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aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif
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Mar 18 07 1:20 AM

har tarah se bahut khoob soort kahayl layee ho bahut achee rachana hai wah bahut achha laga parh ke
Anil

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ye ram kee rahamat hai raheem kee ramayan
tum jis ko kahate ho masoom ka pagalpan

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Mar 18 07 2:07 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

SAKHI

BHUT KHUB

AAHSAS KO BAHUT HI GAHRAI SE LIKHA

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

DAAD HAZIR HE justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

SAKHI HUM TUMHE BAHUT KHUSH DEKHNA CHAHTE HE SADA


JINDAGY TMHARI PHOOLO KI BAGIYA SE BHI SUNDER HE justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif


HUM KHUSH HUYE TUMNE YESA SUNDER KHAYAL LIKHA justju/653.gif justju/653.gif justju/653.gif

PYARI SAKHI NE AARYA KE LESSON ME SUT PRATISAT MARKS LAYI

SHAKUN PANCHHI LAYE AAS
SHUKOON KA LAYE AHSAS

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Mar 18 07 6:40 AM

hi sakhi,

sabse pehle to aapka ye naye andaaz main likhna bahut hi pyara laga, you have been an outstanding student. justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

ek baat kahun, mujhe sab se achcha laga ki aapne mere kahe par vichar kiya aur dekho ek sapna bun liya.achche sapne dekhte rehna humesha.....positive thinking life main bahut help karti hai and i'm glad aapne apni is rachna main ek aas dikhaiye hai.

rachna aapki behad pyari hai....May God Bless You and may you always be successful.

sirf ab ek aur baat aisi hi aashaon ki, umeedo ki baatain likhte raho...kush raho


regards
aarya

regards
aarya


khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Mar 18 07 8:58 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

sakhii ji namaskar

ek bahut hii umda kalam likha hai aapne har ek ehsas bahut hoob hai

waise to mujhe esa karne ka koii haq nahi per fir bhiii ek word jo mujhe kuch jam nahi raha main use edit kar raha hoon...... aapko bura to lagega per main muaafii ka talab gaar hoon..........

Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bunu.N
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu


Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se Usko phir apni in bahoin mein zakadoo.N
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharu.N

kalam bahut hii umda hai daad hazir hai..........

ek baar fir se muaafii chahta hoon.n

tc

bye

aapka dost

dilip

Jindgii jane ko thii
humen mout ko bula liya
kya kare.n humse akele raha nahi gaya

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Mar 18 07 10:59 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
SAKHI Jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun

bahaut umda bahaut hi umda her lafz ,her shair ,her band

dil main uter gia
ye naya andaz bahaut hi acch a laga,daad hazir hai dost
yuhi likhhte rahaye
with
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nazish

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Mar 19 07 10:55 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

wowwwwwwwwwwwww meri choti bahen ki ankho mein yeh sapna bahut acha laga. naya andaaz aap par sadaa bana rahe. dilse daad haizr hai kabool karain.

i'm so happy to see in this color of love sis , its the best poem i read there is so much softness. keep writing Sakhi. God less u and all others who motivated you to write. take care.

nira

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Mar 19 07 11:21 PM

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


arry wah meri chhoti gudiya pyaar main bhaut bhaut pyara likha hai bhole se ehsaas hai

kuch ham bhi kahte hain pyaar ki baat aayi hai to

kitna pyaara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khas hai
tere wazood ki chamak se jagamaga raha
jaise dhrati ki chanda bhaut pass hai

tum jo chhu lete ho dheere se
gudgudate hamare jazbaat hai
kitna pyara tumhara ehsaas hai
tum ho to har lamha bhaut khaas hai

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Mar 20 07 2:10 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

waahhhhhhhh sakhii gudiyaaa kitne meethe ehsaas dua hai ke is ehsaas ke rang zindagi main bhar jaain...dua hai ke har khushi muyyasar ho....do take care n god blesss....bohot khoobsurat likha hai khush raho.

