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Apr 24 07 5:06 PM

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Mai tumhe bebafa nahi kahta magar tum babafa nahi nikle,

sath tum chalte na chalte ye baat deegar thi,
maine aawaaz di tum ghar se hi nahi nikle.

aisi ulfat ki ibaadat to nahi ho sakti,
jab use paas se dekho,to vo nafrat nikle.

kal ki mahfil mein kisi ne liya tha naam tera,
lakh roka tah magar phir mere aansu nikle.

kaun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.

mai tumhe bebafa nahi kahta,magar tum babafa nahi nikle,


--Aryan

Sath kuch door chalo sabko dikhane ke liye,
phir kisi mod pe chupke se juda ho jana...

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Apr 24 07 5:18 PM

kaun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.



Wah.....bohat khoob


aryan


Aapne dard ko bhi itna khoobsurat bana diya hai ki dard ki kahani hote hue bhi wah wah nikalti hai..ehsaas aur alfaaz ka bohat acha use kya hai...daad hazir hai


apna khayal rakhe

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Apr 24 07 5:49 PM

QUOTE (aryanvishu @ April 24, 2007 05:06 pm)
Mai tumhe bebafa nahi kahta magar tum babafa nahi nikle,

sath tum chalte na chalte ye baat deegar thi,
maine aawaaz di tum ghar se hi nahi nikle.

aisi ulfat ki ibaadat to nahi ho sakti,
jab use paas se dekho,to vo nafrat nikle.

kal ki mahfil mein kisi ne liya tha naam tera,
lakh roka tah magar phir mere aansu nikle.

kaun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.

mai tumhe bebafa nahi kahta,magar tum babafa nahi nikle,


--Aryan

sath tum chalte na chalte ye baat deegar thi,
maine aawaaz di tum ghar se hi nahi nikle.


bahut khoob aaryan jii


waah

dilip

Jindgii jane ko thii
humen mout ko bula liya
kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya

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Apr 25 07 3:24 PM

hello arya ji

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.
wahhhhhh bahut hi umda

dil ke dard ko bahut achhey se bayan kya he

keep writing
take care
bye

user posted image

Mangi thi mene tumse mohabbat ki zindagi
Tumne to zindagi ko mohabbat bana diya

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Apr 25 07 9:20 PM

QUOTE (Diggaj Dave @ April 24, 2007 05:18 pm)
kaun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.



Wah.....bohat khoob


aryan


Aapne dard ko bhi itna khoobsurat bana diya hai ki dard ki kahani hote hue bhi wah wah nikalti hai..ehsaas aur alfaaz ka bohat acha use kya hai...daad hazir hai


apna khayal rakhe


sukriya review ke liye.aage likhne ke liye hausala milta hai tab jab koi bhi najm ki tarif karta hai..........

tc
bye
--Aryan

Sath kuch door chalo sabko dikhane ke liye,
phir kisi mod pe chupke se juda ho jana...

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May 1 07 12:15 PM

QUOTE (khushi @ 25, 2007 03:24 pm)
hello arya ji

tumne armaano ko masla tha kabhi kadmo tale,
usi manjar ko yaad karke jakhm bah nikle.
wahhhhhh bahut hi umda

dil ke dard ko bahut achhey se bayan kya he

keep writing
take care
bye

khusi ji namaskar

aapka review padhkar bahut accha laga......
sukriya

tc
bye
Aryan

Sath kuch door chalo sabko dikhane ke liye,
phir kisi mod pe chupke se juda ho jana...

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May 1 07 3:40 PM

aun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

aryan ji

bahut acha likha hai apne...bahut khub raha apko padna
meri daad kubul kare
sakhi

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May 2 07 9:09 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ 01, 2007 03:40 pm)
aun humdard hai ye dard sunaye kisko,
jinko rahbar chuna tha,vo to be raham nikle.

aryan ji

bahut acha likha hai apne...bahut khub raha apko padna
meri daad kubul kare
sakhi

NAMASKAR SAKHI JI

khubsurat se jabab k liye dil ki gahraiyon se sukriya...............aage bhi rahega mujhe intzaar aapki pratikriyayon ka............

apna khyaal rakein................................

--Aryan

Sath kuch door chalo sabko dikhane ke liye,
phir kisi mod pe chupke se juda ho jana...

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May 3 07 9:53 PM

yes sahi hai

isliye aapke liye

har baat ka izhar ho zarri tho nahi
usne kiya inkar, inkar ho zarrori tho nahi,
tum usse bewafa kyu khete ho dilip,
har bewafa kare izhar e wafa zaroori tho nahi.......

take care
faiq

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May 4 07 8:59 PM

QUOTE (faiq @ May 03, 2007 09:53 pm)
yes sahi hai

isliye aapke liye

har baat ka izhar ho zarri tho nahi
usne kiya inkar, inkar ho zarrori tho nahi,
tum usse bewafa kyu khete ho dilip,
har bewafa kare izhar e wafa zaroori tho nahi.......

take care
faiq

aapke jabab ke liye sukriya
ek ehsaas aisa bhi...........

vo mehraba to izhaar kyo nahi karta,
vo badguma hai to sau baar aajmaye mujhe.
mai apni hi hayaat mein neelam ho raha hu dost,
Gum-e-hayaat se kah do khareed laaye mujhe....
.......

---Aryan

Sath kuch door chalo sabko dikhane ke liye,
phir kisi mod pe chupke se juda ho jana...

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