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Apr 7 07 6:51 PM

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Mahal yeh Khuwabon ka
Chandni udhey
Sadiyon ke is ehsas ko
Jila deta hai
Jis ke liye her zi rooh
Baghawat kar jati hai
Is sange mar mar ke
Qaidkhaney main
Hazaaron zinda roohain qaid hain
Jo kabhi suraj ki nikharti shuaun main
Kabhi chand ki thandi kirnoon main
Apne tadapte jazbon ko
Thandak pahunchati hain
Her kaso nakas (Her koi)
Jagti aankhon main
Zinda khuwab jagaye
Kafe afsoos maltey huye (Hath)
Apne Zindaan ko laut jata hai (Qaidkhana)
Ke Kaash
AIK QABR MAIN
RAHNE KO JAGAH MIL JATI
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Apr 7 07 7:44 PM

QUOTE (javedarshad @ April 07, 2007 06:51 pm)
Mahal yeh Khuwabon ka
Chandni udhey
Sadiyon ke is ehsas ko
Jila deta hai
Jis ke liye her zi rooh
Baghawat kar jati hai
Is sange mar mar ke
Qaidkhaney main
Hazaaron zinda roohain qaid hain
Jo kabhi suraj ki nikharti shuaun main
Kabhi chand ki thandi kirnoon main
Apne tadapte jazbon ko
Thandak pahunchati hain
Her kaso nakas (Her koi)
Jagti aankhon main
Zinda khuwab jagaye
Kafe afsoos maltey huye (Hath)
Apne Zindaan ko laut jata hai (Qaidkhana)
Ke Kaash
AIK QABR MAIN
RAHNE KO JAGAH MIL JATI

waaaaaaaaaah kya baat hai..pehla kalaam aapka likha hua padha..dil main ghar kar gaya..bohot khoobsurat lafzon ke jaal main likhi hue tehreer...dil ko chu gai...behad dilchasp andaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka...umeed hai aage bhi padhne ko milega...welcome to this shayarfamily..god bless.

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Sep 2 07 9:06 AM

wah kya baat hai is nazm tak bahut se logon ko ana chahiye kyon ki is men bahut sachha shayer chipa hai meree koshsih hai aage to parhen walon par hai

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Sep 2 07 10:50 AM

bahut bahut khuubsurat javed saahab....


chupchaap sulagtii chingaari
mohtaaj hawaa key jhonkey kii

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Sep 3 07 7:50 PM

taaz mahal ko kitne ankoh andaaj main likh diya hai javed ji dono hi to pahloon hai magar sab ek hi dekhte hain


ek bhaut hi gahra kalaam aapka

Deri se aane ke liye maafi chahungi

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Sep 5 07 7:48 PM

Shrddha ji
Adaab

aap ki muhabbat ka main pahle hi se qail hun
aap ne is ko khood ker nikal ker comments diye

shukria


javed

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