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Mar 20 07 2:17 AM

wah bahut khoob sorat andaz mein kaha hai

archana

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Mar 20 07 10:05 AM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

nice piece of work!!!

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Mar 22 07 1:30 PM

QUOTE (masoomshayer @ March 18, 2007 01:20 am)
har tarah se bahut khoob soort kahayl layee ho bahut achee rachana hai wah bahut achha laga parh ke
Anil

har tarah se apka shukriya.....anil ji

khyaal pasand aaye likhna safal hua

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Mar 22 07 1:42 PM

jo tu chaahe woh kar le..
bhagwaan ko bol aaya hun
jo bikta hai mandir mein sawa rupiye mein ..
use noton se tol aaya hun


aadaab arz hai

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Mar 22 07 6:35 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

namaskar sakhi ji
bhut achi peshkas hai aise hi likh tey rehey

aur
aap sub ko padpana meri khus naseebi hai
pad ke reply naa karooon badi batmiji hai


keep writing and keeeeeeeeeeeeep smiling always be happy






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बता ए संग दिल क्यों मैने उसको दगा दी

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Mar 22 07 8:10 PM

QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun[/SIZE]


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

is naye andaz me doobkar bahut achha likha aapne sakhi...khush raho....ye andaz-e-bayaN pasand aaya......mai agar kahta to kuch istarah kahta.....>>>>>

jee chahta hai ki mai raat ka ek lamha chunu
us lamhe ko mai pyar ke khwaboN se bharu
chandni bikher duN kuch is tarah har su
sang chandni ke taaroN ki baarat mai chunu


meri ek koshish,agar pasand aaye to batana..
tumhare jazbaat aur ehsaas bahut khoobsurat hai...nice one my sweeet sister Sakhi..God bless you

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DEKHNE WALE TU MERI MUSKURAHAT PE NA JAA
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Mar 23 07 12:38 PM

QUOTE (shakun @ March 18, 2007 02:07 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

SAKHI

BHUT KHUB

AAHSAS KO BAHUT HI GAHRAI SE LIKHA

DIL KO CHOO GAYA

DAAD HAZIR HE justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

SAKHI HUM TUMHE BAHUT KHUSH DEKHNA CHAHTE HE SADA


JINDAGY TMHARI PHOOLO KI BAGIYA SE BHI SUNDER HE justju/rose.gif justju/rose.gif


HUM KHUSH HUYE TUMNE YESA SUNDER KHAYAL LIKHA justju/653.gif justju/653.gif justju/653.gif

PYARI SAKHI NE AARYA KE LESSON ME SUT PRATISAT MARKS LAYI

didi ap sabhi ke sath mein bahut khush hun..aap sabka pyaar bahut pyara hai.
shukriya hoshla badane ke liye bahut bahut apka.

sakhi with love

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Mar 23 07 12:41 PM

QUOTE (Amaan @ March 18, 2007 04:23 am)
umda khiyalooN k saath acha andaaz Sakhi ji, good work

amaan ji khyaal pasand aaye shukriya dost

apka sath hame yuhi milta rahega to khyaal umdaa bante hi rahenge na

sakhi

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Mar 23 07 12:54 PM

QUOTE (aarya @ March 18, 2007 06:40 am)
hi sakhi,

sabse pehle to aapka ye naye andaaz main likhna bahut hi pyara laga, you have been an outstanding student. justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif justju/icon_clap.gif

ek baat kahun, mujhe sab se achcha laga ki aapne mere kahe par vichar kiya aur dekho ek sapna bun liya.achche sapne dekhte rehna humesha.....positive thinking life main bahut help karti hai and i'm glad aapne apni is rachna main ek aas dikhaiye hai.

rachna aapki behad pyari hai....May God Bless You and may you always be successful.

