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Apr 1 07 1:27 AM

QUOTE (Nazish313 @ March 18, 2007 10:59 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

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wwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun

bahaut umda bahaut hi umda her lafz ,her shair ,her band

dil main uter gia
ye naya andaz bahaut hi acch a laga,daad hazir hai dost
yuhi likhhte rahaye
with
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nazish

nazish ji
bahut bahut shukriya itni lambi wah ke liye dear
apko yahn wah karte paya to dil khush ho gya aur naye rang bharna safal hua hai mera apni rachna mein.

bas hamesha yuhi lambi na sahi chhoti ya moti kaisi bhi wah karte rahna ok

sakhi

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#22 [url]

Apr 1 07 2:57 PM

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wowwwwwwwwwwwww meri choti bahen ki ankho mein yeh sapna bahut acha laga. naya andaaz aap par sadaa bana rahe. dilse daad haizr hai kabool karain.

i'm so happy to see in this color of love sis , its the best poem i read there is so much softness. keep writing Sakhi. God less u and all others who motivated you to write. take care.

nira


nira didi
apki ankho mein mein ye sapna sazana chahti hun
ek pyara sa sapna apki ankho mein dekhna chahati hun
saari khushiyaa apko mil jayee isi jeevan mein
dil se ye duaa mein apko apni dena chahti hun

shukriya didi aapne ise pasand kiya ur bhagwan se dua hai ye sapna jldi meri didi bhi dekh hi le:)
sakhi

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#23 [url]

Apr 1 07 3:02 PM

QUOTE (shrddha @ March 19, 2007 11:21 pm)
Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


arry wah meri chhoti gudiya pyaar main bhaut bhaut pyara likha hai bhole se ehsaas hai

kuch ham bhi kahte hain pyaar ki baat aayi hai to

kitna pyaara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khas hai
tere wazood ki chamak se jagamaga raha
jaise dhrati ki chanda bhaut pass hai

tum jo chhu lete ho dheere se
gudgudate hamare jazbaat hai
kitna pyara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khaas hai

kitna pyaara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khas hai
tere wazood ki chamak se jagamaga raha
jaise dhrati ki chanda bhaut pass hai

tum jo chhu lete ho dheere se
gudgudate hamare jazbaat hai
kitna pyara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khaas hai

didi bahut pyara reply diya apne bahut khub ...dil baag baag ho gya hai mera..

aapka shukriya jo pyaar e likhe jajbaatoin mein apne jajbaat shamil kiye aur saraha

yuhi hoshla badhati rahna
sakhi pyar ke sath justju/458.gif

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#24 [url]

Apr 1 07 11:44 PM

QUOTE (aarzoo @ March 20, 2007 02:10 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

waahhhhhhhh sakhii gudiyaaa kitne meethe ehsaas dua hai ke is ehsaas ke rang zindagi main bhar jaain...dua hai ke har khushi muyyasar ho....do take care n god blesss....bohot khoobsurat likha hai khush raho.

didi
bahut acha lagta hai jab aap sabhi ka pyaa dulaar yahn mujhe milta hai aur mera likha hua apko pasand aata hai...
shukriya di pyar se sath dene ke liye hoshla badane ke liye..
aapka sath rahega to sakhi dukhi nahi rahegi na khush rahegi..
with love sakhi

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Apr 10 07 4:12 PM

QUOTE (dheer @ March 20, 2007 10:05 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

nice piece of work!!!

shukriya dheerji

mera kaam pasand aaya apko

sakhi

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Apr 10 07 4:22 PM

QUOTE (tadap @ March 22, 2007 01:42 pm)
jo tu chaahe woh kar le..
bhagwaan ko bol aaya hun
jo bikta hai mandir mein sawa rupiye mein ..
use noton se tol aaya hun


aadaab arz hai

wah kya baat kahi hai sameer ji

jo tu chaahe woh kar le..
bhagwaan ko bol aaya hun
jo bikta hai mandir mein sawa rupiye mein ..
use noton se tol aaya hun

par dost

bhagwaan ko becha ya kahrida nahi ja sakta hai

isliye plsss
yuhi sath dena
sakhi

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#28 [url]

Apr 12 07 11:48 AM

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namaskar sakhi ji
bhut achi peshkas hai aise hi likh tey rehey

aur
aap sub ko padpana meri khus naseebi hai
pad ke reply naa karooon badi batmiji hai

keep writing and keeeeeeeeeeeeep smiling always be happy


sagar


sagar ji kaha ho aap aaj kal

kaise ho??

shukriya

aapne saraha acha laga.
aaur apne reply diya chalo badtamizi nahi ki na dene kee reply:)
sher acha likha hai

sakhi

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Apr 12 07 11:54 PM

QUOTE (raahi_akela @ March 22, 2007 08:10 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun[/SIZE]


