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Dec 23 06 5:09 AM

QUOTE (DHAVAL @ December 22, 2006 12:17 pm)
nira ji ko dhaval ka namskaar

wah nira ji kya baat kahi hai aapne apaki soch wakhei main umda hai apane aaj ek ped ki soch ko bayan karke dil ko khus ho gaya jee bahot hi sachhahi hai isme ek ped kya scohta hai har pal ue aapki peshkasko padh ke mehsus kar sakte hai hum sab log aur apaki is peshkas mese kuch lines mere dil ko chhu gaui jo main yaha niche darsha raha hun

Kisi ka naam likha hai muj par
Kisi ka mitt.te dekhta hoon
Kitne saalon se yunhi khada hoon
Kitne saalon se mausam se lada hoon


bahot hi khub aur bahot hi sahi

ek sher arz karta hun jo zehen me aa gaya mere

naam likhte haiN aur naam mitte haiN
ped to bas yuhiN beZubaaN khade rehte haiN


daad hazir hai kubul kijiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

Dhaval ji aapko yeh nazm pasand aahi mera likhna safal huya. aap sab ka saath bahut himmat deta hai. aapki daad ka shukriya.

nira