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Sep 26 06 4:36 PM

QUOTE (ranjana @ September 26, 2006 11:00 am)
QUOTE (Harash Mahajan @ September 25, 2006 06:30 pm)
______Rock Garden

Maine suna hai
Kisi kalakaar ne
Tooti our bekaar
vastuaoon se
"rock Garden" banaker
Ek darshaneeya sathaan bana diya hai.

Main us se milna chahta hoon
Main apne saare ahsaas
use de doonga
us se woh duniya
ke liye koi sangrahiniya kaarya
ker sakega.

Dil toh mera
"Rock" hai hi,
Kya us par
Ahsaas ka garden
bana sakega?

Harash

harsh aapki yeh poem mujhe sach mein dil se pasand aayi ...

bahut khubsurti se aapne isko lafazo mein prioya hai

wondrful .....

Ranjana ji main aapka kin shabdoN se shukrya ada kerooN.....aap logoN ke pyaar maiN hi itni takat hai ki Lafz kis tarah tareer banker aap sab ke paas parose jaate haiN....khuda jaanta hai....Ranjana ji....ye kalam kab kis tarah chalti hai mujhe bhi maloom nahi....Gazal meri Vidha hai....Kavita maiN apne bhavoN ko apne paas rakhne ke liye likhta hooN....bas yuiN hi maine is jagah site par likh di...in ahsaasoN ko maiN gazal ka roop na de saka....our ek baar diya bhi tha...par iska aser jata raha!!...maiN toh is Kavita ka jawaab aapse umeed kerta tha....par shayad.....aapka man abhi use post kerne maiN nahi hai....Bahoot bahoot shukriya Ranjana ji........