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

is naye andaz me doobkar bahut achha likha aapne sakhi...khush raho....ye andaz-e-bayaN pasand aaya......mai agar kahta to kuch istarah kahta.....>>>>>

jee chahta hai ki mai raat ka ek lamha chunu
us lamhe ko mai pyar ke khwaboN se bharu
chandni bikher duN kuch is tarah har su
sang chandni ke taaroN ki baarat mai chunu


meri ek koshish,agar pasand aaye to batana..
tumhare jazbaat aur ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai...nice one my sweeet sister Sakhi..God bless you

bhiya shukriya jo apko ye andaz pasand aay mera

apne jo likha acha laga mujhe.

apka sath yuhi bana rahe hamesha.

sakhi

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#30 [url]

Apr 13 07 12:14 AM

Fantastic One Sakhi....!!

Itna Chahati ho tum jise.....
Jee karta hai main bhi uski Kismat padoon......

Likhwaaon kuch Tehreer me bhi aisi Khuda se.....
Ke kabhi tere harr Sawaal ka Jawaab me banoon......

Khawabon ki Mashakkat se kaho Sanam.....
Me bhi ek Pyar bhara Sapna Chunuun........!!!!!!

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Apr 13 07 4:08 PM

QUOTE (!!_Badnaam_Shayar_!& @ April 13, 2007 12:14 am)
Fantastic One Sakhi....!!

Itna Chahati ho tum jise.....
Jee karta hai main bhi uski Kismat padoon......

Likhwaaon kuch Tehreer me bhi aisi Khuda se.....
Ke kabhi tere harr Sawaal ka Jawaab me banoon......

Khawabon ki Mashakkat se kaho Sanam.....
Me bhi ek Pyar bhara Sapna Chunuun........!!!!!!

aha kya nas diya hai wah justju/icon_clap.gif

Itna Chahati ho tum jise.....
Jee karta hai main bhi uski Kismat padoon......

Likhwaaon kuch Tehreer me bhi aisi Khuda se.....
Ke kabhi tere harr Sawaal ka Jawaab me banoon......

Khawabon ki Mashakkat se kaho Sanam.....
Me bhi ek Pyar bhara Sapna Chunuun........!!!!!!

acha laga

shukriya yuhi sath dena
sakhi

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#33 [url]

Apr 13 07 4:37 PM

Wah Wah..!!!!!!!!! Behad khubsoorat Likha hai aapne Gaurav bhai.. !!!!

Sakhi ji Ab jawab dijiye Aap.........

**~** ManN **~**

"Hum Dil to kya Rooh main Utar Jayenge,
Aap Chaahoge agar Chaahne Walon ki Tarah"

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Apr 13 07 8:10 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)




bahoot badiya Sakhi..... padkar dil khush ho gaya.... bahoot aacha likha hai tumne.....


keep up......


luv u....

tumhai Sakhi...


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Apr 16 07 4:37 PM

QUOTE (!!_Badnaam_Shayar_!& @ April 13, 2007 04:12 pm)
Ji Jaroor Saath toh hum hamesha hai....Shukriya tumhe Pasand aya....!!

acha likha isiye pasand aaya.

sath dete rahoge khushi hui janke.

sakhi

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Apr 18 07 4:48 PM

QUOTE (vicky @ April 13, 2007 04:37 pm)
Wah Wah..!!!!!!!!! Behad khubsoorat Likha hai aapne Gaurav bhai.. !!!!

Sakhi ji Ab jawab dijiye Aap.........

de diya jahan dena tha vicky ji apne galat jlikha hai...
dekh tolete kahn reply de rahe ho

sakhi

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Apr 18 07 4:52 PM

QUOTE (ALONE BAD @ April 13, 2007 08:10 pm)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
 




bahoot badiya Sakhi..... padkar dil khush ho gaya.... bahoot aacha likha hai tumne.....


keep up......


luv u....

tumhai Sakhi...



alone ji

shukriya aapne saraha ..

love u to dear meri sakhi

sakhi with love

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#38 [url]

Aug 12 07 2:46 AM

beeeeautiful.

kya baat hai. sach me ye kavita bahut bahut bahut hi accchi likhi hai aap ne sakhi ji... bahut hi acchi.

dilii daad qubul kijiyega.

-Ziyaad.
Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad.

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#39 [url]

Aug 12 07 10:44 AM

Bahut khoob Sakhi ji bahut hi sundar aur khoobsurat ehsas aur
utni hi khubsurat rachna.......
Nice one.........

Well done is better than well said ......
Dheerendra Kr. Tripathi

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Aug 13 07 12:15 PM

"Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n"

@ sakhi ji gustakhi kar rahaa hoon aapki is nazm ki saari jaan bas mujhe is shair main lagi/ baaki ye kewal mera nazariya hai/
kul mila ke achhi rachna hai

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