sirf ab ek aur baat aisi hi aashaon ki, umeedo ki baatain likhte raho...kush raho


regards
aarya

my dear aarya

aapka student ab sahi bana jab apne puri mehnat ki uske sath...warna woh ganda bacha hai
apko new andaaz pyara laga dil khush ho gya warna mein to dar rahi thi ki fail hui to kya hoga meri to watt laga denge shukkun di aur aarya milke... isliye mujhe kuch karna hi hoga haan yaisa socha tab jake kkuch kar saki...

rachna apko pasand aai bahut khushi hui justju/246.gif kyun ki me pass ho gaii hun...aage bhi yaisa likhne ki poori koshish karungi..

yuhi sath dena dost

love u

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Mar 31 07 2:56 AM

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sakhii ji namaskar

ek bahut hii umda kalam likha hai aapne har ek ehsas bahut hoob hai

waise to mujhe esa karne ka koii haq nahi per fir bhiii ek word jo mujhe kuch jam nahi raha main use edit kar raha hoon...... aapko bura to lagega per main muaafii ka talab gaar hoon..........

Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bunu.N
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu


Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se Usko phir apni in bahoin mein zakadoo.N
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharu.N

kalam bahut hii umda hai daad hazir hai..........

ek baar fir se muaafii chahta hoon.n

tc

bye

aapka dost

dilip


dilip ji
dost hke itni mafi mangte ho kyun???
are jab apko laga ki chang ho sakta hai to apne bataya acha laga mujhe.
har koi thodi hi batata hai kisi ko.

ye to hak banta hai dost ka ki agar kuch thik na lage to bata de..isme bura manne ki koi baat nahi hai.
shukriya dost aap yahn aaye aur saraha

yuhi kamiya batana aur sath dena hameshaaaaaaaaaa

sakhi

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Apr 1 07 1:25 AM

QUOTE (Nazish313 @ March 18, 2007 10:59 am)
QUOTE (sakhi1909 @ March 18, 2007 01:02 am)
Dosto
aaj mein aap sabhi ke liye ke naye rang mein doob kar likhi hui rachna laai hun...naya isliye kah rahi hun mein aam taur par yaisa khyaal likh nahi pati hun....

par aarya ji shukun di aur anil ji...aap logo ka mein aabhar vayakt karti hun jo aap logo ne mujhe ye vichar vayakt karne ke liye kaha ya yaisa kah loo ki aap sabke aagarh ko talnaa shayad mushkil tha isliye ye mushkil topic mein hal karke ye rachna bana paai..
aap logoin ko hi is rachna ko samarpit kar rahi hun pyaar ke sath...asha hai aap sabhi ise apni salah se jarur nawajenge...


pyaar ka ek sapna chunu


Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun
Chandani biakhara dun har taraf kuch is tarah se
Sang mein chandani ke taroin ki baarat chunu

Lene aaye mujhe koi taaroin ki barat ke sang
Mujh par chad jaye phir bas ek uska hi rang
Us lamhe ko teri baahoin mein gujar dun mein
Us ek lamhe mein ye jindagi nisaar dun mein

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera  waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun


aap sabhi ki sakhi with love justju/643.gif

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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wwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Pyar ka meeta sa ek har taraf se raag uthey
Koi sajinda naa ho phir bhi kai saaz bajey.n
Har taraf faila ek khushhaal mast mausam ho
Kaisa hoga who Milan jismein saare rang bharun

Pyar jo tera mile mujhko to ye mera waada hai
Pyaar se tujhko mein phir apni in bahoin mein rakhun
Isliye Jee chahta hai mera raat ka ek tukda chunu
Us tukde ko mein pyaar ke khwabo se bharun

bahaut umda bahaut hi umda her lafz ,her shair ,her band

dil main uter gia
ye naya andaz bahaut hi acch a laga,daad hazir hai dost
yuhi likhhte rahaye
with
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nazish

nazish ji
bahut bahut shukriya itni lambi wah ke liye dear
apko yahn wah karte paya to dil khush ho gya aur naye rang bharna safal hua hai mera apni rachna mein.

bas hamesha yuhi lambi na sahi chhoti ya moti kaisi bhi wah karte rahna ok

sakhi

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