaar hi pyara bhara rahe
zindgi ki waisi koi tasveer nahi hoti yahan


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Apr 24 07 9:31 PM

Kya baat hai aapki soch ki! sach, shaayari toh tanhaai mangti hai....khamoshi maangti hai.....veerangi chaahti hai.....iss anmol khazaaney kee keemat toh chukaani hi hoti hai.great reading u, Mayur.

Kitni Milti hai meri ghazalon se soorat uski!
Log usey mera mehboob samajhte honge...

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Apr 25 07 1:29 AM

QUOTE (mayur_sharma @ April 24, 2007 07:20 pm)
SUKRIYA SAKI JI APKE SUPPORT KE LIYE AAP SAB KI DUYAE HI TOHAIN ...........


EK SHER AUR LIJIYE ======

Jinko rahe dhundte dar-bader...
vo Dil ke reh-numa nikle...
ab Tanhaai hum se nahi katt ti..
vo mile to humari JAAN nikle...

bahut hi payara raha ye sher to

last line ne dil chhoo liya sakhi ka
pure no de diye hai meine to

daad kubul kare

sakhi

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Apr 25 07 1:38 PM

AAP SAB KE SATH KE LIYE SUKHRIYA AACHA KARTA HU .. YEH HI LIKHTA RAHUNGA JO AAP SAB KO PASAND AYE ....

AUR SAKI JI PURE NO. DENE LIYE SIR JUKATA HU....

WELL EK SHER AUR ========

Koi kuch bhi na kahay to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja kay koi kahay hum lay lenge zahar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dain meri khata kya hai.......

HOPE U ALL LIKE WHAT EVER I WROTE



●๋•●๋•∂ιℓ мαιη υмєє∂ кι кιяαη αвнι внι вαкι нαιη ....
вαѕ ℓσн נαℓαηє кα ιηтzααя нαιη●๋•●๋• ......

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